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Neend Ne Aankho Se - 7th December 2006, 11:03 PM

Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai

waise to yaadein uski roz hi aati hai lekin
aaj to jaise ek tufan simat aaya hai

Pyar ki paribhasha badli hai uske aane se
subha haseen sham rangeen huwi lagti hai uske aane se
sang apne wo jaise ek indra - dhanush laya hai

Bholi bhali surat uski,baatein mithi mithi hai
apne andaz se usne duniya sari jeeti hai
lagta hai mujh ko bhi apne rang me rang ne aaya hai

Har pal mujhko chede hai,har pal mujhe sataye hai
bigdu to manane ke liye piche piche aaye hai
uske sath se lagta mujhko ye jahan paraya hai

sunehri zulfein chikni surat aankho me ek masti hai
sochu uske baare me to tanhai mujh ko dhasti hai
chahat ka us ki mujh par ajab khumar chaya hai

Iqraar karna aata nahi inqaar wo kar pata nahi
dur rehna chahe bhi to mujhse wo reh pata nahi
kehta hai maine usko apni jaal mein phasaya hai

Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai
   
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8th December 2006, 08:48 AM

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Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai

waise to yaadein uski roz hi aati hai lekin
aaj to jaise ek tufan simat aaya hai

Pyar ki paribhasha badli hai uske aane se
subha haseen sham rangeen huwi lagti hai uske aane se
sang apne wo jaise ek indra - dhanush laya hai

Bholi bhali surat uski,baatein mithi mithi hai
apne andaz se usne duniya sari jeeti hai
lagta hai mujh ko bhi apne rang me rang ne aaya hai

Har pal mujhko chede hai,har pal mujhe sataye hai
bigdu to manane ke liye piche piche aaye hai
uske sath se lagta mujhko ye jahan paraya hai

sunehri zulfein chikni surat aankho me ek masti hai
sochu uske baare me to tanhai mujh ko dhasti hai
chahat ka us ki mujh par ajab khumar chaya hai

Iqraar karna aata nahi inqaar wo kar pata nahi
dur rehna chahe bhi to mujhse wo reh pata nahi
kehta hai maine usko apni jaal mein phasaya hai

Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai

dear sandhya kais ho aap?

behad sundar kalaam aaj subha subha aate hi mujhe padhne ko mila hai bahot hi khusi hui aapko itna achha likhte hue dekh ke ehsas baht hi umda tarikese aapne bayan kiye hai , aur ye lines mujhe bahot hi pasand aayi

Pyar ki paribhasha badli hai uske aane se
subha haseen sham rangeen huwi lagti hai uske aane se
sang apne wo jaise ek indra - dhanush laya hai


is umda kalaam ke liye dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenga aur aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiyenga , khus rahiye, apna khayal rahiye

aapka dost
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ustad kya baat hai - 8th December 2006, 11:17 AM

ustad kya baat hai.its to good.
   
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hey it was awesome.u really write things beautyfully.keep up d gud work.
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dear sandhya kais ho aap?

behad sundar kalaam aaj subha subha aate hi mujhe padhne ko mila hai bahot hi khusi hui aapko itna achha likhte hue dekh ke ehsas baht hi umda tarikese aapne bayan kiye hai , aur ye lines mujhe bahot hi pasand aayi

Pyar ki paribhasha badli hai uske aane se
subha haseen sham rangeen huwi lagti hai uske aane se
sang apne wo jaise ek indra - dhanush laya hai


is umda kalaam ke liye dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenga aur aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiyenga , khus rahiye, apna khayal rahiye

aapka dost
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mei to thike ho aap kaise ho...
aapka tahe dil se shukriya ...dil se aapki daad kubul hai ji...achh laga ki aap ko meri post pasend ayi.....thanx...bye..tc.

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ustad kya baat hai.its to good.
padhne ke liya aap ka bahoot bahoot shukriya jagpravesh ji......thanx
   
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hey it was awesome.u really write things beautyfully.keep up d gud work.
bye n tak cr.
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aap ka tahi dil se shukriya....achh laga aapko meri post pe dikhke...thanx

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Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai

waise to yaadein uski roz hi aati hai lekin
aaj to jaise ek tufan simat aaya hai

Pyar ki paribhasha badli hai uske aane se
subha haseen sham rangeen huwi lagti hai uske aane se
sang apne wo jaise ek indra - dhanush laya hai

Bholi bhali surat uski,baatein mithi mithi hai
apne andaz se usne duniya sari jeeti hai
lagta hai mujh ko bhi apne rang me rang ne aaya hai

Har pal mujhko chede hai,har pal mujhe sataye hai
bigdu to manane ke liye piche piche aaye hai
uske sath se lagta mujhko ye jahan paraya hai

sunehri zulfein chikni surat aankho me ek masti hai
sochu uske baare me to tanhai mujh ko dhasti hai
chahat ka us ki mujh par ajab khumar chaya hai

Iqraar karna aata nahi inqaar wo kar pata nahi
dur rehna chahe bhi to mujhse wo reh pata nahi
kehta hai maine usko apni jaal mein phasaya hai

Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai
nazar nazar me har nazar me ,ek nazar ki talaash thi,
nazarein to mili lekin yeh nazar woh nazar nahi thi,
jis nazar ki ish nazar ko talash thi
   
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nazar nazar me har nazar me ,ek nazar ki talaash thi,
nazarein to mili lekin yeh nazar woh nazar nahi thi,
jis nazar ki ish nazar ko talash thi
thanx for sharing......
   
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Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai

waise to yaadein uski roz hi aati hai lekin
aaj to jaise ek tufan simat aaya hai

Pyar ki paribhasha badli hai uske aane se
subha haseen sham rangeen huwi lagti hai uske aane se
sang apne wo jaise ek indra - dhanush laya hai

Bholi bhali surat uski,baatein mithi mithi hai
apne andaz se usne duniya sari jeeti hai
lagta hai mujh ko bhi apne rang me rang ne aaya hai

Har pal mujhko chede hai,har pal mujhe sataye hai
bigdu to manane ke liye piche piche aaye hai
uske sath se lagta mujhko ye jahan paraya hai

sunehri zulfein chikni surat aankho me ek masti hai
sochu uske baare me to tanhai mujh ko dhasti hai
chahat ka us ki mujh par ajab khumar chaya hai

Iqraar karna aata nahi inqaar wo kar pata nahi
dur rehna chahe bhi to mujhse wo reh pata nahi
kehta hai maine usko apni jaal mein phasaya hai

Neend ne aankho se jo pehre ko hataya hai
koi dil - nasheen dil ko bohot yaad aaya hai

wah wah wah sandhya alfaz nahi hain meray pas kia likha hai aap ne bohat bohat acha laga keep writing dear khush raho


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wah wah wah sandhya alfaz nahi hain meray pas kia likha hai aap ne bohat bohat acha laga keep writing dear khush raho
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Kya kahe ab aapse apko kistarah se kahe aapne kaisa likha hai bus itna kafi hai ki .........

Kabhi num na ho jaye ye masoom nigahein,
Meri Aarzu hai tu sada muskuraye,
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Bade ajeeb hain ye zindagi ke raaste, anjane mod par kuchh log dost ban jate hain, milne ki khushi de ya na de bichhadne ka gam zarur de jate hain.


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Kya kahe ab aapse apko kistarah se kahe aapne kaisa likha hai bus itna kafi hai ki .........

Kabhi num na ho jaye ye masoom nigahein,
Meri Aarzu hai tu sada muskuraye,
Gum ke saye rahe hum tak hi,
Tere aashiyane mein hamesha baharein hi aaye....


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hemesh ji aap ka tahi dilse shukriya, aap ne padha or itna achh reply kiya
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Bade ajeeb hain ye zindagi ke raaste, anjane mod par kuchh log dost ban jate hain, milne ki khushi de ya na de bichhadne ka gam zarur de jate hain.


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