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~* Teri yaad ka ek Deep *~ -
31st July 2013, 03:40 PM
Sabhi dosto ko salaam ... Namaskaar !!
Aaj bahot dino ke baad aap logo ke sath kuch share karna chah raha hoon ... Kaafi dino ke baad kuch likhne ki ichha hui, kuch khayalat dil me aaye, to kuch youn ban padi jo aapke sabhi ke sath saajha kar raha hoon... Please apni raay jaroor deejiyega ... ------------------------------------------ Teri yaad ka ek Deep har waqt dil me jalaye rakhta hoon Zahir nahi hone deta zazbaat dil me dabaye rakhta hoon Zindagi me to aate jaate hain sabhi mausam magar Dil me har waqt teri yaad ka mausam banaye rakhta hoon Kahin mujhe dekh ke maayusi ka ahsaas na ho jaaye Apne chehre pe har waqt ek muskaan lagaye rakhta hoon Mai tumhe kya de paaunga sab kuch to hai tumhare paas Bas apni duayein tumhare liye bachaye rakhta hoon Khuda kare kabhi tum maang lo humari jaan Dair na ho jaaye Bas hatheli pe Sajaye rakhta hoon ------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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1st August 2013, 09:12 AM
bahot ummdah ehsaas o alfaaz ka intekhaab kiyaa aapne Deep bhai...
arse baad aapka likha hua padhna yaqeenan bahot khushi ki baat hai, likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye, ho sake to regular ho jaaiye, hamaare kai members ko aap se bahot kuch seekhne ko milegaa.... shukriyaa Shaad............. |
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1st August 2013, 11:02 AM
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Aur rahi baat humse seekhne ki, aapko to maalum hai ... hum khudh nausikhiye hain ... hum hi aap logo se seekh rahe hain bhai ... kuch majbooriyaan rahi ki regular nahi rah paaye, iske liye maafi chahunga ... lekin apni taraf se aage ke liye koshish rahegi... Aap younhi humara hausla badhate rahe ... humko sikhate rahein... Aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa ... ------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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Zindagi Kaisee Hai Paheli
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1st August 2013, 11:08 AM
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1st August 2013, 11:49 AM
Thanks Neetu jee for appreciation...
------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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5th August 2013, 09:24 AM
ehsaashoN se labrez kalaam hai huzoor, khaas taur pe jab diye ki baat aayi aur nazar aapki display pic pe gayi to yakeen maaniye chehre pe ek muskurahat si aa gayi, aur lagne laga ki janaab ne mehsoos kar ke likha hai sab kuch... ahcha laga aapko padh ka, umeed karta hun k aap aage bhi khud ko padhne ka mauka dete raheNge...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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5th August 2013, 11:03 AM
bahut khoob....kya baat hai..dheron daad aapko
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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6th August 2013, 11:22 AM
Taish bhai hausla badhane ka bahot bahot shukriyaa ... aur jis tarah aapne padha aur diye se relate kiya wo bhi kaafi impressive hai... maine ye expect nahi kiya tha... aisa laga jaise meri chori kisi ne pakad li ho ...
Actually mai aapki tarah technically correct shayri to nahi likh paata... bas aise hi kabhi kabhi kuch khyal jo dil me ubharte hain... unhi ko shayri ki se tukbandi me pirone ki koshish karta hoon... Aap logo ko sath raha to dheere dheere aur achha likhne ki koshish karenge... Thanks once again !! Quote:
------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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6th August 2013, 11:24 AM
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Aage bhi sath dete rahein... Apna khyal rakhein... Thanks!! ------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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