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jeevan sangani... - 31st August 2010, 12:32 AM
Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?
tujhi se vyah rachaunga jeevan bhar saath nibhaunga
dekh!! tujhe aisa pati kahi nahi milega
jeevan bhar joru ka gulaam banke rahunga
tere har har hukam par apna seer jhukaunga
bas bana le tu mujhe apna pati
fir dekh kaise kaise raas dhikaunga
kabhi hasaa kar to kabhi rula ke hasaunga
rooth gar tu jayegi to tujhe lori sunaunga
pyaas gar lagegi tujhe to apna lahoo pilaunga
Bol na!!! banegi meri sangani......
tujhe " ek duje ke liye" dikhlaunga....

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Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?
tujhi se vyah rachaunga jeevan bhar saath nibhaunga
dekh!! tujhe aisa pati kahi nahi milega
jeevan bhar joru ka gulaam banke rahunga
tere har har hukam par apna seer jhukaunga
bas bana le tu mujhe apna pati
fir dekh kaise kaise raas dhikaunga
kabhi hasaa kar to kabhi rula ke hasaunga
rooth gar tu jayegi to tujhe lori sunaunga
pyaas gar lagegi tujhe to apna lahoo pilaunga
Bol na!!! banegi meri sangani......
tujhe " ek duje ke liye" dikhlaunga....
ji nice thoughts..........................


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Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?
tujhi se vyah rachaunga jeevan bhar saath nibhaunga
dekh!! tujhe aisa pati kahi nahi milega
jeevan bhar joru ka gulaam banke rahunga
tere har har hukam par apna seer jhukaunga
bas bana le tu mujhe apna pati
fir dekh kaise kaise raas dhikaunga
kabhi hasaa kar to kabhi rula ke hasaunga
rooth gar tu jayegi to tujhe lori sunaunga
pyaas gar lagegi tujhe to apna lahoo pilaunga
Bol na!!! banegi meri sangani......
tujhe " ek duje ke liye" dikhlaunga....
Hmmm...! To aap bhi Uss Saanwali si LaDki se baateiN karne lage, Amit da...? Kuch yaad aaya...?



Kuch bhi ho, hameiN to aapki paNktiyan acchi lagi...!

Likhte raheiN aur apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...?


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?
tujhi se vyah rachaunga jeevan bhar saath nibhaunga
dekh!! tujhe aisa pati kahi nahi milega
jeevan bhar joru ka gulaam banke rahunga
tere har har hukam par apna seer jhukaunga
bas bana le tu mujhe apna pati
fir dekh kaise kaise raas dhikaunga
kabhi hasaa kar to kabhi rula ke hasaunga
rooth gar tu jayegi to tujhe lori sunaunga
pyaas gar lagegi tujhe to apna lahoo pilaunga
Bol na!!! banegi meri sangani......
tujhe " ek duje ke liye" dikhlaunga....
Yathaarth me jeete aapki kavitaa ke eshaas ... mujhe behad pasand aayeN ... yunhi likhte raheN aage bhi ...... amit Ji !

dil se daad ... !

khush rahen....
duaaoN ke saath....



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Amit ji,


Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?

Bahut khoob... Aise hi likhte rahiye....Dil se daad hazir hai.. qubool kijiyega

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Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?
tujhi se vyah rachaunga jeevan bhar saath nibhaunga
dekh!! tujhe aisa pati kahi nahi milega
jeevan bhar joru ka gulaam banke rahunga
tere har har hukam par apna seer jhukaunga
bas bana le tu mujhe apna pati
fir dekh kaise kaise raas dhikaunga
kabhi hasaa kar to kabhi rula ke hasaunga
rooth gar tu jayegi to tujhe lori sunaunga
pyaas gar lagegi tujhe to apna lahoo pilaunga
Bol na!!! banegi meri sangani......
tujhe " ek duje ke liye" dikhlaunga....
amit jee
radhe radhe

nice work..............

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Hmmm...! To aap bhi Uss Saanwali si LaDki se baateiN karne lage, Amit da...? Kuch yaad aaya...?



Kuch bhi ho, hameiN to aapki paNktiyan acchi lagi...!

Likhte raheiN aur apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...?

baate to hoti hain danny bhaiya....aur khoob baate hoti hain, unka swalapan jo bha gaya hain hame...jabse hosh sambhala hain, aur sachhi kahu to kuch baate bhualye nahi bhulti.....kaise bhulu....aur bhulu bhi to kyu bhulu????? jitna bhi jhagda kar lu.....maloom hain mujhe, vo hi jeetegi......

aapko pasand aa hi gayi....mujhe khusi hain.....

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Yathaarth me jeete aapki kavitaa ke eshaas ... mujhe behad pasand aayeN ... yunhi likhte raheN aage bhi ...... amit Ji !

dil se daad ... !

khush rahen....
duaaoN ke saath....
aapki baate sar aankho pe nareshji.......
insha-allha, saath agar aapka raha to kalam chalti rahegi

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Amit ji,


Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?

Bahut khoob... Aise hi likhte rahiye....Dil se daad hazir hai.. qubool kijiyega
aapki daad dil se kabool hain kavitaji....
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amit jee
radhe radhe

nice work..............
radhe radhe...ishq saheb,,,,,,,aur dhnyavad bhi....
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ji nice thoughts..........................
ji dhnyavad.......

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Hey Maut!!! meri jeevan sangani banegi?
tujhi se vyah rachaunga jeevan bhar saath nibhaunga
dekh!! tujhe aisa pati kahi nahi milega
jeevan bhar joru ka gulaam banke rahunga
tere har har hukam par apna seer jhukaunga
bas bana le tu mujhe apna pati
fir dekh kaise kaise raas dhikaunga
kabhi hasaa kar to kabhi rula ke hasaunga
rooth gar tu jayegi to tujhe lori sunaunga
pyaas gar lagegi tujhe to apna lahoo pilaunga
Bol na!!! banegi meri sangani......
tujhe " ek duje ke liye" dikhlaunga....
Bahut khoob Amit.... ehsaas achche hai aur andaaz-e-bayaan kuch hatke......... dil se daad.... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye...

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4th September 2010, 11:57 PM
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aapka bahut dhnyavad.....aapne pasand kiya mujhe khushi hain...is baat ki

shubhkamnaye meri kabool kare...

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