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Smile kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai... - 1st September 2010, 07:12 PM

kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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1st September 2010, 07:43 PM

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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


kya baat hai.......dusra misra bahut dil fareb hai...


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai

well said




Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai

again well said



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yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai





kya kah diya aapne...bahut khoob


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rumaani andaz koi tumse seekhe......
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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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kya baat hai lamha, its really very nice, shabdon kee kami mehsoos kar raha hoon pehli baar, ek ek shabd jasbaaton se bhara hai, aur itna simple bhi hai kee dil ko choo kar chala gaya hai yaar .Keep it up.



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1st September 2010, 08:21 PM

WAH Lamha Har sher.. La Jawaab Hai ..

Har Sher Kuch Khaas Sa Lagaa

Har Ehsaas... Jaise Kabhi Chu Kar Gaya Ho...

Har Shabd Kuch Apna Sa Laga

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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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Very Very Impressive ..... Lamha Ji ! Very Romantic ... Very Touching .... Awesome ... !!!

Very Nice Creation .... !

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Tahe dil se daad hazir hai.... Qubuul FaramaayeN ....

khush rahen...
Duaaon ke saath.....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai




baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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ji very sweet & simple.........................nice creation.............



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Lamha ji,,,,

Well written..... Aise hi likhte rahiye... Dil se daad.....


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Kyaa Baat... Kyaa baat...Kyaa baat
Suban allah.. bada hii dilkash likha hai yaar... alfaaz kam pad jaaye par daad kam na pade.. dil khus kar ditta tussi soniyee.. dil khus kar dittaa..


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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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Hello Lamha ji!

It's so very romantic..... Congratulations!

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Waise mujhe to kalam se zyda comments padhne me zyda maza aaya.......khair sabki apni apni pasand hai.

Aapki peshkash itni impressive to nahi lagi ke dil se Wah kya baat hai nikal jaye.......lekin wordplay khoob raha.

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Dear Lamha........bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, pyar se bharpoor en ahsaasoN par dil se daad hazir hai, khush raho.

duaoN ke saath
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kya kamaal likha hai...ise padhne ke baad to maiN kafi der ye sochta raha ki kya maine ye asal meiN padha hai....waqai behad khoob likha hai aapne....maiN zidd saheb ki baat se harf-ba-harf ittefaaq rakhta hooN ki "rumaani andaz koi tumse seekhe......"
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bahut khoob lamha ji,
yeh andaaz aapka sach main dil fareb raha....kuch ya kisi ko pa lene ke baad jo sampoornta ka ehsaas hota hain aapki kavita ne kuch aisa hi sama bandha....

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kya baat hai lamha, its really very nice, shabdon kee kami mehsoos kar raha hoon pehli baar, ek ek shabd jasbaaton se bhara hai, aur itna simple bhi hai kee dil ko choo kar chala gaya hai yaar .Keep it up.

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वाह क्या बात है क्या खूब ग़ज़ल लिखी है आपने सीधे दिल मैं उतर गई ! पढ़ने के बाद ऐसा लगने लगा की काश उपरवाला हमारे नसीब मैं भी ऐसे चंद लम्हे डाल देता जिनके एक पल मैं हीं हम सदीयाँ गुज़ार लेते

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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai


kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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Kya baat hai bahenaa......... Dear now Im sure yeh tumne hi likha hai...

Bahut achcha likha and realy sabhi sher bahut achche rahe..... Mindblowing...... And touchi thought's ... Kafi achcha likhane lagi ho ab keep writting ....... daad daad .....

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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai



Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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kya baat hai lamha..
this is really sweet..
kis sher ki jyada tareef karu samsjh nahi aa raha...
fantastic thoughts..
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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai



Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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Ek Dost Ka Salam Kabool Farmaie ga Lamha Ji...

Aap Ki Har Gazal Me Ek Ajab Si Kasis Hoti Ha,Jab Bhi Mujhe waqt Milta Hai Me Aap Ki Gazale jaroor Padhata Hoo,Har Gajal Me Ek Naya Andaz Rahata Hai Aap Ka Lekin Hume Aap Ka Dil Ki Har Baat Kalam Se Khoobsurati Se Baya.n Karne ka Andaz Pasand Hai................

Hamari Taraf Se 2 Line Aap Ke Liye.......

Kisi Se Milne Ki Chahat Me Gun-Gunane Lagi Hai,
Apne Har Gum Ko Bhul Kar "Lamha" Ab Muskurne Lagi Hai....

So Keep Smiling Always..........


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kal ek shakhs se mulaqaat ho gai



Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


baaton baaton me jab muskuraye woh
yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


tab se ud rahi hoon hawao mai "Lamha"
jaise mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai



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Lamha:

namaste!

koShiSh bahot Khoob rahii.n.. aage bhee liKhate rahe.n! bazm ki Shaan baRhaate rahe.n.. daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

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WAH Lamha Har sher.. La Jawaab Hai ..

Har Sher Kuch Khaas Sa Lagaa

Har Ehsaas... Jaise Kabhi Chu Kar Gaya Ho...

Har Shabd Kuch Apna Sa Laga

WAah waah

Aadi,
is kalaam me aapne apnapan mehsoos kiya, ye mere liye bahut badi baat hai... izzat-afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya ... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna.... khush raho...


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Very Very Impressive ..... Lamha Ji ! Very Romantic ... Very Touching .... Awesome ... !!!

Very Nice Creation .... !

Reps ++++++++++ Rachana ! Bhole ShabdoN MeN Hai Wafaa Ki Khushboo ... !

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai.... Qubuul FaramaayeN ....

khush rahen...
Duaaon ke saath.....
Naresh ji,
tahe dil se aapki shukra guzaar hu ke aapne apna kimati waqt mere is kalaam ko diya... rep+ ka bhi bahut bahut shukriya... aapki daad mere sar-aankho par....yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiye..... khush rahiye...


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Parveen ji,

bahut bahut shukriya ke aapne apna kimati waqt nikaal kar mere is adnaa se kalaam pe nazar-e-karam kiya... aapne bahut badi baat kahi hai janab... shukriya... bahut bahut shukriya... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... khush rahiye....


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ji very sweet & simple.........................nice creation.............

aap ka bahut bahut shukriya Radhika ji.......................khush rahiye...


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Lamha ji,,,,

Well written..... Aise hi likhte rahiye... Dil se daad.....

Kavita ji,
aapki daad mere sar-aankho par... aapka bahut bahut shukriya....yuhi saath dete rahiye... khush rahiye....


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Subhanallah!!! subhanallah!!! subhanallah!!! Kiya baat hai Lamha.....very nyc i cnt help readin agen n agen....har soch bht khubsurat hai....i love da way u hav played bout with da words.....ese hi likhte rahiye......
   
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Kyaa Baat... Kyaa baat...Kyaa baat
Suban allah.. bada hii dilkash likha hai yaar... alfaaz kam pad jaaye par daad kam na pade.. dil khus kar ditta tussi soniyee.. dil khus kar dittaa..


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thank u sooooooo much buddy... aapki daad mere sar-aankho par... mere in lafzon ne tumhara dil khush kar diya, is se badi baat aur kya ho sakti hai... bas yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna... khush raho... muskurate raho.....


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Hello Lamha ji!

It's so very romantic..... Congratulations!

Keep writing!

Mann,

thank u soooooooooo much for ur support... keep supporting dear... khush rahiye.....


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Waise mujhe to kalam se zyda comments padhne me zyda maza aaya.......khair sabki apni apni pasand hai.

Aapki peshkash itni impressive to nahi lagi ke dil se Wah kya baat hai nikal jaye.......lekin wordplay khoob raha.

Keep writing.
Sajid,

maafi chahti hu janab ke aapko mera ye kalaam impressive nahi laga... agli baar koshish karungi ke aapki umeedon pe khari utar saku... yaha aane ka bahut bahut shukriya.... yuhi saath dete rahiye...khush rahiye....


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Dear Lamha........bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, pyar se bharpoor en ahsaasoN par dil se daad hazir hai, khush raho.

duaoN ke saath
diii

Diiiiiiiiiiii,

tahe dil se aapki shukra-guzaar hu ke aap yaha aayi aur meri is adnaa si koshish ko saraha... aapki daad mere sar-aankho par diiiii..... aati rahiyega aur yuhi apna saath aur pyaar muj par banaye rakhiye.... khush rahiye diii.... muskurate rahiye...


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kya kamaal likha hai...ise padhne ke baad to maiN kafi der ye sochta raha ki kya maine ye asal meiN padha hai....waqai behad khoob likha hai aapne....maiN zidd saheb ki baat se harf-ba-harf ittefaaq rakhta hooN ki "rumaani andaz koi tumse seekhe......"
maza aa gaya padh kar...

bahut sari daad....qubuul kijiyega...

aapka dost...
vikram "masttt..."
Vikram,
bahut bahut bahut shukriya dost.... aapne yaha aakar muje izzat bakshi hai... aap jaise umdaa shayar agar mere kalaam ki tarif kare to ye mere liye bahut badi baat hai... aapki daad mere sar-aankho par... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... khush rahiye...


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Kal ek Shakhs se Mulaqaat Ho gai
pal pal joda or din bhar baat ho gai


subah ka dilkash manzar cheda
kab na jaane haseen raat ho gai


Khuda bhi the shayad meherbaan humpe
chaha tha bheegna or barsaat ho gai


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yu laga hawaa bhi apne saath ho gai


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bahut khoob lamha ji,
yeh andaaz aapka sach main dil fareb raha....kuch ya kisi ko pa lene ke baad jo sampoornta ka ehsaas hota hain aapki kavita ne kuch aisa hi sama bandha....

kuch kehte nahi ban pad raha......aapne jannat dikha di....

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Smile 18th September 2010, 07:32 PM

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Originally Posted by santosh_kumar View Post
वाह क्या बात है क्या खूब ग़ज़ल लिखी है आपने सीधे दिल मैं उतर गई ! पढ़ने के बाद ऐसा लगने लगा की काश उपरवाला हमारे नसीब मैं भी ऐसे चंद लम्हे डाल देता जिनके एक पल मैं हीं हम सदीयाँ गुज़ार लेते

Santosh ji,
izzat-afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya... hum aapke liye Dua karenge ke uparwala zaroor aapke naseeb me aise beshumaar lamhe daale aur aap ko har pal dhero khushiyan nasib ho... aameen...
yuhi saath dete rahiye....khush rahiye...


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