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kyun barbaad hue, kyun barbaad kiya, -
6th August 2005, 11:45 AM
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kyun barbaad hue, kyun barbaad kiya, kab aaNh bhari, kab yaad kiya, ab dil na kisi se lagayenge, usne ye faisla mere baad kiya, kuch ajab kism ke zakhm the, jo mere dil pe aaye the, rozana dil-e-nakaam ne, ek naya dard eejaad kaya, teri yaadoN ne aa aa kar, mere bistar pe basera daala tha, meri sooni sooni raatoN ko, teri yaadoN ne aabaad kiya, mere dil pe jo guzri thi, Vo daastaaN tumne suni nahi, mere dard bhare fasane pe, har mehfil ne irshaad kiya, na pyaar-o-wafa na kasme vaade, na hikayateN na shikayateN jaao jaane waale tumhe... *ahad-e-muhabbat se aazaad kiya, [ahad= promise] bahaaroN se naata tod diya, *khizaaoN ko jaai'daad kiya, [KihzaaN= autumn] bhool samir shayad kar li, dil-e-khushHaal ko *nashaad kiya, ek kam tawajjuu rishte ko, wafa-e-*jaavidaaN ki buniyad kiya, [Nashaad= cheerless, unhappy] [jaavidaN= eternal] do u still remember me ... ______________________________ http://www.angelfire.com/emo2/shayri_e_dard |
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6th August 2005, 11:52 AM
Hey samiir
Wow too good buddy!!! Bahaut acacha likha hai tumne...poora kalaam hi bahaut khoobsoorat tha...couldnt pick one or two lines from it... Uhin likhte raho hamesha....humari prayers tumhare saath hain... Take care Keep smiling Palak  =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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hi! -
6th August 2005, 12:56 PM
Sameer AAAWsome.....every word is special as it helps seeing ur innerself...a heart which is creative n true...perhaps thts the reason ur poetries r charmin and..i luv them!
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6th August 2005, 12:57 PM
kyun barbaad hue, kyun barbaad kiya,
kab aaNh bhari, kab yaad kiya, ab dil na kisi se lagayenge, usne ye faisla mere baad kiya, Classic... beuatiully expressed! kuch ajab kism ke zakhm the, jo mere dil pe aaye the, rozana dil-e-nakaam ne, ek naya dard eejaad kaya, teri yaadoN ne aa aa kar, mere bistar pe basera daala tha, meri sooni sooni raatoN ko, teri yaadoN ne aabaad kiya, Waaaaaaahhh... kya baat hai...! mere dil pe jo guzri thi, Vo daastaaN tumne suni nahi, mere dard bhare fasane pe, har mehfil ne irshaad kiya, na pyaar-o-wafa na kasme vaade, na hikayateN na shikayateN jaao jaane waale tumhe... *ahad-e-muhabbat se aazaad kiya, beautifulll...! bahaaroN se naata tod diya, *khizaaoN ko jaai'daad kiya, [KihzaaN= autumn] bhool samir shayad kar li, dil-e-khushHaal ko *nashaad kiya, ek kam tawajjuu rishte ko, wafa-e-*jaavidaaN ki buniyad kiya, bahut khoob! Dear Samir... Its aa pleasure reading u always.. u express urslef fabulously wel.. Ek aur behad aardaar aur khoobsurat rachna likhne ke liye meri dil se daad kubool kar lena... Do keep writing... TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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6th August 2005, 07:48 PM
waah bhai waah;
kya khub peshkash aapki, maashaallah, bahut khub, kya dard hai aapke lafzon main, maan gaye bhai maan gaye, sach kahu to puri shayri.com me main dhundh dhundh ke aapki hi gazalen padhta hoon, aap aise hi likhte rahiye, hamari dua aapke saath hai |
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7th August 2005, 06:15 PM
Hey samiir
Wow too good buddy!!! Bahaut acacha likha hai tumne...poora kalaam hi bahaut khoobsoorat tha...couldnt pick one or two lines from it... Uhin likhte raho hamesha....humari prayers tumhare saath hain... Take care Keep smiling Palak hey palak .. thanks a lot buddy ... thanks alot for the appreciation ..vese tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho .. take care n have a nice day ... n happy friendship day 2 u .. luvs, samir ______________________________ http://www.angelfire.com/emo2/shayri_e_dard |
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7th August 2005, 06:17 PM
Ab tum insist karte ho to maan lete hain ki hum bhi kuch kam nahi hai...hehehehehehe
 Wais eit was good. Happy friendships day to u too. Keep smiling Palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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hi komal -
7th August 2005, 06:25 PM
Sameer AAAWsome.....every word is special as it helps seeing ur innerself...a heart which is creative n true...perhaps thts the reason ur poetries r charmin and..i luv them!
tc komal hi komal , howz u dear ... ? happy friendship day . .. u take real care of ur self and .. hey hu pan gujurati chhu. dear.. ______________________________ http://www.angelfire.com/emo2/shayri_e_dard |
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hi komal -
7th August 2005, 06:30 PM
bahut khoob!
Dear Samir... Its aa pleasure reading u always.. u express urslef fabulously wel.. Ek aur behad aardaar aur khoobsurat rachna likhne ke liye meri dil se daad kubool kar lena... Do keep writing... TC hey pulakit bhai ... kaafi dino baad aapse mulaqat hui hai yaar .. aapka reply paa kar kaafi achha laga ... ne ways .. kaise ho aap ... take care n have a wonderful day ... luvz, samir ______________________________ http://www.angelfire.com/emo2/shayri_e_dard |
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Re: kyun barbaad hue, kyun barbaad kiya, -
8th August 2005, 10:05 AM
sameer bhai
jab bhi tumhe padhta hoon ek ajeeb si kashamkash mein phas jata hoon ki aap ki gazal ka kaun sa mishra jayada asardaar hai,,,poori gazal hi mukammal aur dilkash likhte hai aap...dil se nikli hui gazal..seedhe dil par asar karti hai...meri daad kubool kijiye...bahoot acha likhte hai aap...aise hi sada likhte rahiye.,.khush rahioye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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manojbhai ..... -
8th August 2005, 06:24 PM
manoj bhai ...
manoj bhai .. aap ne taarif kar di to laga meri ghazal mukammal ho gayi .. mera kalam sahee ho gaya .. i admire u alot manoj bhai .. sach me bahot bahot shukriya .. ek request hai .. aap mere post ko plz check kara kijiye .. u r like a judge for me .. koi chhoti si galati bhi dikhe to mujhe batana zaroor .. apna khayal rakhiyega .. varna hamara khayal kaun rakhega .. luvs, samir ______________________________ http://www.angelfire.com/emo2/shayri_e_dard |
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