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16th April 2007, 05:39 PM
pehle likhe ehsaas ko thoda aage badate hue..........
faansley bad jayenge ghe dilon mein, aishe kabi sochna nha muskil me jo haath humara chut jaye, aishe kahbi pakdna na riste waqt khe saat majboot hote hain sharm se nah jhuk jayen nigaye humri, aishe kabi dekha na dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye, aishe kabhi rakna nha vaade jo tum nibha nah payo, vaade aise kabhi karna nha bewaafai se darta hai dil gum jayen hum ishq ki galiyon mein, aishe kabhi chodna nha bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha hum kal rahen jha na rahen tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha taufa hai yhe dil, gusse mein, kabhi fenkna na najuk hai yhe rista, anjane mein, kabhi chedna na chaho to humein apni zingadi se dakal kardo par raah mein chod kar, palat kar.......kabhi dekhna na Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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17th April 2007, 05:52 PM
namskaaR mere dost:
pehle se kaafi beHtar rahii aapki yeH kosisH ..bas yuuNhi aap dil ke ash'aar ko bayaaN karte raheN aur aage baRHte raheN apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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17th April 2007, 06:49 PM
bhaut sache ehsaas hai dear jis par humne bhrosa kiya hai jis ko humne samhala hai jisko hum pyaar karte hain unse hum ye hi aasha rakhte hain
bhaut bhaut achha sach kaha hai ehsaas bhaut masoom se alfaaz main kaha hai 
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18th April 2007, 05:32 AM
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apko humara namaskar, kaise hain app? jab app jaise log humare likhe ko pasand karte hain, to aur b acha likhne k koshish karta hun. yhe humari kavita "kabhi dekhna na" dheere dheere humne likhi hai. asha hai iske aane wale nagmon ko aap aise hi pasand karenge. thanku tc manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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18th April 2007, 05:34 AM
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apki pehli likhe line humein bahut achi lagi, "humne samhala jai jisko". humein khushi hui ki apko humara likha pasand aya aur app humeim mehsus kar sake. thanku for ur kind words tc manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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18th April 2007, 11:08 AM
hi dost
aapko merul ka sadar pranaam aapke ye ehsaason ko padhke achchaa laga, aapke ye ehsaas pehle ke ehsason se bahut hi achchhe hai, aapne is baar bare hi dil se likha hai padhke achchha laga ese hi likhte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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19th April 2007, 04:42 PM
hello merul,
hw r u? humein acha laga k apko humara likha pasand aya. humein umeed hai aane wale ehsaason ko b app aise he pasand karenge. thanku tc Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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20th April 2007, 09:50 AM
manish aap mere se bahut chotte ho, so main aapko manish ji to hargiz nahi kahungi...hehehehe
 aapki nazam padi...ahsaas bahut pyarey lagey..aur dil ki gahrai se nikley huey lagge....sacchi...dil ko chu gaye aapke jazbaat. ek baat kahna chaungi...bura mat maanna...ki aapke lafaz kahi kahi samaj nahi aatey, kyuki spelling galat hai...agar aap likhne ke baad ek baar kuad pad liya karey..to ho sakta hai ki un lafzon mein sudhaar ho jaye... yu hi koshish kartey rahiye....! god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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20th April 2007, 11:58 AM
kya khub likha hain apne lafzo ko hi ubhar ke rakh diya
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22nd April 2007, 03:38 AM
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kaise haan app? apko humara likha pasand aaya bahut khushi hui....abb hum isshe b acha likhne ki koshish karenge. humein sabse jyaada khushi is baat k hui k apne humein humari galti k baare mein bataya. thanku. i m nt offended by it so plz aap yhe mat kahiye k mura maat manana. galti to galti hi rahegi aur apne yhe to mere bale k liye hi likha hai. i will b more careful in the future...apse ek aur darkwasth hai..aap aise hi humein humari galtion k bare mein batate rahna...kabbi na kabhi to sudhere ge hum . dusri baat...aap ne kaha k app humein manish g nahi bula sakte...agar hum apko ko badi behan maan ley to app humein chota bhai jaruur bula sakte hain....sauda manzoor k nahin????thanks 4 ur advice once again tc manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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29th April 2007, 12:18 AM
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kaise hain aap, thanku 4 aprreciating my work. aap aage b aishe hi saath dete rehna. thanku 4 ur support tc manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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30th April 2007, 10:57 AM
Manish namste;
aapne bhot hi sahi farmaya... aapne bhot hi khubsurti se aap ke ehsaaso ko byan kiya hai jo mujeh bhot pasand aaya... mitali... Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste, Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse, KYUNKI Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste..... TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA... 
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3rd May 2007, 01:35 AM
hi mitali,
hw r u? thanks 4 appreciating my work. bass aap yuhin saath nibate rehna. thanks 4 tha motivation tc manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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