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lagte hain mere sabhi kisse afsane se.... - 20th June 2009, 02:25 PM
Doston...bazm ko mera aadaab......pesh -e-khidmat hai phir ek nayi koshish....Ummeed hai aapke dil ko chhuagi....aap sab ke sujhavo ka intezaar rahega...


Kehtein hain log ke lagte hain mere sabhi kisse afsane se,
Koi bataye unhe ke nahi chhupa pata apne gam ,mai is zamane se.


Mile the jo jakhm kabhi mujhe teri mohabbat mein barson pehle,
Lo phir taaza ho gaye kuch zakhm ,aaj wo purane se.

Suna hai ke rakkhe hain tune sambhaal kar gam tamaam,
De hame bhi aaj kuch aur gam , tere us khazane se.


Ban ke saaki pilaye the jo kabhi tune jaam nigaahon ke,
Pila de aaj hame zeher ka jaam ,tere usi paimane se.


Juda hai dil mera kitni muddaton mein tujhse milkar, (“juda” for "recovered”)
Ho sake to tod de aaj ye dil mera , phir kisi bahane se.

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20th June 2009, 06:15 PM
taNhaa dil jee:

namaste!

sab se pehle tou Shaa'iiree Parivaar meiN aapka maiN tah-e-dil se swaagat kartaa huuN... pehli baar aapki koShiSh se ru-ba-ru huaa.. aik achchhi koShiSh..! duaa hai Zor-e-qalaam aur baRheN zeyaadaah! maShQ YuuNhi zaaree raKheN..! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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taNhaa dil jee:

namaste!

sab se pehle tou Shaa'iiree Parivaar meiN aapka maiN tah-e-dil se swaagat kartaa huuN... pehli baar aapki koShiSh se ru-ba-ru huaa.. aik achchhi koShiSh..! duaa hai Zor-e-qalaam aur baRheN zeyaadaah! maShQ YuuNhi zaaree raKheN..! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Doston...bazm ko mera aadaab......pesh -e-khidmat hai phir ek nayi koshish....Ummeed hai aapke dil ko chhuagi....aap sab ke sujhavo ka intezaar rahega...


Kehtein hain log ke lagte hain mere sabhi kisse afsane se,
Koi bataye unhe ke nahi chhupa pata apne gam ,mai is zamane se.


Mile the jo jakhm kabhi mujhe teri mohabbat mein barson pehle,
Lo phir taaza ho gaye kuch zakhm ,aaj wo purane se.

Suna hai ke rakkhe hain tune sambhaal kar gam tamaam,
De hame bhi aaj kuch aur gam , tere us khazane se.


Ban ke saaki pilaye the jo kabhi tune jaam nigaahon ke,
Pila de aaj hame zeher ka jaam ,tere usi paimane se.


Juda hai dil mera kitni muddaton mein tujhse milkar, (“juda” for "recovered”)
Ho sake to tod de aaj ye dil mera , phir kisi bahane se.
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sabhi sher bahot pyare hai.....dil chu gaye
keep up dost
keep writing n smiling
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sabhi sher bahot pyare hai.....dil chu gaye
keep up dost
keep writing n smiling
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Thank U so much Praneeta ji........Thanx for encouraging..keep reading & writing.

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22nd June 2009, 05:41 PM
kya baat hai janab
din ba din aapki Qalam se, ek se bade ek lajawab tahreer dekhne ko
mil rahi hai ..........
ehesaas bahot achha laga hume

khus rahiye

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kya baat hai janab
din ba din aapki Qalam se, ek se bade ek lajawab tahreer dekhne ko
mil rahi hai ..........
ehesaas bahot achha laga hume

khus rahiye

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24th June 2009, 02:39 PM
Hi!

Very Nice Indeed! Nostalgic!
I came here after a huge GAP!
Trust me! You guys have made it even more better!

God Bless You!
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Very Nice Indeed! Nostalgic!
I came here after a huge GAP!
Trust me! You guys have made it even more better!

God Bless You!
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Thank U Sir.....I m glad that u liked it...keep replying

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Tanha Jii

Aapki tahreeron ke ahsaas wakai kabile tarif hai
behad achcha likha hai aapne har lafz main sachchai nazar aati hai..


Likhate rahiye aur aapne ahsaas se ruberu karate rahiye...

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Aapki tahreeron ke ahsaas wakai kabile tarif hai
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Likhate rahiye aur aapne ahsaas se ruberu karate rahiye...

Khush rahiye....
bahot bahot shukriya..kwahish ji...aapka saath raha to likhta rahunga

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