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4th March 2007, 03:29 AM
hello friends,
ek arse ke baad phir haazir hui hun apne kalaam ke saath,umeed hai aapke dilon mai ek choti si jagah banaane mai kamyaab hojaau. to lijiyee,haazir hai, ----------------------- kabhie dil jale,kyon hum mile?? jo hum mile,to gham mile, kuch pal ke they yeh jo gul khile, ab har peher,aankhen nam mile. woh har lamha yaad aaye baar baar, woh milna aur, phir milne ka intezaar, na rehsaka kismat per kuch ikhtiyaar, ek pal mai hi sab hogaya zaar zaar. gar hosake mujhe bhooljaa, tuu door jaa,mujhe bhool jaa, ab hum sanam kabhie na milen, kar yeh ahed aur door jaa. karti hain ab sargoshiyaan, aur poochti hain yeh waadiyaan, yeh kyon hua?kuch to bata, phaili hain kyon tanhaayiaan???? gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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5th March 2007, 07:54 AM
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namaskar aaj bahut dino ke baad aapki koi nazm padne ko mili aapki tarah main bhii aaj kal yahaa.n kam hi aa pata hoon yakiin maniye aapki nazm bahut shandar hai ehsas dil se nikle hain daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega woh har lamha yaad aaye baar baar, woh milna aur, phir milne ka intezaar, hii bhut pyara ehsas hai sach me shukriya  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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6th March 2007, 06:49 PM
namskaar aur adaab sara jee:
bahot dino ke baad aap bazm meiN nazar aayi khusHii hui aapko yahaaN deKh ke mujhe aur sath me bahot hi khoob andaaz ke sath nazm bhi pesH kii aapne..jaise ki mere dost dilip ne kaha hai ki seedhe dil se nikle ehsaasoN se saji hui hai yeH aapki nazm.aise hi liKHte raheN.. apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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7th March 2007, 10:57 AM
hi saara ji
how r u? aapko pehli dafa padh raha hu aur aapne kaha hai ki aap lambe arse baad yaha aye hai to aap koshish karenge ki sabke dil mein ek jagah bana paye .. par sara ji aap ek baat to janlo .... just minute hum aapko wo shayri ke andaaz mein kahenge.. Hum agar aapse mil nahi pate, Aisa nahi ki aap yaad nahi aate, Mana ki saare riste nibhaye nahi jate, Magar jo dil mein bas jate hai use bhulaye nahi jaate. sara ji aapki rachna hamein pasand aayi aur aapne jo usmein sawal karke ise sajaya hai wo hamare dil ko bhaya hai, sara ji jo aapne sawal karke apna pyaar jataya hai wo sayad hi koi jata pata hai, aap hamari taraf se dad kabul ki jiyega dost ese hi likhte rehna aur mehfil sajate rehna aapka dost Merul Quote:
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woh har lamha yaad aaye baar baar, woh milna aur, phir milne ka intezaar, na rehsaka kismat per kuch ikhtiyaar, ek pal mai hi sab hogaya zaar zaar. yun to saari tehreer hii behtar hai........meri daad kabool kijiyega.........raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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10th March 2007, 10:09 PM
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aadaab dilip ji, kaise hain aap?bahut khushi hui aapko yahan dekh.aapko meri koshish pasand aayi jaankar khushi hui bahut.yunhin meri hausla afzaai karte rahiyega. aate rahiyega,take care. bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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11th March 2007, 12:04 PM
kabhie dil jale,kyon hum mile?? jo hum mile,to gham mile, kuch pal ke they yeh jo gul khile, ab har peher,aankhen nam mile. woh har lamha yaad aaye baar baar, woh milna aur, phir milne ka intezaar, na rehsaka kismat per kuch ikhtiyaar, ek pal mai hi sab hogaya zaar zaar. gar hosake mujhe bhooljaa, tuu door jaa,mujhe bhool jaa, ab hum sanam kabhie na milen, kar yeh ahed aur door jaa. karti hain ab sargoshiyaan, aur poochti hain yeh waadiyaan, yeh kyon hua?kuch to bata, phaili hain kyon tanhaayiaan???? Hi Akelijaan, Bahut hi khoobsurat aashaar hain... Bahut acche se aapne apne ehsaas bayaan kiye hain... Aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiyega... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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11th March 2007, 01:28 PM
Assalam walekum sara ji,
kaisi hai aap? bohot dino baad aapko padha,, dilse kehti hun,bohot khushi hui aapko padke. bas aise hi Allah aapko tarakki de,AAMIN APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE ALLAH HAFIZ **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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12th March 2007, 05:17 PM
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kysee hai aap or kaha thi itne din? bahut din ke baat aapko shayri.com per ek khubsurat rachna ke saath dekha bahut khushi hui aapko dekhker. aapki post bhi bahut achee hai ekdam dil ko cho deti hai woh har lamha yaad aaye baar baar, woh milna aur, phir milne ka intezaar, na rehsaka kismat per kuch ikhtiyaar, ek pal mai hi sab hogaya zaar zaar. ye line mujhe sabse jada pasand aai umeed kerta hun ki aagi bhi aap likhtee rahegi. is intezaar ke saath alwida leta hun. or saath hi duaaon ke saath ki aap khush rahe or muskurate rahe. aapka dost SHAAN Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. ........Shaan...... |
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17th March 2007, 03:45 PM
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kaise hain aap?bahut khushi hoti hai aapko apni post per dekh kar.aap hamesha hi meri hausla afzaai karte hai,meri shayri ko saraahte hain.yunhin is nacheez ka saath dete rahiyega. thnx a lot.khush rahiye n take care. bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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22nd March 2007, 07:32 PM
kismat par kaha iktiyaar rahta hai dost aapne bhaut sach kaha hai sara
aapki baat apni si lagi bhaut dino ke baad padha aapko padhna bhaut achha laga 
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28th March 2007, 01:49 AM
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hi merul ji, kaise shukriya aada karun aapka samjh nahi aaraha.aapne to bahut tareef kardi shayad iske mai qaabil hi nahi.aapki daad sar aankhon par.bas isi tarah meri hausla afzaai karte rahiyega aur mai koshish karti rahungi ke isi tarah aage bhi likhti rahun. tc,bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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28th March 2007, 01:53 AM
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kaise hain aap?bahut bahut shukriya meri post per aane ka .aap to hamesha hi meri hausla afzaai karte hain mere likha pasand karte hain.bahut khushi hoti hai aapko meri posts per dekh.aapki daad sar aankhon par.bas isi tarah aage bhi is nacheez ka saath dete rahiyega. tc,bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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5th April 2007, 11:42 AM
hello pulkitji,
khushi hui aapko apni post per dekh.jaisa bhi likha hai,aapse to kamtar hi hai. aapko mera likha pasand aaya,inayat aapki.yunhin aage bhi husla afzaai karte rahiyega. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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5th April 2007, 11:48 AM
adaab sony ji,
kaisi hain aap?bahut acha laga apko yahan dekh.yunhin saath deti rahiyega. khush rahen, tc,bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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5th April 2007, 11:51 AM
adaa shaan ji,
kaise shukriya adaa karun aapka,bahut zayada hi tareef kardi aapne.bas upar waale se yehi chahungi ki mai is tareef ke kaabil bansakun. umeed hai ki aage bhi yunhin aapkasaath milta rahega. khush rahen,tc, bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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5th April 2007, 11:56 AM
hi shrddha ji,
thnx aaapne apne keemti waqt mai se mere liye bhi waqt nikala.aage bhi yunhin saath deti rahiyega. tc,bye gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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5th April 2007, 06:50 PM
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Sara jee: Kya baat hai! ehsaasoN ko ba-khubii piroya hai aap ne lafzoN meiN.. aap ke dard par waah! to nahiiN kar sakta par aap ke ess kalaam ko paRh kar ek Sher Zehn meiN ubhara, aap ke liye wahii sher arz karta huuN... Yeh kaisi roshani se roshan huaa aaj mehfil lagta hai dil jala kar koii aaya hai bazm meiN Likhati raheiN.. Take care -Mayank |
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9th April 2007, 10:44 AM
hello ji
aaj apko pehli baar pada aur bahut achha laga. dua hai ke aap aise hi likhte rahe Thanx & Regards Jasdeep Singh |
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10th April 2007, 10:42 AM
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sara main bhi ek lambe arse ke baad hi jaha aaye hoon, aur aapne pariwaar mein loutne ki kushi bahut hoti hai..tum bhi janti ho. sara aapki yeh nazam dil-fareb laggi, giley-shikwe karti laggi, jo bhi hai, mujhe bahut acchi laggi. aapki sunita  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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22nd April 2007, 06:50 PM
waaahh kya baat hia akelijaan.. mien bhi aapki tarah akeli jaan hi hu..
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23rd April 2007, 04:28 PM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd April 2007, 08:14 PM
Pyari Sara..
Bahut der baad tumhara likha kuch padh rahi hun.. bahut hi khoobsoorat lagi tumhari yeh kalaam.. Khaaskar ke ye lines.. woh har lamha yaad aaye baar baar, woh milna aur, phir milne ka intezaar, na rehsaka kismat per kuch ikhtiyaar, ek pal mai hi sab hogaya zaar zaar. Daad kubool karo dost! Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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3rd August 2007, 12:10 AM
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zabze pehle to der ze reply karne ke liye maafi chahungi.. aapko apni poztz per dekhti hun to lagta hai ke baz apni mehnat zafal hui...bahut bahut khuzhi hoti hai aapke revievz padhke.. aapne meri iz haqeer zi kozhizh ke liye vaqt nikala aur ize pazand kiya, tah-e-dil ze zhukrguzaar hun aapki. umeed karti hun aage bhi aapka zaath milta rahega. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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3rd August 2007, 12:12 AM
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gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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aap unmai ze hai jo hamezha hi mujhe zaraahti hai,mera zaath deti hai.iz zaath ko izi tarah barqaraar rakhiyega zunita ji..aati rahiyega. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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per apne yeh nahi bataya ke aapko meri nazm kaisi lagi,zaroor bataiyega.. umeed karti hun aapka saath yunhin barqaraar rahega gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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21st August 2007, 05:09 PM
sunita ji aapko meri nazm itni pasand aayi ke aapne dobara reply kiya..mujhe sach bahut khushi hui..yunhin saath deti rahiyegaa
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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21st August 2007, 05:15 PM
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kaisi ho??? tumahari daad sar aakhon per..khushi hui jaanker tumhe yeh lines zayada pasand aayi. aage bhi yunhin saath deti rehna.. take care gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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waahhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhh kyaa style hai aap ki is kaavish ka, mujhe behad pasand aaya aap ka yeh kalaam mai sochtaa hoon mai ab tak kyun nahi aaya aap ke is kalam par ya meri aankho se kyun ye ab tak ozal raha. magar aaj padhaa to padhata hi rah gaya, sach men behtareen nagmaa hai aap ka, gungunaa kar bhi dekh ise mazaa a gaya, regards manu |
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22nd August 2007, 01:00 AM
salaam sara ji,
aapko shayad pehli bar paddha aaj, aur humein aapki yeh nazm pad-kar bahut khushi hui. aapka andaaz bi pasand aaya aur ehsaas bi. yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein. aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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4th September 2007, 05:51 PM
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yeh to aapka badapan ahi aapko mera likha pasand aaya,warna meri kya bisaat.bahut khushi hui aapko yahan dekh.thnx a lot. yunhin saath dete rahyega gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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4th September 2007, 07:22 PM
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aapki koshish behad pasand aayi.....ehssas ke kya kehne...... aise hi yaha aate rehna......mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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4th September 2007, 09:41 PM
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kabhie dil jale,kyon hum mile?? jo hum mile,to gham mile, kuch pal ke they yeh jo gul khile, ab har peher,aankhen nam mile. karti hain ab sargoshiyaan, aur poochti hain yeh waadiyaan, yeh kyon hua?kuch to bata, phaili hain kyon tanhaayiaan? bohat khoob sara ji aapka likha behad acha laga khas tor per ye lines dil per asar ker gayen likhti rahiye khush rahiye....... apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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13th September 2007, 02:49 PM
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yeh to khushnaseebi hai meri ke pehli baar hi mai bhaagayi aapko meri nazm warna meri kya bisaat.bas umed karti hun aage bhi isistarah aapka saath milta rahega. thnx so much gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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13th September 2007, 02:51 PM
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khush rahen gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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13th September 2007, 02:53 PM
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thnx lamha ji,bahut acha laga aapko yahan dekh.aate rahiyega yunhin,khush rahen gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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13th September 2007, 02:56 PM
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yunhin sath deti rahiyega khush rahen gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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