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एक उम्र गुज़ार दी हमने तनहाईयों में by Benaam shayar
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एक उम्र गुज़ार दी हमने तनहाईयों में by Benaam shayar - 19th May 2015, 05:52 PM

एक उम्र गुज़ार दी हमने तनहाईयों में,
बची खुची अब गुजर रही हैं रुसवाईयों में।

गम की सिसकियाँ सुनता भी कोई तो कैसे,
दर्द की आवाज़ दब गई शहनाईयों में

सारे शहर की रौनक जिसे बहला न सकी,
खुश है वो शख्स आज मगर वीरानीयों में

रहने दो मुझे अँधेरों में, मैं यही अच्छा हूँ,
डर लगता है अब मुझे शहर की रंगीनियों में..!!


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20th May 2015, 12:55 PM

Very nice sharing.

I appreciate your efforts.


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27th May 2015, 05:27 PM

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एक उम्र गुज़ार दी हमने तनहाईयों में,
बची खुची अब गुजर रही हैं रुसवाईयों में।

गम की सिसकियाँ सुनता भी कोई तो कैसे,
दर्द की आवाज़ दब गई शहनाईयों में

सारे शहर की रौनक जिसे बहला न सकी,
खुश है वो शख्स आज मगर वीरानीयों में

रहने दो मुझे अँधेरों में, मैं यही अच्छा हूँ,
डर लगता है अब मुझे शहर की रंगीनियों में..!!

Anil ji, bahut acchi poetry share ki hai aapne....shukriya


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27th May 2015, 05:29 PM

i hope this time there is no complaint abt poetry sharing. i m happy you like it Virender ji


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