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ishq me.n Gairat-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa - 22nd June 2005, 04:41 PM

Just Got a beautiful poetry of Faakir sahaab on SMS... and felt like sharing it...!

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ishq me.n Gairat*-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa
varna kyaa baat thii kis baat ne rone na diiyaa

aap kahate the ke rone se na badale.nge nasiib
umr bhar aap kii is baat ne rone na diiyaa

rone waalo.n se kah do unakaa bhii ronaa role.n
jinako majabuuri-e-haalaat ne rone na diiyaa

tujhase milakar hame.n ronaa thaa bahot ronaa thaa
ta.ngii-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diiyaa

ek do roz kaa sadamaa ho to ro le.n 'Faakir'
ham ko har roz ke sadamaat ne rone na diiyaa

*Gairat = Honour, Self Respect

--Sudarshan Faakir
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22nd June 2005, 08:02 PM

Dear Pulkit!

Bahaut acachi gazal post ki hai tumne...too good...isi tarahs e share karte raho humare saath...too good yaar...

Kush raho...
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Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai
Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar
Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai


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Aaj Pulkit ki post ka jawaab Pulkit ki style mein.....


ishq me.n Gairat*-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa
varna kyaa baat thii kis baat ne rone na diiyaa

Waaahhhhhhh kya baat kahi!!

aap kahate the ke rone se na badale.nge nasiib
umr bhar aap kii is baat ne rone na diiyaa

Wakai yeh toh sach hai!!

rone waalo.n se kah do unakaa bhii ronaa role.n
jinako majabuuri-e-haalaat ne rone na diiyaa

Too good... really amazing lines

tujhase milakar hame.n ronaa thaa bahot ronaa thaa
ta.ngii-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diiyaa

Heyyyyy I loved these two lines!

ek do roz kaa sadamaa ho to ro le.n 'Faakir'
ham ko har roz ke sadamaat ne rone na diiyaa

Beshak!

Dear Pulkit,
As always tum chun chun ke nagine laate ho jinse shayri.com ki bagiya aur khil uthti hai. Thanks for sharing it with us. It's really touching!


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23rd June 2005, 09:38 AM

ishq me.n Gairat*-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa
varna kyaa baat thii kis baat ne rone na diiyaa


Bahut khoob......Kya baat kahi hai......(har baat pe rona aaye lekin kya karen)

tujhase milakar hame.n ronaa thaa bahot ronaa thaa
ta.ngii-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diiyaa


kutch waqt to chahiye hota hai,.....ki dil ke aanson nikaal liye jaayein......lekin.......

Yunhi mehfil sajate raho....anmol niginon se Bhai......

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Asalam-O-Alaikum


Wah ji Wah Bahut hi khoob hai ......Kya baat kahi hai wah ..


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16th July 2005, 10:40 AM

pulkit mere bhai

aap ka yeh khoobsurat intikhaab aap ke behtreen shayri zauq ki akkaasi kerta hai.
bohat khoobsurat ghazel hai yeh meri pasandeeda ghazloan mein se ek.
thanks for sharing with us.
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16th July 2005, 01:38 PM

Sweet of u Palak....


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16th July 2005, 01:40 PM

Hmmm.. Shalini!

Replying in my style.. Creative field se hokar chori.. not fair... Glad tha u like it buddy... keep replying... TC


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16th July 2005, 01:41 PM

Bhai... tumhe pasand aayi accha laga.. tun hi hausla badhaate raho!


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Hi Ashjan!

Glad that u liked it...aise hi saath dete rahiye...


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Dear Mushi Bhai!

Adaab.. Kaise hain? Ummeda hai sab acche se hi hoga...

Bhaai, Ghazal aapki behtreen ghazalon me se hai sun bahut khushi huii....Bahut accha laga aapko yhan dekha.. Aise hi apna aashirwaad mere saath rakhiye... apna khayaal rakhiyega...!

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Re: ishq me.n Gairat-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa - 23rd July 2005, 04:24 AM

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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Just Got a beautiful poetry of Faakir sahaab on SMS... and felt like sharing it...!

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ishq me.n Gairat*-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa
varna kyaa baat thii kis baat ne rone na diiyaa

aap kahate the ke rone se na badale.nge nasiib
umr bhar aap kii is baat ne rone na diiyaa

rone waalo.n se kah do unakaa bhii ronaa role.n
jinako majabuuri-e-haalaat ne rone na diiyaa

tujhase milakar hame.n ronaa thaa bahot ronaa thaa
ta.ngii-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diiyaa

ek do roz kaa sadamaa ho to ro le.n 'Faakir'
ham ko har roz ke sadamaat ne rone na diiyaa

*Gairat = Honour, Self Respect

--Sudarshan Faakir
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dear sweetu
very good poem
specially i liked
rone se na badaainge naseeb umar bhar is baat ne rone na diya!

good one

thanks for sharing

Pree


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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23rd July 2005, 02:55 PM

Didi,

I like this poem 2 a Lot... ek alag hi expression hai... and yes.. the line was just 2 good

Aap khete thhe ke rone se naa badlenge nasiib
umra bhar aapki is baat ne rone naa diyaa

Glad that u liked this one 2..Take Good Care...Luv yaa


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HI - 23rd August 2005, 07:40 PM

Just Got a beautiful poetry of Faakir sahaab on SMS... and felt like sharing it...!

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ishq me.n Gairat*-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa
varna kyaa baat thii kis baat ne rone na diiyaa

aap kahate the ke rone se na badale.nge nasiib
umr bhar aap kii is baat ne rone na diiyaa

rone waalo.n se kah do unakaa bhii ronaa role.n
jinako majabuuri-e-haalaat ne rone na diiyaa

tujhase milakar hame.n ronaa thaa bahot ronaa thaa
ta.ngii-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diiyaa

ek do roz kaa sadamaa ho to ro le.n 'Faakir'
ham ko har roz ke sadamaat ne rone na diiyaa

*Gairat = Honour, Self Respect

--Sudarshan Faakir
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WAAH!!!!




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