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29th October 2009, 02:56 PM
Jane Kya Bolta Hai Sannata
Kabhi Bhayanak, Kabhi Apna Sa Lagta Hai Sannata........ Kabhi Jab Ijjat Roti Hai Tab Hasta Hai Sannata Kabhi Jab Maut Hasti Hai Tab Rota Hai Sannata.......... Kahi Zindagi Beet Jati Hai Khamosh Rehta Hai Sannata Kabhi Jeevan Khamosh Ho Jata Hai Cheekhta Rehta Hai Sannata......... Kabhi Mandir Ki Ghantiyo Me Gunjta Hai Sannata Kabhi Mantro Ke Uchcharan Me Sunai Deta Hai Sannata......... Bebas Ho Chuki Nigaho Me Dikhai Deta Hai Sannata Chehre Ki Jhurriyo Se Bhi Lipta Hua Hai Sannata............... " Mann " Bole To Bhi Kaise Bole Sach Zuba Per Haat Rakh Deta Hai Sannata Aao Ham Sab Mil Ker Moun Rakhta Hai Shor Hai Galiyo Me , Thora Ho Jaye Sannata................ |
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29th October 2009, 04:20 PM
Ja raha tha yu he..
Dikhayi pada 'sannata' kya likha hai aapne.. Wow.. Kya title hai 'sannata'  thanx for sharing, ur nice poem 'sannata' but i dnt undrstand, "yaha itna kyu hai 'sannata'"  means , noone replied yet... On the thread 'sannata' bye n tc manvinder ji.. Njoy beautiful 'sannata' |
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30th October 2009, 07:04 PM
thanks for reading and understanding it..........................
be in touch................................ |
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30th October 2009, 07:05 PM
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thanks for reading and understanding it................... be in touch............................................. |
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30th October 2009, 07:19 PM
Manvinder Ji...Sat Shree Akaal...kaise hai aap.....aapki poem ke khayal aur jazbaat ache rahe...fikR ko thoda aur badhane ki zarurat hai.....aapne achi koshish ki hai.....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....
duaaon ke saath...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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30th October 2009, 07:36 PM
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dhanyawad naresh ji , mere jazbaat aapko ache lage.............. koshish karunga aur acha likhne ki ................ apna saath u hi banae rakhiye.......................... |
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31st October 2009, 12:28 AM
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Yeh line kaafi behtreen hai " Mann " Bole To Bhi Kaise Bole Sach Zuba Per Haat Rakh Deta Hai Sannata किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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1st November 2009, 01:55 PM
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dhanyawad sir ji, yu hi apna saath banaye rahiye .................... shukriya .................... |
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1st November 2009, 02:22 PM
Manvinder ji
apne bhot acha lika hai muze apki ye post achi lagi, sanata sachi mein bhot gehra lafz hai, aur apne bhot ache se discreibe kiya usku... daad le meri.. Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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2nd November 2009, 06:31 PM
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dhanyawad sir ji ........aapko meri ye post achi kagi .................... koshish karunga aur sudhar karke likh saku.............. shukriya............. yu hi milte rahiye................... allah afez........ |
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3rd November 2009, 05:18 AM
SSA Mann Sahab,
wow kain da dil nahin kita par likay bagair vi nai rah saki. my congrats! |
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4th November 2009, 08:04 PM
Mann Jii SSK
Kaise hai aap? Aapki yeh koshish behad khoob lagi what a subject nice, behad khoobi se aapne sannate ko bayan kiya hai.... sabhi lines achchi lagi I like it.... Keep writting, Keep Up...... Likhate rahiye, Bazm mein aate rahiye... Apna khayal rakhiye, Khush rahiye, Khuda Hafez..... 
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7th November 2009, 02:03 PM
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SSA ankita ji ............. thanks .......... be connected .............. yu hi milte rahi ye............. |
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7th November 2009, 02:06 PM
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dhanyawad ji............... bahut dino baad aapse mulakat hui bahut acha laga............... |
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7th November 2009, 09:35 PM
Dekhte Hai Kaun Si Zuba Bolti Hai Pehle........
Dil Ke Sune Makaan Me Chaya Hai Sannata.......... |
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9th November 2009, 01:18 AM
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Maan sahab, Satsriakaal!!! Bahut khoob likha hai, iss tehreer ka mazameen bhi zara hat ke hai, bahut achha laga... Adaygi bhi achhi hai.... Mujhe khoob pasand aaya... Aise hi likhte rahiye...... Chalte chalte haath pakad liya, ruka to achha laga iss mehfil ka sannaataa MehfileN to sajjaii haiN bahut lekin aaj bana hai yaar, iss gaafil ka, sannaataa Duaon ke saath ijaazat... Aapka dost Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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11th November 2009, 09:51 PM
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DHANYAWAD VIKRAM JI.............. IS TAARIF KE LIYE SHUKRIYA................... YU HI MILTE RAHIYE............ KOI TO GUZRA IS MEHFIL SE , DOOR HO GAYA SANNAATA............ DIL AUR ZUBA DONO KHAMOUSH THE............ NIGAHO SE BAAT HO GAYI TO DOOR HO GAYA SANNAATA................ |
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