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10th February 2014, 05:48 PM
Dil-e-beemaar ki unko bhi khabar ho jaaye, Merii choTii si duaa me jo asar ho jaaye. Fir kise hosh hai jeene ka ya mar jaane ka, wo mujhe dekh leN itnaa hi agar ho jaaye. Wohi khushboo ki tarah saath chalaa kartii hai, wo jo kahtii thi ke "ik aur Safar ho jaaye." Kabhi Aawaargee me tujh ko bhulaa baithe they, Ab yahi zidd hai tere koo me guzar ho jaaye. Teri yaadoN ka dhuwaaN raat bhar na sone de, Aur parwaan chadhe may* to Saher ho jaaye. [may- sharaab, jaam etc] Shaad chup chaap sahaa karte ho zakhamoN ko bahot, UTho ik roz chalo Jange-Badar ho jaaye... Shaad... |
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11th February 2014, 01:51 PM
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Kya baat hai Sameerbhai............... Har-ek shae'r laajawaab hai, miya................. bahot bahot badhaayaaN aapko............. ~Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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12th February 2014, 10:10 AM
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12th February 2014, 11:35 AM
bahut ache Sameer bhai ,badi achi lagi aapki ghazal...
hum ye dua karte hain ki aapki duaaon ka unpe asar ho jaye. sanjay sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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12th February 2014, 06:34 PM
Waaoo Shaad Shab Umdaa ehasaas hain......................................
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13th February 2014, 11:52 PM
Shaad Khoobsurat rangon se saji rachna parh acha laga.Keep up the good work .Keep writing Regards Di
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bahot bahot shukriyaa aapki duaaoN ka sanjay saahab.... jaankar bahot khushi hui ke ye rachnaa aapko pasand aayee... aate rahiyega saath banaae rakhiye.. shukriyaa Shaad... |
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14th February 2014, 05:06 PM
maafi chahta hun deri se aane ke liye.........bahut hee sundar ghazal lagi mujhe........... ...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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14th February 2014, 08:24 PM
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dil se wah nikli aapke is sher par Kabhi Aawaargee me tujh ko bhulaa baithe they, Ab yahi zidd hai tere koo me guzar ho jaaye. Jaate Jaate aapki is nazm ke naam ek aur sher... 'Mast' khud bhi hai begaana apno ki is mehfil mein tamanna hai to ki itne mein 'basar' ho jaaye.... likhte rahiyeGaa... aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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16th February 2014, 07:48 PM
Shaad bhai bahot hi badhiya likha hai ... padh kar bahot achha lagaa ...
keep writing !! ------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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17th February 2014, 03:33 PM
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thank you soooooo much sukanya dee..... thanks alot for reading this post. do keep coming and take a good care of yourself Shaad.... |
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17th February 2014, 05:21 PM
Dil-e-beemaar ki unko bhi khabar ho jaaye, Merii choTii si duaa me jo asar ho jaaye. Fir kise hosh hai jeene ka ya mar jaane ka, wo mujhe dekh leN itnaa hi agar ho jaaye. Wohi khushboo ki tarah saath chalaa kartii hai, wo jo kahtii thi ke "ik aur Safar ho jaaye." Kabhi Aawaargee me tujh ko bhulaa baithe they, Ab yahi zidd hai tere koo me guzar ho jaaye. Teri yaadoN ka dhuwaaN raat bhar na sone de, Aur parwaan chadhe may* to Saher ho jaaye. [may- sharaab, jaam etc] Shaad chup chaap sahaa karte ho zakhamoN ko bahot, UTho ik roz chalo Jange-Badar ho jaaye... Shaad... shad bhai super padkar bahut aacha laga |
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18th February 2014, 10:18 AM
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maafi ki koi baat nahi aru bhai.. der aye durust aaye... aur yaqeen maniye aapke aane ka intzaar hi tha mujhe... bahot bahot shukriyaa jo ye kalaam aapko pasand aa sakaa... aate raheN.. khush raheN Shaad... |
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18th February 2014, 10:25 AM
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mast saahab aapki is kadar inaayat, is darja dariyaadili pe ye meraa dil masarrat se jhoom uthaa hai... aapki nazre inaayat pe behad mamnoon hoon... tashreef laate rahen shaad... |
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21st February 2014, 03:32 PM
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meri khushnaseebi hai deep saahab jo nacheez ka kalaam aapko pasand aa gayaa.. tashreef laate raheN.. hum mehfil me charaage husn badhaate rahenge... shukriyaa Shaad.... |
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21st February 2014, 03:33 PM
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bahot bahot shukriyaa Shakir saab.. inaayat hai aapki. Shaad... |
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23rd February 2014, 10:04 AM
Shaad bhaii:
namaste! bhaii bahot Khoob Ghazal liKhi hai aapne... mazaa aa gayaa... duaa hay aage yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko baDhaate rahiye aap.. KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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24th February 2014, 10:57 AM
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behad hukriyaa aapka Dhaval bhai.... aapka bazm me tashreef laana hi bahot badi baat hai hamare liye.. aapko khaak lafz pasand aaye, meri khushnaseebi hai... aate raheN...aur apna khayaal rakkheN Shaad.... |
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10th July 2015, 09:56 PM
Dil-e-beemaar ki unko bhi khabar ho jaaye,
Merii choTii si duaa me jo asar ho jaaye. Wohi khushboo ki tarah saath chalaa kartii hai, wo jo kahtii thi ke "ik aur Safar ho jaaye." Dil me utar gaye ye do sher....bahut khoob ghazal hai shaad ji...achanak nazar padi...to dil khush ho gaya padh ke.... Dil se daad aapki is peshkash ki shaan me..... likhte rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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10th July 2015, 10:13 PM
Bohat Khoob shaad sahab.
Umda Ghazal hai! Matla bohat khoob laga! DuaoN ke saath Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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13th July 2015, 09:54 PM
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madhu ji aapki inaayaton se mamnoon hoon jo aapne mujhe is laayaq samjhaa aur kalaam ko is darja tavajjoh dena gawaara kiyaa..... warna to mahaz ye sher bhuuli bisree yaadon me shumaar ho chale they.... ek baar fir se bahut shukriyaa aapka..... shaad.... |
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13th July 2015, 09:56 PM
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Praveen saahab ko khaaksaar ki jaanib se laakh laakh salaam pahuche...... aapne kalaam ki pazeeraai farmaayee meri khushkismatii hai... tashreef laate rahiyega.... duaaon me yaad rakhiyega shaad.... |
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13th July 2015, 10:36 PM
Shaadi ji...aapke iss kalaam ne dil ko chu liya...wakai bahaut khoob likha hai aapne...yeh sher toh kuch jyada hi pasand aaye...heart touching.
Dil-e-beemaar ki unko bhi khabar ho jaaye, Merii choTii si duaa me jo asar ho jaaye. Shaad chup chaap sahaa karte ho zakhamoN ko bahot, UTho ik roz chalo Jange-Badar ho jaaye... Aise hi likhte rahen...share karne ke liye Shukriya! |
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14th July 2015, 07:20 AM
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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14th July 2015, 10:29 AM
Wah wah!
Har sher ek se badhkar kar ek! daad kabool kijiye..........Shaad sahab. Sarika |
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14th July 2015, 10:09 PM
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Bohot bohot bohot khooob Sameer bhai, Kya rawangi kya suroor hai is gazal me....behad umdah...hazaroon daad is nayab gazal ki nazar.... Aapki kalam ka talabgaar Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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15th July 2015, 09:15 AM
Kyaa baat hai.
Itna pur asar aur behtareen kalaam mujh se chhuut gaya thaa, bohot baDi gustaakhi ho gayi. Maazrat chaahunga. behtareen peshkash. Sabhi ashaar lajawaab rahe jenab. Likhte raheiN. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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21st July 2015, 10:17 AM
sweet rain ji aapka behad shukriyaa pazzeeraai aur pasandeegii ka......
ummeed hai aap ka saath yunhi milta rahega... shukriyaa shaad... |
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21st July 2015, 10:18 AM
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21st July 2015, 10:19 AM
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ek kahaawat bhi mashhor hai na Sagar saahab..... "Der aayad durust aayad" Masha Allah bata anahi sakte kitnii khushi haasil ho rahii hai bazm me aapko dekh kar.... aur aapko kalaam pasand aayaa ye merii khushnaseebii hai.... iltija hai ke aage bhi aap tasreef laakar ham pe inaayat karte rahenge.... shukriyaa shaad..... |
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21st July 2015, 10:27 AM
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wahhhhhh Shaad bhai kitni khoobsurat gazal mehfil ki nazar ki hai aapne, maine pehle bhi padi par reply karne ka waqt nahi tha tab....aaj phir saamne dekha to maloom pda ki hamne to es khoobsurat gazal par aapko daad di hi nahi...muaaf kijiyega deri se aaye hu yu hi khoobsurat kalaam bazm ki nazar karte rhiye, khush rhiye .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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21st July 2015, 11:18 AM
wah shaad bhai khoob ghazal pesh ki hai aapne
likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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22nd July 2015, 10:49 AM
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22nd July 2015, 10:50 AM
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