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Thumbs up Meri Prarthana - 5th January 2010, 01:07 AM

Mahakaal Ke Shartar Seh Saku.....
.........Muhje Banao Abhimanyu
Jeevan Ki Tapasya Kar Saku.....
........Muhje Banao Vishvamitra
Man Mera Komal Ho......
........Nirmal Jal Ki Tarah
Satya Path Pe Chalu Mai Nishchint.....
.......Vegvaan Pavan Ki Tarah
Ban Sakoo Mai Adig.......
.......Himalaya Ki Tarah.....
Tere Ansh Me Rahu......
.......Muhje Banao Tumahare Charan
Sakal Ho Saku Apne Kartavya Mai.....
.......Muhje Bana Do Sajag... Chetan
Naam Ke Anukul Ho Saku.......
.....Muhje Banao Ajar...Amit


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Love 5th January 2010, 02:11 AM

bhai bahut bahut din baad mauqa mila hai aapke liye reply likhne ka...aur isme bhi kuch khaas gunjaayish nahi chhodi aapne...kuch kehne ke liye...ye shabd apni byaani khud ba khud kar rahe haiN...yeh prarthana aapki avashya puran hogi...aur agar sirf yeh prarthana hi koi sache dil se kare to bahut khuch badal sakta hai...baat sirf aur sirf soch tak tiki hoti hai aur jahaN soch mazboot wahaN baqi sab komal...halaat bhi badal jaate haiN, log bhi, logoN ki baateN bhi, unke matlab bhi...yeh prarthana apne aap meiN vushwaas paida karne ki kshamta deti hai....

May God Bless you...!

aapka...


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5th January 2010, 09:27 AM

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Mahakaal Ke Shartar Seh Saku.....
.........Muhje Banao Abhimanyu
Jeevan Ki Tapasya Kar Saku.....
........Muhje Banao Vishvamitra
Man Mera Komal Ho......
........Nirmal Jal Ki Tarah
Satya Path Pe Chalu Mai Nishchint.....
.......Vegvaan Pavan Ki Tarah
Ban Sakoo Mai Adig.......
.......Himalaya Ki Tarah.....
Tere Ansh Me Rahu......
.......Muhje Banao Tumahare Charan
Sakal Ho Saku Apne Kartavya Mai.....
.......Muhje Bana Do Sajag... Chetan
Naam Ke Anukul Ho Saku.......
.....Muhje Banao Ajar...Amit
Amit Ji........bahut satik khayal pesh kiya hai.....aapne apni kavita mai....sabhi panktiya pur asar lagi mujhe....ek achi koshish ke liye tahe dil se daad hazir hai...yuhi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye....

apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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5th January 2010, 04:44 PM

Dhnyavad Bhai.....

aapka shukuguzar rahoonga......

aapna khyal rakhe

aapka


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5th January 2010, 04:46 PM

Nareshji....aapka rachna ko pasand aur protsaahit karne ka bahut bahut shukriya....aise hi hausla afzaai karte rahiyega......khush rahiye...

apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath.....


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