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4th April 2006, 03:14 PM
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Bechain aaj meri har raat na hoti ! Us roz gar vo mulaqaat na hoti !! Sehra ban jaati Zindagi Tere baad ! Aansuo ki gar isme barsaat na hoti !! Haasil aisi jeet ka maza hi kya tha ! mushkil gar ishk ki bisaat na hoti !! Shikwa bhi hota shayad khuda se ! Dekhi jo tujhme kaayenaat na hoti !! Hota gar ishk asaa.n Dosto.N! shayad isme vo baat na hoti !! **** ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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4th April 2006, 03:19 PM
Bechain aaj meri har raat na hoti !
Us roz gar vo mulaqaat na hoti !! Sehra ban jaati Zindagi Tere baad ! Aansuo ki gar isme barsaat na hoti !! Haasil aisi jeet ka maza hi kya tha ! mushkil gar ishk ki bisaat na hoti !! Shikwa bhi hota shayad khuda se ! Dekhi jo tujhme kaayenaat na hoti !! Hota gar ishk asaa.n Dosto.N! shayad isme vo baat na hoti !! Waah!!! Nahin jaan paate aapke is ehsaas ko bhi Agar shayri se mulaqaat na hoti  Pallavi, Kya gazab ka likhti ho.. daad kubool karna. Yun hi aati rehna. Take care ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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4th April 2006, 03:49 PM
Namastey Pallavi Ji
Aapko padkar acha laga, Ye lines to bohat kuch kegayi hein Hota gar ishk asaa.n Dosto.N! shayad isme vo baat na hoti !! Kanchan |
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Mai shayar to nahi
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4th April 2006, 04:06 PM
great pallavi,just great.liked it.keep writing
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4th April 2006, 04:40 PM
Bechain aaj meri har raat na hoti !
Us roz gar vo mulaqaat na hoti !! Sehra ban jaati Zindagi Tere baad ! Aansuo ki gar isme barsaat na hoti !! hmmmmmmmm...... Haasil aisi jeet ka maza hi kya tha ! mushkil gar ishk ki bisaat na hoti !! Shikwa bhi hota shayad khuda se ! Dekhi jo tujhme kaayenaat na hoti !! waah... kya baat hai... Hota gar ishk asaa.n Dosto.N! shayad isme vo baat na hoti !! good one... Partner, Accha likha hai... Time mil gaya aapko likhen kaa.. sahi hai... Usually to aap do hi kaam karte hain... ek padhai aur doosri sho____... hehe... carry on.. do keep finding this lil time to write sweet poems... take care Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th April 2006, 06:51 PM
Shikwa bhi hota shayad khuda se !
Dekhi jo tujhme kaayenaat na hoti !! kya baat hai di! gussa bhi aur pyar bhi....... bahut dinoN ke baad padha apko...... achcha laga....... thanx 4 cuming......... luv, KasaK......... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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5th April 2006, 12:06 AM
that is really awesome words ..
keep writing like this Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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Re: ~ Vo Baat Na Hoti ~ -
5th April 2006, 12:38 PM
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aapne bahaut sahi baat kahi hai ki isqn agar aasaan hota tow zindagi mei woh baat nahin hoti. accha laga aapko aur aapke vichaaron ko parhkar. dhanyavaad vipin 
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