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Love Hasrat - 30th July 2007, 03:51 PM

kisi din to milenge unse
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mere dil ki bekarari ka sabab jaanker
kabhi to unhen mera khayaal aata hoga.
mere bare mein sochker kabhi to ..
unke dil mein bhi kasak uthti hogi.
is beman si zindagi ko fir jeena chahta hai "jawed"
Jo aag idher lagi hai, zara koi to jala de udher.


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hi - 30th July 2007, 04:14 PM

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kisi din to milenge unse
fir pochhenge unse unka haal
mere dil ki bekarari ka sabab jaanker
kabhi to unhen mera khayaal aata hoga.
mere bare mein sochker kabhi to ..
unke dil mein bhi kasak uthti hogi.
is beman si zindagi ko fir jeena chahta hai "jawed"
Jo aag idher lagi hai, zara koi to jala de udher.


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Waah waah kya khoob likha hai jawed ji aap ne, mhe lagta hai aap kisi se bepanah mahobbat karte hai magar vo hai ki aap ki mahobbat ko undekha kar rahi hai, koi baat nahi koshish jari rakhiye ek din us ka pathhar dil jaroor pigal jaayega aap ki paak mahobbat ki aag se,aap ki ghazal hoobhoo aap ke dil ka haal bayaan kar rahi hai.
dil se daad kabool kare is dilnashi kalam par


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Waah waah kya khoob likha hai jawed ji aap ne, mhe lagta hai aap kisi se bepanah mahobbat karte hai magar vo hai ki aap ki mahobbat ko undekha kar rahi hai, koi baat nahi koshish jari rakhiye ek din us ka pathhar dil jaroor pigal jaayega aap ki paak mahobbat ki aag se,aap ki ghazal hoobhoo aap ke dil ka haal bayaan kar rahi hai.
dil se daad kabool kare is dilnashi kalam par

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