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Jasne game hayat manane nahi diya, -
6th March 2011, 03:53 AM
Jasne game hayat manane nahi diya,
Is muflishi ne zahar bhi khane nahi diya ! Hamne sada yunhi khaye kain fareb, Feer o fareb auron ko khane nahi diya ! Aandhi ne roshani ki himayat to ki bahut , Lekin koi charag jalane nahi diya ! Ek aadh ghar to jal gaya par shahr Bach gaya, Ab ke diye ka sath hawa ne nahi diya ! Raji tha mai bhi aur mera dusman bhi sulah par, Kuchh doston ne hath milane nahi diya ! (Not mine) |
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6th March 2011, 07:02 AM
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Regards "Anaarhi" |
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6th March 2011, 08:06 AM
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Riz sahab adaab, halaNki mai mod nahi huN, ye kaam unko karnaa chahiye, par .......... lekin yaha ka member hone ke naate, ye gunaah mai hi kartaa huN, pahli baat aap kisi ka kalaam chori na kare.. aisa apko mai bhi bol chukaa huN pahle aur zanny sahibaa bhi ..... aaj mai fir dohrata huN ........... doosri baat .......... ek saath itne thread mat post kijiye ....... chahe apke apne hi kalaam ho.......... aur agar aap kisi aur ki gahzal share kar rahe ho, jo bilkul galat nahi hai, lekin shayer ko credit deN .. ya fir not mine likheN ........ aur sahi section maiN post kareN Please do not cheat anyone ......... mujhe jyda time nahi mltaa hai aajkal .. kuch hi kamlaam padhtaa hUN, aur jab padhta leta hun to pata lagtaa hai ye kisi aur ka hai ........ yaha koe adminstration hi nahi hai........ aur ko kya kaheN ........ ye adab ki jagah hai, yaha adab se saleeke se kaam honaa chahiye, koe discipline hi nahi hai............ request to all mod Plz is tarah ki post ko sahi section mai move kareN aisa koe kartaa hai to warn karne ke baad use ban kareN thoda sa time SDc ko deN agar aapne MOD hone ki zimmedari li hai, nahi to jo is layak hai use ye zimmedari de deN... kursi ka moH chhod deN ... bas, hope ye meri last post na ho ........ !! jisko bhali ladni ho bhali lage, jisko buri lagni ho buri lage, maine kahna thaa kah diyaa .. JAI MATA DI |
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8th March 2011, 03:24 AM
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Lekin Kya Bura Hai kisi ke Dil KA haal Likhne Mei! Mai ne aapki Post Padhi Hai ! Aap Aisa Behave Kar rahe ahai jaisey !ki Mainey Aap ki koi Post Chura Kar Apni Jagah post Kar di hai! Mai koi Credit lene ke wastey ye sab nahi karta ! bas Dil kehta hai Bayan kar' So kar deta hu ! Agar apko isse koi taklif hui hai toh muaf karna! Lekin Mai ek Baat janna chahunga ! Kya aap ko is Shayar ka Naam Pata hai ! Jisney yeh Gajal ya yeh paragraph likha hai! toh Please, Mujhe unka Naam Bataiyega! Aur aainda se ! aapke shabd yaad rakhunga ! Dhanyawad ! aapka riz. |
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8th March 2011, 10:53 AM
Riz sahab...
Aap 6 saal se Sdc members haiN...Aapko Sdc ke rules pata hone chahiye tha.. Sdc ka rule hai ke jo shayri aapne nahi likhi ho,uske saath "Not mine" likheN Agar aapko shayer ka naam pata ho tou "shayri-e-mashhoor shayer" section me post kijiye, agar nahi pata tou " anjuman-e-shayri" section me post kijiye... baraah-e karam..aayinda khayaal rakhiye..... http://www.shayri.com/forums/announcement.php?f=2 Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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