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14th July 2010, 07:54 AM
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Naresh jee:

Pranaam!

aapki koShiSh ke aSh'aar dil ko Chhu gaye.n..maqtaa Khoob rahaa... yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee! dil se daad aur duaae.n!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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14th July 2010, 12:07 PM
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wah......
is sher ke liye khul kar daad....
ajab word play hai....ye hui ab shayri.....
pahle philoshy chal rahi thi.....
bahut khoob......
ye sher hasile ghazal nahi kahunga...apki last 50 ghazalo ka hasile ghazaaal sher kahunga
Zidd Sahab ... Aadaab ! aapko apni post par dekhna hi .....mere mann ka badha utsav jaisa hai.....uspar har ashaar par aapka prabhavshaali tapsara kuch nayi seekh deta laga mujhe....iska asar aane waali ghazal me dekhaai de ...aisi koshish rahegi....

haa...galti se 3rd sher ki pehli line me mujhse ulta type ho gaya tha........naa-mumqeen pehle aana tha aur mumqeen baad me ......use maine dhaval sahab se edit kara liya hai....

Har Naa-Mumqeen Ko Mumqeen Banaane Me
Ghar Ka Konaa-Konaa Darak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

bhai pahle wali suurat jyada acchi lagi...bhale vo galti e hui ho....
ek alag baat thi bhale ulaT thi.....aur us ulaT ke wajah se saaani misra bahot khil gaya...magar jaise shayar ki marzi....

aap se maqte me mili daad ka bahut bahut shukriya....zidd sahab !

Ki Behas Bahut Taqdeer Pe Khuda Se 'Naresh' ne
Magar Sawaalon Me Waqt Sarak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

aainda bhi aapke aise hi saath milta rahe....yeh hi khwaish rahegi....humesha... !

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....[/QUOTE]
   
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15th July 2010, 03:45 AM
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namaskaar naresh jii, bahut khoob likha hai aapne, sabhi sher acche lage, par last wala sher khaas laga......daad hazir hai.

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Sunita Ji......Namaste ! aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya Ji......aainda bhi aapka aise hi saath milta rahega....yeh hi duaa hai...khush rahen...

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16th July 2010, 06:56 AM
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naresh saheb,

mujhe aapki yeh ghazal bahut pasaNd aayee....
meri jaanib se daad qubuul farmaaiyega...



is sher ke baabat kuchh arz karna chaahta hooN...
apni kam aqlee aur mehdood-e-ilm ki wajhe se gar kuchh galat keh jauN to muafi ka talabgaar hooN...

mumqin ko naa-mumqin karna....meri samjh ke bahar hai saheb...
darasal kisi bhi mumqin cheez ko naa-mumqin karne ke liye sirf ek 'na' ki hi darkaar hoti hai uske liye kuchh bhi khaas nahi karna padta.....ghar ka konaa-konaa to naa-mumqin ko mumqin karne meiN darakta hai...
aapne likha hai to zuroor kuchh khaas baat hogi, agar mera comment karna aapki naaraazgi ka sabab bana ho to muafi saheb....

yuNhi likhte raheN....
duaoN ke saath...

ek khairkhwaah...
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Vikram Ji... Aadaab ! aapne sahi galti pakdhi thi....mujhse uss sher me galit se type ho gaya thaa .....woh maine dhaval sahab se baad me edit kara liya tha....pehle na-mumqeen aur baad me mumqeen hi aana tha....aapki pasandegi aur galiti bataane ka bahut bahut shukriya sahab ....aise hi saath banaye rakhiyega... khush rahen....

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[QUOTE=zidd;401860]Zidd Sahab ... Aadaab ! aapko apni post par dekhna hi .....mere mann ka badha utsav jaisa hai.....uspar har ashaar par aapka prabhavshaali tapsara kuch nayi seekh deta laga mujhe....iska asar aane waali ghazal me dekhaai de ...aisi koshish rahegi....

haa...galti se 3rd sher ki pehli line me mujhse ulta type ho gaya tha........naa-mumqeen pehle aana tha aur mumqeen baad me ......use maine dhaval sahab se edit kara liya hai....

Har Naa-Mumqeen Ko Mumqeen Banaane Me
Ghar Ka Konaa-Konaa Darak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

bhai pahle wali suurat jyada acchi lagi...bhale vo galti e hui ho....
ek alag baat thi bhale ulaT thi.....aur us ulaT ke wajah se saaani misra bahot khil gaya...magar jaise shayar ki marzi....

Zidd Sahab ...... ab toh dono suurat saamne hai.... nazariya apna apna ...... !



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18th July 2010, 05:56 AM
Naresh Bhaiya,

Kaise hain aap? aree wah ... mera aaj kal aana jaana toh kum hain lekin ... aapne itna aacha likha hai bina padhe jaa bhi nahi sakti hu naa

aapne bahut aacha likha hain .....

likhte rahe

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18th July 2010, 09:35 AM
Naresh ji ,
bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai aapne
is tarah Qafiia ka istamal bhi bahut achhi lagi
sabhi sher achhe lage

daad kabul kijiye

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18th July 2010, 12:11 PM
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Naresh Bhaiya,

Kaise hain aap? aree wah ... mera aaj kal aana jaana toh kum hain lekin ... aapne itna aacha likha hai bina padhe jaa bhi nahi sakti hu naa

aapne bahut aacha likha hain .....

likhte rahe

take care of urself

aapki

mandeep
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Naresh ji ,
bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai aapne
is tarah Qafiia ka istamal bhi bahut achhi lagi
sabhi sher achhe lage

daad kabul kijiye

Diya

Diya Ji........Namaste ! bahut arse baad .....aapko yaha dekh kar acha laga....aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya....aainda bhi aapka aise hi saath milta rahega....khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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Mausam Ka Phal Pak Gaya Hai Shaayad
Chalta Huaa Aadmi Thak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

Apni Ummeed Ka Koi Raastaa Banaane Me
Dil Kahi Zor Se Dhad.ak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

Har Naa-Mumqeen Ko Mumqeen Banaane Me
Ghar Ka Konaa-Konaa Darak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

Sadiyon Ki Viraasat Takiye Me Dabaye Baitha Tha
Khuli Aankh Toh Khud Se Behak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

Puraane Darwaazon Se Baah'r Aake Dekha Toh
Laga ApnoN Se Woh Bhatak Gaya Hai Shaayad...

Ki Behas Bahut Taqdeer Pe Khuda Se 'Naresh' ne
Magar Sawaalon Me Waqt Sarak Gaya Hai Shaayad...
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beautiul Naresh ji..

Loved the combination of words with emotions...

Rohin Ji.....aapki taariif ka bahut bahut shukriya.... khush rahen....

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Aap sabhi ke saath ka bahut bahut shukriya... !



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