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25th July 2010, 01:28 PM
Doston, ho sakta hai meri sonch galat ho magar main kafi dino se shayri.com ko follow karta aa raha hoon kai kavitaye post ki, bahut acche comments bhi mile mujhe. magar maine ab tak jo yahan mehsoos kiya hai wo ye ki kai log kavitaon ki tareef sirf isliye karte hain kyon ki wo kavita kisi ladki dawara likhee gai hai. pata nahi unhey aisa kyon lagta hai ki jhooti taarif se wo uski dost ban jayegi fir e-mail id exchange hote hai aur jane kya kya. aur kai baar acchi kavitaon ko koi wah wahi nahi milti kyoni wo kisi ladke ne likhee hoti hai mere shabdon par dhyan dijiyega maine kai baar kaha hai har baar nahi. Main janta hoon sab aise nahi magar haan kuch log hain aise, aur haan agar main ye kahoon ki ladkiya acchi nahi likthi to maine sarasar galat hoonga. maine bahut si kavita padhi hai jo bahut acchi hai aur wo ladkiyon ne hi likhee hai magar kuch log sirf isliye kavita ka reply karte hain ki wo ladki ne likhee hai chahe wo us reply ke kabil ho ya na ho. main ye bhi nahi kehta ki reply mat karo sabka apna nazariya hota hai sabka apna sonch hota hai kisi ko kuch pasand hai kisi ko aur kuch magar jhooti tareef sirf uske rahoon main ek viraam hi lagayega use lagega ki usne jo likhaa wahi sabse accha hai usse accha kuch ho hi nahi sakta to kyon usse aache ki koi kosis karega encourage apni jagha hai aur tareef apni jagha...
ho sakta hai mere is thread se kai logon ko gussa aaye kai logon ka dukh bhi pahuche magar mera maqsad kisi ko dukh ya gussa dilana nahi hai main to bas ye jaanna chahta hoon ki jo cheez mujhe mehsoos hui kya kisi aur ko bhi hui hai. Main maafi chahoonga un doston se jinhe meri is sonch se takleef pahuchi ho  Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai... |
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25th July 2010, 04:21 PM
Santosh sahab AadaaB!
Janab ka SDC meiN suwagat hai.........  Main aksar is section meiN jhankata tak nahi ....... kabhi kisi ne bahut ilteja ki ke yahaaN aauN to hi maiN aata huN... Per aaj aapke sirf ek title ne mujhe yahaaN jhankne pe majboor kar diya aur aapke behad galat khayaal ne reply karne pe......  Aapka jo khayaal hai shayad aapke liye sahiN ho per ek baat aapko bata duN yahaaN har koi har kisi ke post per reply karta hai.......  Ab shayad aapki yeh shikayat hogi ke aapke threads per jyada reply's nahi pade to janab....... maiN apni baat kahta huN mujhe auroN ka nahi pata shayad aapki koi thread meri nazar se nahi gayi ho yaa phir woh wakai jhuti tarif ke kabil rahi hogi to maine reply nahi kiya..... ab auroN ki baat aap se karta huN aapne abhi tak kitne posts per reply kiye hai.... M aine to aapka koi reply nahi dekha aajtak na apni thread per na hi kisi aur kii....  Khair aise khayaal aapke behad galat hai yehi maiN kahuNga... So dost aapse guzarish hai pahele aap apna kartavya nibhaye aur bad meiN auroN ko samjhaye...... ek Sher Naresh jee ki tazaa Gazal ka kahta huN yahaaN.. Aqalmand Hone Ka Yeh Saleeqa Seekha Hai Sabaq Dene Se Pehle Apne Me Jhanktaa Hoon Janab aap bhi yahaaN ke member hai yeh pata chalne ke liye aapko auroN ke post per replys dena sabse zayada zaruri hai........ Jisse aapki pehchaan ho jaye aur baki bhi aapke post per repls deN.... Aur meri yeh Guzarish hai MOD and Admin sahab se ke......... Koi bhi naya member agar yahaaN register karta hai to usko pahele 50 replys dene ki conditions dali jaye tab tak woh koi nayi post na kar sake.... Uske bad jab woh koi post karega to usko bhi replys mileNge .... Aur aise khayaal kisi ke mann meiN nahi aayeNge ke aur log unki post per reply nahi karte hai......... 
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25th July 2010, 05:07 PM
Santosh Ji....Vaise sameer bhai ne 1st reply me sabkuch keh hi diya hai....mere kehne ke liye kuch khaas bacha nahi hai....aap shayri.com 2005 se hai.....humse kaafi purane.....uss liihaaz se ...aap humesha aadarniye hai....maine aapka .....apni kisi post par kabhi koi reply nahi padha......aur naa hi haal me kisi aur ki post par ....aapka reply dekha..yaa padha...
aap apne pure aalekh me ......kisi bhi baat par ..... puri tarha teeke nazar nahi aaye......saare aarop sambhaavit se lage mujhe......jaise .. yaha kuch members ladhkiyon ko hi reply karte hai... naye likhne wale ladhko ko reply nahi karte....chaahe unohne kitna acch likha ho......phir kehte hai .....ladhkiya bhi accha likhti hai......dekho bhai ....sab apni taraf se accha hi likhte hai....jisko jaisa .....jitna pasand aata hai.....yaha sab uske mutaabik reply dete hi hai...iss baat se inqaar nahi kiya jaa sakta.... pehle aap yeh te'y kare ki kehna kya chaahate hai.... aur khudh me jhaankar dekhiye....aap kitna imandaari se yaha sabko reply dete hai..... yaa sirf ghoomne aate hai...kon kya-kya kar raha hai ....kis kis ko reply de raha hai.... aapne jo yaha likha hai.....yeh sirf aapke apne vichaar hai......ise yaha ke members par thopaa nahi jaa sakta......aur naa iske liye kisi ko doshi thehraaya jaa sakta hai..... yeh adab ki mahfil hai......yaha ladhke - ladhkiyon ko reply nahi diya jata .....yaha sab shayar aur shaayraa ke likhe qalaam ko reply diya jaata hai....yaha seekhne seekhane par tabadla khayal kiya jata hai.... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th July 2010, 05:41 PM
santosh saaheb:
namaste! bazm mei.n liKhane waale ka'ii laDke bhee haii.n aur laDkiyaa.n bhee... sabhee apne ehsaas yahaa.n baaNTne kaa haq raKhte hai.n aur sabhee aik doosre ko paDh ke apni raa'ey yahaa.n peSh karte hai.n aapne jo sawaal uThaayaa haii laDkiyo.n ko Reply ziyaadaa'h miltaa haii tou yeh baat Ghalat haii... mai.n jaanna chaahu.ngaa ki aapko kya ko'ii aisaa member diKhaa jo yahaa.n sirf aur sirf laDkiyo.n ko hi paDhne aataa ho.n ya unke Threads par hi Reply detaa ho.n? merii nazar mei.n Shaa'iiree ko laDko aur laDkiyo.n mei.n baaNTnaa Theek nahii.n.. har aik yahaa.n apne dil ke ehsaas baaNT saktaa hai aur har ko'ii uss par apni raa'ey de.n saktaa haii... ! aapne jo ilzaam lagaayaa haii kuChh log sirf aise hi Reply dete hai.n taa.k laDkiyo.n se dostii ho jaaye.n.. aur unka mail ID mile.n! aisaa kabhee deKhaa yaa kisii se sunaa aapne?aisaa tabhee aapne kahaa ho.ngaa jab aapko kuChh to maalUm ho.ngaa ees ke baare mei.n. aur e mail id denaa nah denaa har member ki apni apni marzii haii uss par hum comments nahii.n kar sakte! aur aap hum sab se M'waafii nah maange .. yahaa.n sab apne hai.N aur aapko apni baat sab ke saamne raKhne kaa pooraa haq bantaa haii! bas itnaa hi kahuu.ngaa ki yahaa.n aate rahe.n aur sabhee ko paRhte rahe.n aur apni bhee qeemtee raa'ey peSh kare.n! duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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25th July 2010, 05:43 PM
mere bhai , mere ammi jaan ka naam bhi santosh tha aap ka naam padh ke unki bahut yaad aai aur aapka thread padhne se apne aap ko rok nahi'n saka lekin bahut mayoos hua.
Yaha'n ladki ladke ka koi bhed bhav hamne nahi'n dekha. 21st sadi ke log hain ham aur khushkismat hain ke hamne cycle chlaane sa leke hawai jahaaj udaane jaise inqlabi badlaaw dekhe hain lekin humari soch nahi badli, yaha'n sirf adab aur adeebo'n ka khyal rakha jata hai na ki gender ka. Aap is baat ko apne man se nikaal de. Aur haan sirf takhallus ko padh ke hi kisi ko ladki ya ladka na samajh le . Yaha'n galtfahmi bhi ho sakti hai. Kyunki takhallus zanana ya mardana nahi hote. Apka bhai: Parveen komal MODS. SE GUJARISH : CHIT CHAT ME HAMRI PENDING ARZI BHI KABOOL KIJIE |
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26th July 2010, 01:47 AM
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aapka reply padha maine mujhe lagta hai aapne mere thread ko kuch jayda hi jayati taur par le liye mujhe maaf kijiyega mera iraada bilkul bhi kisi ko hurt karne ka nahi tha aapne kaha hai ki (Aapka jo khayaal hai shayad aapke liye sahiN ho per ek baat aapko bata duN yahaaN har koi har kisi ke post per reply karta hai.......) to maine apne pehle hi line mein ye likhaa hai ki ho sakta hai meri sonch galat ho.... main khud apni baat par kayam nahi hoon ye mera sirf ek khayaal hai maine kisi ek par ilzaam nahi lagaya hai. fir bhi aapko aisa laga to uske liye tahe dil se maafi. ab aapki dusari baat aapne ye kaha ki (Ab shayad aapki yeh shikayat hogi ke aapke threads per jyada reply's nahi pade to janab....... maiN apni baat kahta huN mujhe auroN ka nahi pata shayad aapki koi thread meri nazar se nahi gayi ho yaa phir woh wakai jhuti tarif ke kabil rahi hogi to maine reply nahi kiya..... ab auroN ki baat aap se karta huN aapne abhi tak kitne posts per reply kiye hai...) to kwahish ki mujhe bilkul bhi ye shikayat nahi hai ki kisi ne mere threads par reply nahi kiya balki maine to khud kaha hai ki mujhe bahut se reply mile hain (kai kavitaye post ki, bahut acche comments bhi mile mujhe.) magar aapne na jane mere is sadharan si baat ko kyon shikayat samaj le aur aapne mujhe hi nishaane par rak diya khair koi nahi sabki apni sonch hoti hai aapki sonch ki bhi main kadrr karta hoon..... aur sabse aakhri aapki ye baat thi ki (So dost aapse guzarish hai pahele aap apna kartavya nibhaye aur bad meiN auroN ko samjhaye.....) ho sakta hai maine apna kartavya nahi nibhaya ho kya sakta hai,,,, hai wajah sirf ye ki mujhe aap logon jaisi kavita ko samjhne ki samjh nahi hai, main koi kavi nahi hoon, koi shayar nahi hoon, mere ek shukh hai jab bhi kuch shabd mere man mein ghoomte hain to maine unhey kabhi mobile ke sms box main ya kabhi purs mai pade kisi visiting card ke peeche likh leta hoon. aur jabhi bhi thoda waqt milta hai use yahan post kar deta hoon taki zindgi ke kinhee lamho mein main in pal ko yaad kar sakoon. mere paas jayada online hone ka samay nahi mil pata isliye apni kavita post kar deta hoon. kabhi kabhi koi kavita acchi lagti hai to unhey padh kar preyrit hota hon magar haan reply nahi kar pata, yakin janiye maine kisi ko kuch samjhane ki koi bhi kosis nahi ki hai ye sab mera ek khayal tha, ek sonch thi meine to apne thread mein ye likha tha ki (main to bas ye jaanna chahta hoon ki jo cheez mujhe mehsoos hui kya kisi aur ko bhi hui hai. ) bas jayada kuch nahi maine apne thread main pehle hi sab se mafi maang li the magar main fir aapse bhi ek baar maafi chahoonga ki aapko mera ye post karna bura laga. chahe to admin sahab is post ko hamesha ke liye delete kar sakte hain mujeh koi aapatti nahi hogi Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai... |
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26th July 2010, 02:05 AM
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aapki bhi raaye padhi mujhe khud ke khayal tha ki kahin na kahin main galat hoon fir bhi maine aapni raaye aap sab ke aage rakhee, jaanta tha ki kai log hurt bhi honge aapne kai logo ke reply main unka gussa bhi dekha hoga magar fir bhi maine ye post likhaa sirf ye jaan-ne ke liye ki main kitna sahi hoon aur kitna galat koi bhi insaan mukammal taur par sahi nahi ho sakta main bhi to ek insaan hi hoon ab agar ye khayal mere man mein SDC ko le kar aaya to kya karta man main hi rakhta. nahi na isliye maine aap se ye jaan-na chahaa ki kya ye khayal mere dimaag ka sirf ek veham hai ya kuch aur logon ko bhi ye mehsoos hua hai.. baki jaisa maine kaha ki agar is post se kisi ko takleef pahuchi ho to main tahe dil se maafi chahoonga................... Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai... |
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26th July 2010, 02:10 AM
Santosh sahab Janab aap khud hi apni baat per nahi to phir bhai aapki is post ka matalb kya hua........
Sahab yeh mehfil shayar aur shayraoN ki hai...... na ki ladki aur ladkoN ki aapki baat itni galat lagi ke maiN yahaaN reply kiye bina rah nahi saka warna maiN is section meiN jhankta tak nahi ...... Khair aap jaane aapki problem kya hai....... bus yehi kahuNga ke aap yahaaN ke seniour member hai maiN abhi dekha...... aap 2005 se yahaaN ke member hai aur janaab ki sirf 67 replys hai ......  jo shayad meri kalaam se bhi kam hai maiN koi khinchai wali baat nahi kah raha huN..... baat sahiN hai ke janab aapne abhi tak koi replys tak nahi kiye phir aapke mann meiN aisi baat aana achcha nahi lagta.... Wel maiN abhi tak aapko koi naya member samjh ker hi reply diya tha aap to humare bhi seniour nikle ab kya kaheN.....  Aur aap apni baat per bhi kayaam nahi to phir bahas ka koi matlab hi nahi hai  Aur Bhai yahaaN kisi ko taklif waklif nahi hoti hai aap itminaan rakhiye..... KyuN ke yahaaN kisi ke pass dil nahi hai isliye hi shayaar hai sab..... Khair aapne apne mann ki baat rakhi achcha laga aur sachi kahuN maiN bhi aapki baat se kuch hadh tak sehmat huN ke shoharaoN ki post's per jyada replys padte hai....... Nice to meet you..... Take care...... Khuda Hafez.....
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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26th July 2010, 07:13 PM
ye nayi baat rahi, abhi tak islaah, beizzati, reputation ki baat thi, ab ladke ladkiyoN ki, sahi hai.....!!
 koi yahaaN agar sirf padhne aur share karne aata ho, tab to vo gaya kaam se....!!  Zidd bhai kahaaN ho, aap hi bache ho yahaaN faisala sunaane ko....!!  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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