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24th September 2008, 12:14 AM
Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../
Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../
Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../
Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../
Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./
"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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24th September 2008, 03:42 AM
Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../
Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./
wah tahir saheb kya khoob likha hai apne....ye do sher zyada acche lage hamein..yuhi likhte rahiye....aur apki Anaa hamesha ke liye apki hojaye yahi duwa hai hamari..."Ameen"
ek aur baat ...meri apni zati rai hai ye ke shayad ye ghazal shayri-e-dard section me zyada suit karegi....aagay apki marzi...
zainy
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24th September 2008, 01:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Tahir kkkhan
Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../
Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../
Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../
Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../
Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./
"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN
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bahut hi...accha likha hai...taahir sahab....very gud work....dard saaf jhalak raha hai.....
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24th September 2008, 02:33 PM
Bahut khoob likha tahir ji, padkar achha laga. agle thread ka intjaar rahega.
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A SOUL OF LOVE
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24th September 2008, 02:44 PM
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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../
Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./
wah tahir saheb kya khoob likha hai apne....ye do sher zyada acche lage hamein..yuhi likhte rahiye....aur apki Anaa hamesha ke liye apki hojaye yahi duwa hai hamari..."Ameen"
ek aur baat ...meri apni zati rai hai ye ke shayad ye ghazal shayri-e-dard section me zyada suit karegi....aagay apki marzi...
zainy
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ASSAALMU ALAIKUM, baad salaam k jo DUAA aapne mujhe di uske liye mein aapka EHSAANMAND rahunga,or jo rai aapne yaha mujhe di mein aapki is rai se bilkul sehmat hu,aap apni jagah bilkul sahi hai,or aagey bhie isi tarah se meri kamiyo ko bataate rahiyega,aapke jawaab ka muntazir "Tahir kkkhan"
or ha yeh sher only for you,but it's not mine,jo duaa aapne mujhe di uske badle mein...
Meri Duaa hai tu sabse nek seerat ho,
Teri tarah tera dil bhi khubsurat ho.....
Duaa se pehle mile jo tu chahe,
k khud duaa ko tere hatho ki zarurat ho..
fe amaan allah...
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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24th September 2008, 02:48 PM
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bahut hi...accha likha hai...taahir sahab....very gud work....dard saaf jhalak raha hai.....
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Thanks Bade Bhai,aapko mere jaise HAQEER insaan ka qalaam pasand aaya..
mein aapka tehdil se shukra guzaar hu,
take care...
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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24th September 2008, 02:57 PM
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Bahut khoob likha tahir ji, padkar achha laga. agle thread ka intjaar rahega.
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INSHALLAH bahut jald apna naya qalaam aap logo ki nazar karunga.
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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24th September 2008, 04:29 PM
Bahut Khub Tahir Ji Masha Allah Kya khub likhte ho aap
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24th September 2008, 04:34 PM
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Bahut Khub Tahir Ji Masha Allah Kya khub likhte ho aap
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thanks sweet friend,aako meri GAZAL pasand aai..
FE AMAAN ALLAH
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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24th September 2008, 04:35 PM
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Bahut Khub Tahir Ji Masha Allah Kya khub likhte ho aap
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THANKS SWEET-FRIEND,
aapko meri GAZAL pasand aai,iske liye mein aapka shukr guzaar hu,
FE AMAAN ALLAH
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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24th September 2008, 04:40 PM
DEAR
Tahir kkkhan SAHIB
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH KYA KHUB LIKHA H
APKI SAYRI M DARD TO SAF DHIKHAE DATE H
THXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXA LOTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
RAVI
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24th September 2008, 06:08 PM
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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../
Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../
Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../
Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../
Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./
"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN
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Tahir ji,
Tareef ke qabil to hai ki aap ...Daad dilse kabool kijiye ..youn hi mahfil ko roshan karte rahiye ....... humesha aap ke new gazal ki Intezar rahegi ..
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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27th September 2008, 11:22 PM
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Tahir ji,
Tareef ke qabil to hai ki aap ...Daad dilse kabool kijiye ..youn hi mahfil ko roshan karte rahiye ....... humesha aap ke new gazal ki Intezar rahegi ..
Diya
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THANKS DIYA ,AAPKO MERI GAZAL PASAND AAI
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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27th September 2008, 11:53 PM
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Rote Rote Mujhe Dard,Apna Sunata Hai Koi,
Ab Bhi Apni Hasi Mein Aansu Chhipata Hai koi....../
Intizaar Toh Uska Karu Jo Bichhad Jaaye,
DIL Mein Rehne Wala Bhi Yaad Aata Hai Koi......../
Bina Teri Yaad K Jiya Toh Kiya Jiya "Tahir"
Bina Sanso k kanhi DIL Dhadhak Paata Hai Koi........../
Kehne Wale Toh Mujhe Zaalim Bhie Kehte Hai,
Kisi Paththar Se Bhala Dil Lagaata Hai koi.........../
Bherlu Tujhe Baho Mein Or Mujhe Maut Aa Jaaye,
Jiski zindagi Koi Aur Ho,woh Bhala Mer Pata Hai Koi........./
"ANAA IS MY LIFE,ANAA IS MY HEART BEAT"/KKKHAN
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Khan bhai....accha likha hai aapne..ahsaas bhi dil fareb haiN....yoon hi likhte rahiye aur apni "aana" ke saath sadha kush rahiye.
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duao.n ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd October 2008, 10:43 PM
har sher bahut pyara hai rote huye yaad kiya ek baar hanste huye yaad karo pyar kao intzar rahega ki muskan bhee likho
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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4th October 2008, 10:44 PM
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DEAR
Tahir kkkhan SAHIB
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH KYA KHUB LIKHA H
APKI SAYRI M DARD TO SAF DHIKHAE DATE H
THXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXA LOTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
RAVI
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shukriya ravindra sahab ki aapko humari gazal pasand aai...
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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4th October 2008, 10:48 PM
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har sher bahut pyara hai rote huye yaad kiya ek baar hanste huye yaad karo pyar kao intzar rahega ki muskan bhee likho
Anil
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masoom sahab aapne meri GAZAL per roshni daali iske liye mein aapka shukrguzaar hu,
inshallah bahut jald muskurate hue mohabbat ko yaad kaise kiya jaata hain koshish karoonga ki zaroor likhu,.
take care ....
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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8th October 2008, 10:42 PM
SALAM
BOHAT ACHA LIKHA HA.VERY NICE.
TAKECARE
ALLAHHAFIZ
KOI ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE,
JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE,
PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE,
MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE,
AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI,
KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI,
HO JAYE WOH KASH MERA MUJHE KHONE SE PEHLE,
JO ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE.
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12th October 2008, 11:44 PM
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SALAM
BOHAT ACHA LIKHA HA.VERY NICE.
TAKECARE
ALLAHHAFIZ
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thanks muskaan,aapko meri gazal pasand aayi, iske liye mein aapka shukr guzaar hu..
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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14th June 2009, 03:19 PM
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Khan bhai....accha likha hai aapne..ahsaas bhi dil fareb haiN....yoon hi likhte rahiye aur apni "aana" ke saath sadha kush rahiye.
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duao.n ke saath
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thanks sister khan.......aapko meri ghazal itni pasand aayi....
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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14th June 2009, 03:32 PM
Bohat khoob Tahir Saheb......Bohat umda peshkash
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14th June 2009, 03:39 PM
As salam walekum! Tahir sahab.............
Wakai aapke kalam mein aapke dil ka dard saaf jhalakta hai.....
Bahut sadgi se aapne yeh kalam likha hai aur behad umda likha hai..........
Aapke likhe sabhi sher pasand aaye........ Daad kabool kijiye......
Aur kuch naya lihiye hume intezar rahenga aako padhne ka.........
YaadoN mein ta umar sama jata hai koi
Bichad ker dil se door kahan jata hai koi
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15th June 2009, 02:54 PM
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As salam walekum! Tahir sahab.............
Wakai aapke kalam mein aapke dil ka dard saaf jhalakta hai.....
Bahut sadgi se aapne yeh kalam likha hai aur behad umda likha hai..........
Aapke likhe sabhi sher pasand aaye........ Daad kabool kijiye......
Aur kuch naya lihiye hume intezar rahenga aako padhne ka.........
YaadoN mein ta umar sama jata hai koi
Bichad ker dil se door kahan jata hai koi
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va alaikum as salam va rahamtullah,
thanks...khwahhish bhai...aapne mujhe padha....
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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15th June 2009, 06:24 PM
Tahir Bhai...aapki nazm padhi bahut acha likha hai aapne.....kuch panktiya dil ko chhu jaati hai....andar ka duand...dard banke bahar nikal ke aata dikhai detaa hai.....aapki nazm mai....aise hi bazm mai aate rahiye....aur aise hi likhte rahiye....humse milte rahiye....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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22nd June 2009, 11:13 PM
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Bohat khoob Tahir Saheb......Bohat umda peshkash
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as salamu alaikum va rahamtullah
thanks sajid bhai....meri ghazal aapko pasand aai,
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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