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"maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti" - 9th December 2008, 08:26 PM

Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti



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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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9th December 2008, 08:37 PM

main to pehle keh chuka hun .. tumhari soch aur likne ka junoon zabardast hai.. bas bareekiyoN pe dhyaan rakho .. tum bohat umda shayaraoN maiN naam darj karogi apna .. mujhe yakeen hai ...

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9th December 2008, 09:54 PM

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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti

wah diya ji bahut acha likha hai apne
mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti


apka ye sher hume bahut pasnad aaya hai
khush rahiye humesha
dil se dua karege apke liye


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9th December 2008, 10:04 PM

wow..........mind blowing.....Diya majja aa gaya padkar, har sher mein teekhapan hai, bahut khoob

tu apne jhoothe waade apne saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

yeh sher bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya....bahut umda likha hai, technically to jayada main bhi nahi jaanti par ahsaas....superb

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kush raho
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Roshni ki diii


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11th December 2008, 12:58 PM

diya ji aapki yeh ghazal bohut achi hai thank you aapne isse share kiya bohut hi pyara hai dua karti hu aap hamesha aise hi likhti rahegi apne khyal rakhiye bye


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11th December 2008, 05:12 PM

Wah Diya JHi,
har ek ehsas jaise dil se nikle ho, bahot acha likha hai apne, har ek shair badi hi gahrai se aur sadgi se kaha hai apne.
likhte rahiye,
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wah diya ji bahot achha likhti hain..aap


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waaah!! - 11th December 2008, 05:46 PM

ye DIYA is qadar noor chhalkayega,pata nahin tha.main jaldi kisi gazal se prabhaavit nahin hota..magar ye gazal mujhe majboor karti hai,ki kahoon..'Masha Allah kya khoob gazal hai'.
Waaah!!


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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....




maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti
   
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12th December 2008, 06:10 PM

Bahut khub ghazal hain diya...............

Sab ke sab ashaar acche lage....dil se daad!........

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti


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superb.........................



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Aadaab Diya ji
waah bahut asardaar kalaam aapne pesh kiya jisne zehen pe ek jadoo sa asar kar diya har sher bahut khoobsoorat bana hai kafi waqt baad kisi ne mehfil mein itna umda kalaam pesh kiya hai.........bande ki daad kubool farmaye aur likhti rahe........God Bless You


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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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21st December 2008, 04:53 AM

Diyaa Jee Aadaab ! namaskaar ! Aslam u alaikum !


app ka kalam to beHad passand aaya ...maiN app se aik baat poochna chahta hoN keh app kis se seekh rahi haiN ghazal likhna , kiyoN keh jis tereH nikhaar app ki ghazloN maiN aa raha hai aisa lagta hai keh app ke ustaad-e-moHteram nihayat hi Qabil tareen shakhsiyat haiN unki meHnat app ke kalam meN saaf saaf nazar aa rahi hai .


meri T~araf se unhaiN bhi aur app ko bhi teh dil se daad haazir hai , youNhi meHfiloN ko sajaate rahiye ...


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24th December 2008, 10:27 AM

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
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tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
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main to pehle keh chuka hun .. tumhari soch aur likne ka junoon zabardast hai.. bas bareekiyoN pe dhyaan rakho .. tum bohat umda shayaraoN maiN naam darj karogi apna .. mujhe yakeen hai ...

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aapki Dua younhi saath rahe humesha ....

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30th December 2008, 10:40 AM

Hi Diya,
As usual...u r the best....... aapki yeh gazal dilko chu gayi.aise hi likhtey rahiye.



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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti

DIya Diya Diyaa

Katl hai Katl

har sher kamaal hai .. khyaal aur way of expression . jabardast ...............



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apka ye sher hume bahut pasnad aaya hai
khush rahiye humesha
dil se dua karege apke liye

Sukriya Dinu
tum humesha meri khusi hi chahate ho ...
main khusnaseeb hun , mujhe tumahare jaisa dost mila
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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti



bahot hi uumda likha hain diya ji aapne
yaad na rakhte huwe bhi kitna kuch yaad kiya hain

bahot hi sundar aur muje aapki yeh line behad aachi lagi hain

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti



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wow..........mind blowing.....Diya majja aa gaya padkar, har sher mein teekhapan hai, bahut khoob

tu apne jhoothe waade apne saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

yeh sher bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya....bahut umda likha hai, technically to jayada main bhi nahi jaanti par ahsaas....superb

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kush raho
pyar ke saath
Roshni ki diii
Pyaari Di,
muaaf kijiyega jawab dene mein bahot hi der kar diya maine ...aaj kal waqt nahin milta mahfil mein aane keliye ...

ghazal aapko pasand aayi mujhe bahot khusi hui ...aise bhi jo hai aapki roshni
sab aapki pyaar aur saath ka natijaa hai ...koshish karoongi aur bhi achha likhun

humesha apni Ujala ka saath dijiyega
miss u lot

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diya ji aapki yeh ghazal bohut achi hai thank you aapne isse share kiya bohut hi pyara hai dua karti hu aap hamesha aise hi likhti rahegi apne khyal rakhiye bye
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younhi saath detey rahiye ...........

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Wah Diya JHi,
har ek ehsas jaise dil se nikle ho, bahot acha likha hai apne, har ek shair badi hi gahrai se aur sadgi se kaha hai apne.
likhte rahiye,
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humari ghazal pasand aayi aapki hume khusi hui
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Sukriya Raz jee...........................



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ye DIYA is qadar noor chhalkayega,pata nahin tha.main jaldi kisi gazal se prabhaavit nahin hota..magar ye gazal mujhe majboor karti hai,ki kahoon..'Masha Allah kya khoob gazal hai'.
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Prashant jee Namaskar,
yeh meri khusnaseeb hai ki aap is thread per nazar daale ....is nachees ko apni kimti raye sunaye .........

aapki Reply dekh kar main itni khus hui thi ki .... Sunita Di ko pm karke batayi............

"Di aaj ka din mereliye bahot lucky hai ,Prashant jee mere thread per Replay kiye hai"vo baat mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai ,main jab bhi is thread ko dekhti hun bahot khus ho jati hu.

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Bahut khub ghazal hain diya...............

Sab ke sab ashaar acche lage....dil se daad!........

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti

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Reply dene main bahot der kardiya maine ..plz muaaf kijiyega
aaj kal aap mahfil meiN nazar hi nahi aate ...?
bahot busy ho kya?

aapko meri koshish achha laga mujhe khusi hui
youn hi Dua.oN meiN yaad rakhiyega

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Wah Diyaa Jii amazing...

Diyaa jii aapki is Gazal ki tarif lafzon me kaduN to shayad kaam pad jaye..

Wakai behad dilfareb ahsaason se ise aapne baqoobi bayan kiya hai....

Aur aapki is gazal se hum jaise shayad kai logon ko jeene ke liye nayi rah
mili hai amazing...

Yunhi likhti rahiye..

Khush rahiye...........

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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti

Diya ji ko mera salaam, aaj muddatoN baad shayri ka sa mizaaz hua to yahaaN aa pahuNcha, kaafi kuch padha au dekha, yakeen maaniye aapka ye kalaam bahut ahchi raah pe hai, bas isme chand cheezeN iske flow ko kharaab si karti hui maloom hui. Jaise ki

"ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti"

sher ke is doosre line me "MAIN" lafz aapko hataa dena chahiye. Kyunki ye understood hai ki apni hi baat kar rahi haiN. Aisa hi mujhe ek-do aur jagah dikha. Bas yahi salaah duNga ki aap apna likha ek baar padheN, aur fir aap unme se jitne v lafz kam kar sakeN jinke hataane bawjud koi farq nahiN padta, unhe hataa deN, aur khud dekhiye ki kis tarah kalaam me aur jyada nikhaar aa jaata hai. Agar kahiN kuch jyada keh gaya huN ya koi baat buri lage to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga....!!

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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti
Diya ji

aapki saari nazm mai mere liye ye kehna mushkil ho raha hai...kis sher ko kahu ki ye sabse acha hai....puri ki puri ghazal hi itni achi hai...baar baar padhne ka dil karta hai....

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Kya likhti ho ap, maan gaye apko, im so proud of u........... meri dost toh ekdum superstar hai, kya awesome likhti ho.........................Hat's Off to you........

Haan woh dard ki yaadein purani nahi rakhti,
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Yeh toh "Diya" hai roshan karti hai khushiyan,
Gam aur udasi ki koi kahani nai rakhti.....

Ur THE BEST...................................

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maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti



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Mahfil main Sabhi dostoN ko Diya ka salaam....Ek chhoti si koshish ke saath fir haazir huN aapke samne ....
Ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....


maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti
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waaah diya....bohat accha laga apki shayri padh ke..kuuch apne junoon ki jhalak dikhai di...bas waqt ke sath,apna ye junoon barkaar rakhna....badalna mat aur likhte rehna...gud
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bahut khub - 25th May 2009, 03:55 PM

Dear Diya ji

namaskar... main aaj pahali baar aapko padh raha hoon. aapki likhi lines bottom to heart hain.. mujhe achchha laga..

maiN dard ki yaadeiN vo puraanii nahi rakhti
apne zehan meiN koi kahaanii nahi rakhti

jindagi ko jine ka andaaj behad pasand aaya..sahi mayane mein dard ki yadein khushi nahi balki gham ko jinda kerke rakhati hain..aur ensaan ko khushi ki jarurat hoti hai

biite hue lamhoN ko bhulana hi munaasib
guzre hue kal ki maiN rawaanii nahi rakhti

achchha laga yun hi..andaze bayan ki zarurat rahati hai

aihsaan mere dil pe kyoN karta hai iss Qadar
laalach meiN kii achhayii bhi maanii nahi rakhti

lalach aur upkar dono ek sath nahi rah sakte..bahut khub

kah jata hai kaajal mera ashQoN ki kahaani
ghum laakh ho aaNkhoN meiN maiN paanii nahi rakhti

samajhane vaale ke liye esara hi bahut kuch hota hai..bas najar chahiye pahchanne ke liye

tuu apne jhoothe waade tere saath le ke ja
maiN bhoolne waaloN ki nishanii nahi rakhti

bahut khub...sabse behtarin andaz apki lekhani ka..

mujh ko Diya kahte haiN maiN jal jal ke jeetee huN
roshan ye shab e ghum maiN zubaanii nahi rakhti


roshan jaha ko kerna fitarat hai... jalana diya ka naseeb..aur Diya ne apni amit nishani **** di hai... bahut khubsurat andaaz..

ant mein yahi kahana chahunga ki aap ne jo apane dil ki baat likhi..use dil ne kabul fermaya aur reply likhe bina nahi raha gaya.. esi tarah likhati rahiye aur hum sabhi ko padhane/sikhane ka muka dete rahiye..

Shubhkamnao sahit,

Akant...


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