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Love Wajah - 19th November 2007, 06:20 PM

adaab doston...
aaj kaafi lambe arse ke baad kuchh likhne ki koshish ki hai....
umeed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko mera likha pasand aayega...

is dil ki BeqararI ka sabab na poochho..
is raat ki TanhaaI ki wajah na poochho..
in AankhoN se girte AaonsuoN ka sabab na poochho...
in Beqarar AankhoN se IntezaaR ka sabab na poochho...
yeh sab ker rahi haiN ishara meri bebasi ki ore..
is bebasi ke aalam ki wajah na poochho..

Poochna hai gar to poochho,ki yeh WAQT kyun guzar nahin jata...
Yeh aasman mein timtimate taare is raat ki tanhaai ko kyon tor nahin dete...
Yeh aankhen Muddaton se kisi ke intezaar mein kyon baithi hain..
Jab bhi kuchh likhne ki koshish kerta hai 'Jawed'
In AankhoN Mein nami si kyun aa jati hain.
Is Dil mein unka hi khayal kyun aa jata hai..


aapke jawab ka muntazir....
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Love 20th November 2007, 07:18 PM

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adaab doston...
aaj kaafi lambe arse ke baad kuchh likhne ki koshish ki hai....
umeed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko mera likha pasand aayega...

is dil ki BeqararI ka sabab na poochho..
is raat ki TanhaaI ki wajah na poochho..
in AankhoN se girte AaonsuoN ka sabab na poochho...
in Beqarar AankhoN se IntezaaR ka sabab na poochho...
yeh sab ker rahi haiN ishara meri bebasi ki ore..
is bebasi ke aalam ki wajah na poochho..
Poochna hai gar to poochho,ki yeh WAQT kyun guzar nahin jata...
Yeh aasman mein timtimate taare is raat ki tanhaai ko kyon tor nahin dete...
Yeh aankhen Muddaton se kisi ke intezaar mein kyon baithi hain..
Jab bhi kuchh likhne ki koshish kerta hai 'Jawed'
In AankhoN Mein nami si kyun aa jati hain.
Is Dil mein unka hi khayal kyun aa jata hai..


aapke jawab ka muntazir....
Jawed


wahhhhh JAWED,
kya baat hai .........bahut khub likha hai aap ne.........bahut saadgi se dil ke zakhamo ko pesh kiya hai.....ye tanhai,ye yadein.....ufffffff....mat poocho wo aalam.....aise waqt me to aankhon ka bhigna jayaz hai dost.........bahut pasand aayi aap ki ye ghazal......dili dad kabul farmaye...........................


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wahhhhh JAWED,
kya baat hai .........bahut khub likha hai aap ne.........bahut saadgi se dil ke zakhamo ko pesh kiya hai.....ye tanhai,ye yadein.....ufffffff....mat poocho wo aalam.....aise waqt me to aankhon ka bhigna jayaz hai dost.........bahut pasand aayi aap ki ye ghazal......dili dad kabul farmaye...........................

Bahut bahut Shukriya dost.....ki aapko mera likha pasand aaya....

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