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6th October 2007, 05:18 PM
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heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... kitna formal the hum dono ek time pe...

Aaj aapki yeh behad khoobsoorat rachna ek baar phir se padhi aur phir se bahut khushi hui.... kaise yeh rishte zindagi ka maksad ban jaate hain pata bhi nahi chalta...

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haaa sahin kaha tumne...kitne formal the hum dono.....aur hume milane ka shrey sanju ko jaata hain kyunki pehli baar yahoo pe humari baat usne hi karvayi thi....aaj uska bday hai..really miss him a alot....tum bhi apna khyal rakhna..aur mera PM padhke tips dear...

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6th October 2007, 05:21 PM
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Aadab mausam ji,
kaise hai aap?

wah kya baat hai aapki,
ek _ ek misra maano kayi baate keh raha ho,

aapke yeh ehsaas wakayi kabile tarif hain.
bohot hi khoob,
Allah or kamiyabi ata kare,aamin

khush rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ
Shukriya sony for liking it.....

allah hafiz..
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6th October 2007, 05:23 PM
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bahut khoob likha hai mausam jii, khudaa kare aap ke sabhi sapne aur khwaayisheN poorii hi jaaye. "AAMIN"

aise hee likhate rahiye
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Shukriya manuji pasand karne ke liye....

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6th October 2007, 05:26 PM
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Mausam ji
kese ho aap???

Mausam ji aapki ye rachna ko dekhke pehle to mujhe baRa dukh hua ki aapki itni behtareen rachna ko hum aaj paR pa rahe hai...

bahut khub mausam ji
bahut hi dard bhare ehsaason se rachna ko sajaya hai....saf nazar aa raha hai dard rachna ko padhte padhte.....kash wo padh pate aapke in ehsaason ko..

mehfil ko yuhi sajate rahiyega
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Merul
main acchi hoon merul...

aap kaise hain????

pasand karne ka shukriya.......haan harkisi mein hunar kaha ehsaasson ko padhne ka....

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Kya baat hai 29, likhna kab se shuru kar diya?......bich me kaha chali gain thhi.....itni purani post padhne ko mili...wah wah......

Suran woman......likha bahot achha hai....bahot pasand aaya......shayad khayalo me likha hai...title bahot achha laga di.......baaki shayri ki tarif karti.......lekin late ho rahi hu...class aten karni hai nahahahahahaha

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grazie

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bas kya 17???mujhe chidane ka koi mauka nahin chodogi tum kyun???....bich main gayab ho gayi thi..thi kuch probs....details ke liye baad mein contact kare..heeeeeeee

kya suran woman.....Dlolz..aise lag raha hain koi superpower de rahin hain mujhe...kya yaar mere naam ke saath jodne ke liye suran hi mila..ganda sa..cheee

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6th October 2007, 05:34 PM
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namaskaar mausam di

kya baat hai didi, cha gaye mehfil mein....padte padte yun laga k jaise apne khwaabon ko likha hai. bahut khub janab, dil ko chu gayi yeh pyaari si nazm. tag line is really really really good. daad hajir hai, kabul kijiye.

apna khyaal rakeiyga

aapka chota bhai

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Shukriya manish itni housla afazayi ke liye...waise tum itne gayab kyun rehte ho???

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7th November 2007, 01:21 AM
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Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai
Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi
Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa
Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi
Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke aankho ke darpan main basate ho yun
Ek aansoo ban palko main hai chhup jate
Ek moti ki tarah sanjo rakha hai ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa
Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi
Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

kitni ajub hei ye tehreer , sab keh ke bhi kitna kuch unkaha reh gaya ho jaise

jaise kali chatakte chatake reh gayee ho

jaise sooraj mukhi apna jalva dikhate dikhate simat ke reh gaya ho

jaise rang e hina hatheli mein chupi taqdeer ki lakeeron ki manind madham see reh gayee ho........

ajub hotee hien dilki baatain ,

na kahee jayen

na kahe bina raha jaye

jo dilke pass hota hei vo sath nahi hota

jo sath hei vo apna naai ho pata

kuch aisa hee ehsas is hasas see tehreer mein ,


pyaree se larkee ki piyaree see tehreer ,

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7th November 2007, 04:10 PM
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Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai
Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi
Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa
Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi
Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke aankho ke darpan main basate ho yun
Ek aansoo ban palko main hai chhup jate
Ek moti ki tarah sanjo rakha hai ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa
Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi
Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si


Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa
Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi
Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si


bohat khoob didi ye ashar bohat ache lage mujhe yunhi likhte rahiye khush rahain

Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai
Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi
Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si


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4th December 2008, 12:47 AM
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Ke har mulakat tumsi kyu lagti hai
Jaise rah gayi koi baat unkahi
Kaise bataun mein tumse yeh kah du ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke yeh preet ka bandhan hai kaisa
Ek rishta yeh ki jiska koi naam nahi
Kyu nahi tumko apna keh paati ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke aankho ke darpan main basate ho yun
Ek aansoo ban palko main hai chhup jate
Ek moti ki tarah sanjo rakha hai ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si

Ke ek sapna ho to tum kuch aisa
Jo toot jaata har subah adhura hi
Khwaab main bhi puri na ho ke
Tum ho meri ek khwahish adhuri si
Mausam Di
kaise ho aap ...

bahot hi dard bhara ehesaas hai ...
daad dilse


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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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