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~* Dil ki kitaab ek arse se pade pade dhool ho gayi *~ - 9th December 2011, 08:49 PM
Sabhi dosto ko salaam, namaste, saadar-pranaam !!

Kai dino ke baad fir se ek chhoti si koshish aap logo ke saamne rakh raha hoon, umeed karta hoon aap logo apni raay se ise nawaajenge ...

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Teri jafaayein bhi humko dil se qubool ho gayi
Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
Magar ye zindagi Chaar din me hi wasool ho gayi

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

Koi aata bhi nahi koi sawaa.nrta bhi nahi
Dil ki kitaab ek arse se pade pade dhool ho gayi

Tumhe aaftaab ki chaah, yahaan ek adnaa sa ~Deep~
Tumhe bhi lagta hoga Zau mein ek Lau fizool ho gayi


Zau- Sun Light
Lau - Diye ki lau, Diya-baati
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Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

Waahh sabse khoobsurat sher hamaari jaanib se ise karte haiN.. mashsllahh bahot acchaaa likhte hain aap,.. bas alfaazoN ke talaffuz ke liye majeed khayaal rakkheN.. All the very best for your bright future... khush rahen

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Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
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Waahh sabse khoobsurat sher hamaari jaanib se ise karte haiN.. mashsllahh bahot acchaaa likhte hain aap,.. bas alfaazoN ke talaffuz ke liye majeed khayaal rakkheN.. All the very best for your bright future... khush rahen

Shaad..
Shaad bhai mai aapka dil se shukargujaar hoon ki aapko khayal achhe lage ... magar aise baat nahi banegi... meri aapse darkhwast hai ki aap mujhe sudharein aur mere galat talaffuz ko sahi karein ... Plzzz it's a request ... nahi to fir dobara yehi galti dorahi jaayegi...

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Bhai aap beshaq bahot hi khoob likh rahe hain,.. main continously aapko padhta aaya hoon aur aapke khayaal mujhe behad mutassir karte rahe hain.. bas kuch points me jo mujhe khatakta hai wo kah denaa chahta hoon taaki agli baar se wo baaten bhi door ho jaaeN.. ummeed hai aapko buraa nahi lagegaa..


Teri jafaayein bhi humko dil se qubool ho gayi
Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

is sher me baarha hum aur main ka istemaal kiya hai jo ki shaayri ke laahze se sahi nahi maana jaata .. mukhaatib karne ke words same hone chahiye, fir chaahe wo khud ke liye hon ya kisi aur ke liye..

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

ab ho sakta hai ye galtee by mistake huii ho ya fir typing mistake.. aapke jinda-dili se mujhe Zinda dili ka gumaan hota hai.. mere khayal se post karne se pahle ek do baar gaur ki zarurat hum sab ko padtee hai aur ye bhool shaayd usi ka nateeja hai..

bas yahi ek baat kahni thii... kahin pe mujhse kuch kahne me chook hui ho to zaroor nishaan dehi kareN.. ye mera point of view tha aur ye bhi ho sakta hai ke ghalat ho.. khush rahiye....

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10th December 2011, 01:25 PM
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Sabhi dosto ko salaam, namaste, saadar-pranaam !!

Kai dino ke baad fir se ek chhoti si koshish aap logo ke saamne rakh raha hoon, umeed karta hoon aap logo apni raay se ise nawaajenge ...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Teri jafaayein bhi humko dil se qubool ho gayi
Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
Magar ye zindagi Chaar din me hi wasool ho gayi

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

Koi aata bhi nahi koi sawaa.nrta bhi nahi
Dil ki kitaab ek arse se pade pade dhool ho gayi

Tumhe aaftaab ki chaah, yahaan ek adnaa sa ~Deep~
Tumhe bhi lagta hoga Zau mein ek Lau fizool ho gayi


Zau- Sun Light
Lau - Diye ki lau, Diya-baati
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Teri jafaayein bhi humko dil se qubool ho gayi
Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
Magar ye zindagi Chaar din me hi wasool ho gayi

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

Koi aata bhi nahi koi sawaa.nrta bhi nahi
Dil ki kitaab ek arse se pade pade dhool ho gayi

Tumhe aaftaab ki chaah, yahaan ek adnaa sa ~Deep~
Tumhe bhi lagta hoga Zau mein ek Lau fizool ho gayi
Zau- Sun Light
Lau - Diye ki lau, Diya-baati
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Bhai aap beshaq bahot hi khoob likh rahe hain,.. main continously aapko padhta aaya hoon aur aapke khayaal mujhe behad mutassir karte rahe hain.. bas kuch points me jo mujhe khatakta hai wo kah denaa chahta hoon taaki agli baar se wo baaten bhi door ho jaaeN.. ummeed hai aapko buraa nahi lagegaa..


Teri jafaayein bhi humko dil se qubool ho gayi
Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

is sher me baarha hum aur main ka istemaal kiya hai jo ki shaayri ke laahze se sahi nahi maana jaata .. mukhaatib karne ke words same hone chahiye, fir chaahe wo khud ke liye hon ya kisi aur ke liye..

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

ab ho sakta hai ye galtee by mistake huii ho ya fir typing mistake.. aapke jinda-dili se mujhe Zinda dili ka gumaan hota hai.. mere khayal se post karne se pahle ek do baar gaur ki zarurat hum sab ko padtee hai aur ye bhool shaayd usi ka nateeja hai..

bas yahi ek baat kahni thii... kahin pe mujhse kuch kahne me chook hui ho to zaroor nishaan dehi kareN.. ye mera point of view tha aur ye bhi ho sakta hai ke ghalat ho.. khush rahiye....

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Shaad bhai aapne ek dam sahi pakda hai ... ye mere se galti hui hai, bilkul mai maan gaya. Aap shayad "humko" aur "Mujh se" ki baat kar rahe ho ...
Actually jab hum ek flow mein likhte hain to bas likhte chale jaate hain ... to ek do jagah kuch na kuch galat rah jaata hai ... Aage se check karke hi post karunga ...
Aur rahi baat jinda aur Zinda ki, aap sahi kah rahe ho wo hai to Zinda (Live) hi wo galti se jinda type ho gaya bhai ... actually mujhe jinda aur zinda mein khaas farak nahi lagta tha, but jab aapne kaha to gaur kiya ki haan pronounce karne me fark hai ...
Shukriyaa shaad bhai !!
Galtiyaan to bahot hongi ... par wo sudhrengi tabhi jab koi batayega ...
Thanks a lot once again !!
Aise hi aap jara hume theek karte rahiye ... Koshish karenge aur behtar likh paayein ...

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"Uff Ak" jee aapko humare khayal pasand aaye, aur humara hausla badhaya uske liye bahot bahot shukriya !!
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Takhleeq Ke Ehsaasaat AchChee HaiN ... Deep Ji !

Likhte Rahen Aur Aate RaheN Aage Bhi ... !

Nice Effort ...... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
naresh jee hausla badhaane ka bahot bahot shukriya ...

Humara thoda sa gyaan badhate rahein, hum bhi efforts lagaate rahenge ...!!

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wowwwwwww ek aur mstm mast gazal aapki taraf se....... maza aagaya padhkar JIM ji..... ye sher to bas dil ko lubha gaye.... keep writing ji.... u r improving very fast....
Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
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Teri jafaayein bhi humko dil se qubool ho gayi
Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
Magar ye zindagi Chaar din me hi wasool ho gayi

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

Koi aata bhi nahi koi sawaa.nrta bhi nahi
Dil ki kitaab ek arse se pade pade dhool ho gayi

Tumhe aaftaab ki chaah, yahaan ek adnaa sa ~Deep~
Tumhe bhi lagta hoga Zau mein ek Lau fizool ho gayi


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wowwwwwww ek aur mstm mast gazal aapki taraf se....... maza aagaya padhkar JIM ji..... ye sher to bas dil ko lubha gaye.... keep writing ji.... u r improving very fast....
Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
Magar ye zindagi Chaar din me hi wasool ho gayi

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi
Meri Ghazlon ko itni shiddat se bhi na padhiye ... kuch yaad rah gaya to mushkil ho jaayegi ... Aap hi ki lines hain, istemaal mai kar raha hoon ... :-) plz don't mind ...
Anamikaa jee aapko humari ye chhoti si peshkash achhi lagi ... aur aapne jis andaaj se saraha hai uske liye dil se bahot bahot shukrgujaar hoon !!

Aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega ... koshish rahegi aur kuch achha likh paau

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bahut khoooooooooob ... deep ji ... dil se daad .... radhe radhe .........
"Ishk ek Ibadat", pahle baat to mujhe ye aapka Id bahot pasand hai :-)
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Teri jafaayein bhi humko dil se qubool ho gayi
Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
Magar ye zindagi Chaar din me hi wasool ho gayi

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Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
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Love 8th January 2012, 05:54 AM
it should have been bahot khub bhai
hope you understood it right

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9th January 2012, 11:17 AM
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Originally Posted by jat_in_mood View Post
Sabhi dosto ko salaam, namaste, saadar-pranaam !!

Kai dino ke baad fir se ek chhoti si koshish aap logo ke saamne rakh raha hoon, umeed karta hoon aap logo apni raay se ise nawaajenge ...

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Mujh se mohabbat karna shayad teri bhool ho gayi

Maine Socha tha rahega zindagi bhar ka sath
Magar ye zindagi Chaar din me hi wasool ho gayi

Jinda-dili kise kahte hain mujhe bhi batao
Jism baaki hai Rooh to meri azeez-e-rasool ho gayi

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