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Love EK Shakhs - 7th August 2007, 07:25 PM

Salam Doston.......
Aaj fir ek chhoti si koshish ki hai kichh likhne ki ....Ummed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi.......aapke jawab ka muntazir hoon.....

Zarra zarra ruka gaya woh shakhs
Lamha Lamha ruka gaya woh shakhs
na jane kaisa jadoo chala gaya woh shakhs
mere jeene ki aas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aisa rula gaya woh shakhs

mere labon ki pyaas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aise bhula gaya woh shakhs
mere ahsason ko jaanta to tha woh shakhs
fir bhi na jane kyun chala gaya woh shakhs


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Salam Doston.......
Aaj fir ek chhoti si koshish ki hai kichh likhne ki ....Ummed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi.......aapke jawab ka muntazir hoon.....

Zarra zarra ruka gaya woh shakhs
Lamha Lamha ruka gaya woh shakhs
na jane kaisa jadoo chala gaya woh shakhs
mere jeene ki aas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aisa rula gaya woh shakhs

mere labon ki pyaas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aise bhula gaya woh shakhs
mere ahsason ko jaanta to tha woh shakhs
fir bhi na jane kyun chala gaya woh shakhs


Jawed.....

JAVED sahab bahut accha likha hai apne ehssas bahut gehren hai alfaz dilfareb lage unhi likhtey rahiye aur accha likhsaktey hain khush rahiye


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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7th August 2007, 08:10 PM

bahut hi badhiya likha hain....dil ke ehsaas ko bahut bakhubi pesh kiya hain apne


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Salam Doston.......
Aaj fir ek chhoti si koshish ki hai kichh likhne ki ....Ummed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi.......aapke jawab ka muntazir hoon.....

Zarra zarra ruka gaya woh shakhs
Lamha Lamha ruka gaya woh shakhs
na jane kaisa jadoo chala gaya woh shakhs
mere jeene ki aas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aisa rula gaya woh shakhs

mere labon ki pyaas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aise bhula gaya woh shakhs
mere ahsason ko jaanta to tha woh shakhs
fir bhi na jane kyun chala gaya woh shakhs


Jawed.....

bohat acha likha hai aapne ahsasaat bohat achay lagay.....likhte rahiye


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Salam Doston.......
Aaj fir ek chhoti si koshish ki hai kichh likhne ki ....Ummed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi.......aapke jawab ka muntazir hoon.....

Zarra zarra ruka gaya woh shakhs
Lamha Lamha ruka gaya woh shakhs
na jane kaisa jadoo chala gaya woh shakhs
mere jeene ki aas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aisa rula gaya woh shakhs

mere labon ki pyaas mita gaya woh shakhs
na jane kyun aise bhula gaya woh shakhs
mere ahsason ko jaanta to tha woh shakhs
fir bhi na jane kyun chala gaya woh shakhs


Jawed.....

Hello Jawed ji, kya khoob likha hai aapne. aur sach bhi hai ki sab kuchh jaan ke bhi kuchh log kuchh bhi nahi jaante .... jin par koi jab apanaa sab kuchh loota deta hai to wo saksh kisi ke waaste nahi rukate ...shaayad yahi duniya ka dastur hai aur zindagi ki kadavi sachchaai. Aapki yeh chhoti si pyaari si gazal hume bahot pasand aai .. ... aap bas yunhi likhate rahiyega

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe.

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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Hello Jawed ji, kya khoob likha hai aapne. aur sach bhi hai ki sab kuchh jaan ke bhi kuchh log kuchh bhi nahi jaante .... jin par koi jab apanaa sab kuchh loota deta hai to wo saksh kisi ke waaste nahi rukate ...shaayad yahi duniya ka dastur hai aur zindagi ki kadavi sachchaai. Aapki yeh chhoti si pyaari si gazal hume bahot pasand aai .. ... aap bas yunhi likhate rahiyega

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe.

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Jay Ambe.

Bahut bahut Shukriya Gudia ji.....jo aapko meri chhoti si koshish pasand aayee....

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