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Thumbs up Ghazal: iShq ho naShaa ho tum kyaa ho...! - 2nd September 2015, 09:54 AM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

TPT meiN peSh kee huii merii Ghazal aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa pyaar aur saath milegaa !

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iShq ho naShaa ho tum kyaa ho
dil_naSheeN adaa ho tum kyaa ho

bin tiíre lage yuuN aadhaa huuN
ik haseeN sazaa ho tum kyaa ho

har Shahar galii meiN ye DhooNDhaa
Gar kahiiN liKhaa ho tum kyaa ho

Ik Khayaal dil meiN haii aisaa
harf meiN Chhipaa ho tum kyaa ho

baariShoN ki booNde aur toofaaN
aag ho hawaa ho tum kyaa ho

humsafar miíre ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho

dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa miíraa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho


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2nd September 2015, 10:56 AM

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

TPT meiN peSh kee huii merii Ghazal aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa pyaar aur saath milegaa !

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iShq ho naShaa ho tum kyaa ho
dil_naSheeN adaa ho tum kyaa ho

bin tiíre lage yuuN aadhaa huuN
ik haseeN sazaa ho tum kyaa ho

har Shahar galii meiN ye DhooNDhaa
Gar kahiiN liKhaa ho tum kyaa ho

Ik Khayaal dil meiN haii aisaa
harf meiN Chhipaa ho tum kyaa ho

baariShoN ki booNde aur toofaaN
aag ho hawaa ho tum kyaa ho

humsafar miíre ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho

dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa miíraa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho


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bahut khoobsoorat peshkash hai dhaval ji....
daad qubool kijiyega......



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

TPT meiN peSh kee huii merii Ghazal aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa pyaar aur saath milegaa !

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iShq ho naShaa ho tum kyaa ho
dil_naSheeN adaa ho tum kyaa ho

bin tiíre lage yuuN aadhaa huuN
ik haseeN sazaa ho tum kyaa ho

har Shahar galii meiN ye DhooNDhaa
Gar kahiiN liKhaa ho tum kyaa ho

Ik Khayaal dil meiN haii aisaa
harf meiN Chhipaa ho tum kyaa ho

baariShoN ki booNde aur toofaaN
aag ho hawaa ho tum kyaa ho

humsafar miíre ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho

dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa miíraa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho


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haseen peshkash hai janaab.... padhkar dil ko sukoon milaa....

wese to ye padhh chukaa hoon magar jitnii baar padh rahaa hoon lutf utnaa hi badh rahaa hai.... mubaarak ho aapko ye bahtereen ghazal....

likhte rahen.. khussh rahen

shaad.....


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2nd September 2015, 02:54 PM

Dhaval ji...

Bohut hi dilkash lagi apki ye ghazal. Ek mysterious lady ki tasweer nikhar kar aati hai jo ki bohut alag thought laga.

Bohut saari daad apko is ghazal ke liye


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2nd September 2015, 05:50 PM

Dhaval,

Aapki yeh gazhal bahaut hi pyari lagi...bahaut khoobsoorat. Aapka pyar bahauta ache se dikhayi de raha hai ismai. I am sure jinke liye aapne likhi hai oonhe behad pasand aayi hogi. Aapne zaroor sunayi hogi apni wife ko.

yeh kuch lines dil ko chu gayi bahaut...

humsafar mi’re ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho

dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa mi’raa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho

Aise hi pyar bhara achha achha likhte rahiye aur aapko jaldi jaldi padhne ka mauka dete rahiye.

Khayal rakhiye!!


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2nd September 2015, 09:58 PM

kya baat hai dhaval badi dil ko choone waali rahi aapki ghazal
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


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14th September 2015, 11:35 PM

Bohat acha likha hai chotu achi koshish hai yunhi likhte raho khush raho ☺


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bahut khoobsoorat peshkash hai dhaval ji....
daad qubool kijiyega......
Madhu jee

Namaste

Ghazal ki pazeerAii ke liye main aapka behad shuraguzaar huun

Padhte rahiyegaa

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haseen peshkash hai janaab.... padhkar dil ko sukoon milaa....

wese to ye padhh chukaa hoon magar jitnii baar padh rahaa hoon lutf utnaa hi badh rahaa hai.... mubaarak ho aapko ye bahtereen ghazal....

likhte rahen.. khussh rahen

shaad.....

Shaad bhaii

Namaste

Yuunhi saath dete rahiyegaa aage bhee...padhte rahiye...

Shukriyaah aapka

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Dhaval ji...

Bohut hi dilkash lagi apki ye ghazal. Ek mysterious lady ki tasweer nikhar kar aati hai jo ki bohut alag thought laga.

Bohut saari daad apko is ghazal ke liye
Sarika bhabhi

Namaste

Ghazal aapko pasand aayiin jaan kar khushiii hui...aage bhee padhte rahiyegaa

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Dhaval,

Aapki yeh gazhal bahaut hi pyari lagi...bahaut khoobsoorat. Aapka pyar bahauta ache se dikhayi de raha hai ismai. I am sure jinke liye aapne likhi hai oonhe behad pasand aayi hogi. Aapne zaroor sunayi hogi apni wife ko.

yeh kuch lines dil ko chu gayi bahaut...

humsafar miíre ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho

dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa miíraa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho

Aise hi pyar bhara achha achha likhte rahiye aur aapko jaldi jaldi padhne ka mauka dete rahiye.

Khayal rakhiye!!
Jiyaa

Namaste kem chho

Ghazal ke pyaar bhare ehsaason ko samjhaa khushii huii jee jaan sunaaii th aur bahot pasand bhee aayii
Bas aap aise hi padhte rahiye..likhte rahege aage bhee aise... aur har koshish par paani puri free free free

Khush raho..apnaa khayaal rakho

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Rajinder jee

Aapke dil tak yeh Ghazal pahuchii jaan kar bahot khushii hui..yuunhi hausilaah badhaate rahiye...padhte rahiye

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Maani didi

Aap ko meri koshish pasand aayi..jaan lar achchha lagaa..aate rahiye aise hi...aapko yahaan dekh kar khushii hoti hai

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Bahut khoobsurat rachna hay.sawaloon ke beech hi jawaab aur sawaloon ka khoobsurat saaz.Beautiful.Keep up the good work.

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

TPT meiN peSh kee huii merii Ghazal aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa pyaar aur saath milegaa !

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iShq ho naShaa ho tum kyaa ho
dil_naSheeN adaa ho tum kyaa ho

bin tiíre lage yuuN aadhaa huuN
ik haseeN sazaa ho tum kyaa ho

har Shahar galii meiN ye DhooNDhaa
Gar kahiiN liKhaa ho tum kyaa ho

Ik Khayaal dil meiN haii aisaa
harf meiN Chhipaa ho tum kyaa ho

baariShoN ki booNde aur toofaaN
aag ho hawaa ho tum kyaa ho

humsafar miíre ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho

dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa miíraa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho


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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

TPT meiN peSh kee huii merii Ghazal aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa pyaar aur saath milegaa !

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iShq ho naShaa ho tum kyaa ho
dil_naSheeN adaa ho tum kyaa ho

bin tiíre lage yuuN aadhaa huuN
ik haseeN sazaa ho tum kyaa ho

har Shahar galii meiN ye DhooNDhaa
Gar kahiiN liKhaa ho tum kyaa ho

Ik Khayaal dil meiN haii aisaa
harf meiN Chhipaa ho tum kyaa ho

baariShoN ki booNde aur toofaaN
aag ho hawaa ho tum kyaa ho

humsafar miíre ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho

dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa miíraa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho


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