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vo kaun thi........plz koi batao.......do read frnds its a request..... - 28th March 2005, 10:54 PM

koi batayega vo kaun thi

Usne wada kiya ki miloongi shabab me
Jab shabab aaya to mili naqab me
Jab shabab dhal gaya to aayi kabar par meri
Afsos woh thi be-naqab, par main tha naqab me

Doli me bithaoge to aayenge
maa se maang ke lejaoge to aayenge
sochlo ye mushkil ka safar hoga
na laut jaane ke liye bulaoge to aayenge.

Kehnay ko woh haseen thay, aankhen thi bewafa
Daman meri nazaron se bacha kar chale gaye
Itna mujhko bata do mere dil ki dhadkano
Woh kaun the jo khwab dikha kar chale gaye


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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28th March 2005, 11:13 PM

nice again jubin ab aur kuch nahi kehne ki himmat hai kahongi tu gustakhi hoga.....
aur wo ju koi bhi thi wo tumhare pyarr ko nahi samjh payi,tumhare pyarr ki gehrayee ko nahi samjh payi,shayad wo pyarr ko khel samjhati hu,shayad uski koi majboori hu,shayad wo jagti aankhon mein sapna hu
lakin tumhe kabhi na kabhi us sapne ko bhoolana padega kisi ne kaha hai ju chala gaya uspe aansoo bahana nahi chahiye,
kyuki ju gaya wo kabhi humara tha hi nahi
laut ke aaya tu wo humesha se hi
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sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho......

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28th March 2005, 11:29 PM

hi zubin.. ek baar phir ....bahut achhe ..... aur zubin hum har baar likhte hain to usme kuchh naya hota hai...likhne ka alag andaaj hota hai..improvem,ent ki baat nahi aati..these r feelings that we express here..aur aapne sach me bahut achha likha..a.
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29th March 2005, 12:04 AM

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mujhe pata chale ki kaun thi wo?? to bata doongi

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29th March 2005, 02:42 AM

Wah Jubin ji wah! accha laga tumhari rachna parh kar... aaise hi likhte rehna....
   
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29th March 2005, 08:44 AM

Hi Jubin,

Nice 2 cu writin such luvly shayri again. I'm not well versed in the technicalities of shayri so.... But i really luved what i read n hope 2 c more such beautiful shayri from u.


Luvs,

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29th March 2005, 08:51 AM

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nice again jubin ab aur kuch nahi kehne ki himmat hai kahongi tu gustakhi hoga.....
aur wo ju koi bhi thi wo tumhare pyarr ko nahi samjh payi,tumhare pyarr ki gehrayee ko nahi samjh payi,shayad wo pyarr ko khel samjhati hu,shayad uski koi majboori hu,shayad wo jagti aankhon mein sapna hu
lakin tumhe kabhi na kabhi us sapne ko bhoolana padega kisi ne kaha hai ju chala gaya uspe aansoo bahana nahi chahiye,
kyuki ju gaya wo kabhi humara tha hi nahi
laut ke aaya tu wo humesha se hi
humara tha.

unforgetable simran
jaane do simran jo gaya vo gaya jo ayega dekha jayega

hamne bhi kisise pyar kiya tha
uski raah me khade hokar intezaar kiya tha
kasoor unka nahi hamara tha
jo ek bewafa se pyar kiya tha........


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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29th March 2005, 08:52 AM

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hi zubin.. ek baar phir ....bahut achhe ..... aur zubin hum har baar likhte hain to usme kuchh naya hota hai...likhne ka alag andaaj hota hai..improvem,ent ki baat nahi aati..these r feelings that we express here..aur aapne sach me bahut achha likha..a.
keep it up./
take care
thanks for the compliments keeeeeeep reading


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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29th March 2005, 08:56 AM

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wah!wah!
mazaa aa gaya

mujhe pata chale ki kaun thi wo?? to bata doongi

sonal
thanks sonal agar tumhe pata chale to zaroor batana mujhe
aankhon se duur hai par dil se nahi
dil me zaroor hai par milte nahi
yahi to gila hai unse hame
vo milte zaroor hai par dil se nahi................


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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29th March 2005, 08:58 AM

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Wah Jubin ji wah! accha laga tumhari rachna parh kar... aaise hi likhte rehna....
parul ji aapko pasand aaya jaan kar khushi hui
isi tarah saath dete rehna
jubin


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

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kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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29th March 2005, 08:59 AM

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Hi Jubin,

Nice 2 cu writin such luvly shayri again. I'm not well versed in the technicalities of shayri so.... But i really luved what i read n hope 2 c more such beautiful shayri from u.
thanks salim sahab
even i';m not welll versed in the technicalities but i just keeeep writing
but thanks for the support
aapka-jubin
keeeeeeeeeeeep readddddinnnnng


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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29th March 2005, 06:46 PM

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...jubin ji...parhkar bahut achchha laga... tahe dil se shukriya..is behtreen rachna ko hamse share karne ke liye.

yooNhi likhte rahiye.


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29th March 2005, 06:52 PM

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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...jubin ji...parhkar bahut achchha laga... tahe dil se shukriya..is behtreen rachna ko hamse share karne ke liye.

yooNhi likhte rahiye.
chaand ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka aapne hamari post padhi
thanks for the compliments
aapki daad kabul
aur bhi posts ki hai shayad aapko pasand aaye
aapka saath raha to likhte rahenge.......
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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Re: vo kaun thi........plz koi batao.......do read frnds its a request..... - 30th March 2005, 10:23 AM

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koi batayega vo kaun thi

Usne wada kiya ki miloongi shabab me
Jab shabab aaya to mili naqab me
Jab shabab dhal gaya to aayi kabar par meri
Afsos woh thi be-naqab, par main tha naqab me

Doli me bithaoge to aayenge
maa se maang ke lejaoge to aayenge
sochlo ye mushkil ka safar hoga
na laut jaane ke liye bulaoge to aayenge.

Kehnay ko woh haseen thay, aankhen thi bewafa
Daman meri nazaron se bacha kar chale gaye
Itna mujhko bata do mere dil ki dhadkano
Woh kaun the jo khwab dikha kar chale gaye
Hi jubin,

Nice thoughts.
Buddy lines are good but very broken. You wanna fill those gaps right. So next time try and see if you can add a flow to your words. Which I feel was a bit missing.

Your writing as always wa good but need a flow. Think again and write but with a flow in mind. Know the end to start.

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30th March 2005, 10:32 AM

i'll keep u r words in my mind rohin sir
i will see to it that i live up to u r expectation
thanks for replying and correcting my
it was a honour for me
thanks again
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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hi - 30th March 2005, 11:11 AM

Aapne itni request ki to maine socha ki aap ki request ki laaj rakh li jaaye.....
Waise achcha likha hai...
Aise hi likhte rahiye....
Thanks for share this with us....

Thankx

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30th March 2005, 05:54 PM

ajmal ji thanks for the compliments and thanks for comming on my request
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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Tu Zinda hai mere dost....Zindagi ki baat kar...
Ai mere yaar..mood bana....mausiki ki baat kar...

Kuchh aisa likh...jo dil me utar jaye nazar bhar me...
khuda ne dil tuje diya hai.....dillagi ki baat kar....

jasbaat aise jaga de...jo unke dil ko chhu le....
Pyar kiya hai dost....Bandagi ki baat kar...

Gar dil na lage....unki yaad bahot aaye...
Bhool ja unhe thodider...Madhuri(dixit) ki baat kar...

Ai mere yaar mood bana.....mausiki ki baat kar.....
Pyaar kiya hai tune....Zindagi ki baat kar....

to kya hua gar kabhi dard se mulakaat kar....
apne hi andar ro le....na khurafaat kar...

aansu chhipa ke tujko....duniya ko hasana hai...
chhed khushiyon ke tarane...mastagi ki baat kar...


Har ek insaani bachcha tere pyaar ke kaabil hai..
siraf ek ka tu chhod ab poori duniya se pyaar kar...

Ai mere yaar.....mood bana.....zindagi ki baat kar...

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31st March 2005, 06:44 PM

nice words ashish
keeeeeeeeep comming


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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2nd April 2005, 01:18 PM

arz hai doston
nayi thread start nahi ki kyuki kuch fayda nahi tha
to bas yahi likh diya
apni besh keeeeeemti raaaaaaayeee zarooooor de plz

Haaton me liye paimana, jaam dhoonda karta hoon.
Tere sang guzaarne ko, ek shaam dhoonda karta hoon.

Duniya wale humare rishte ko, yu hi badnaam karte hai.
Ke main is rishte ko, dene ek naam dhoonda karta hoon.

Teri khwaabon me, guzarti hai raatein.
Teri yaadon me, kat-ti hai shaam.

Tere-mere baare, log karte hai baatein.
Aise-jaise, yahan charcha ho koi aam



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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hi - 2nd April 2005, 01:40 PM

dard ji,
ab aapko ky batyaye hum
aapne sach main ye bhi 1 best post hi ki hai,
sach hi hai, jo log dil o samjhte nahi,
jinhe pata hi nahi pyaar ka matlab,
unhise pyaar ho gaya, mehfil mani bhi tanayai milti hai,
todisi kyun na ho BEWAFAI to milti hi hai,
aaise logonse...............
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Re: hi - 2nd April 2005, 01:50 PM

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dard ji,
ab aapko ky batyaye hum
aapne sach main ye bhi 1 best post hi ki hai,
sach hi hai, jo log dil o samjhte nahi,
jinhe pata hi nahi pyaar ka matlab,
unhise pyaar ho gaya, mehfil mani bhi tanayai milti hai,
todisi kyun na ho BEWAFAI to milti hi hai,
aaise logonse...............
thanks for the compliments aaskhika ji

ab aapne doctor ka pic bheja hai to koi dawa dijiye mere is dard ko
par kya kare
"kisi ne sach hi kaha hai
dawa bhi kaam na aaye
koi dua na lage
mere khuda kabhi kisi ko
pyar ki hawa na lage"

arz hai
bewafa bewafa nahi hota
khatam yaha ye faisla nahi hota
kam piye to behekna lagte hai
zyaada piye to nasha nahi hota
kuch to majbooriyan unki bhi rahi hogi
yu hi to koi bewafa nahi hota........

ek aur-
aisi bewafai usne ki,ke mohabbat tak badnaam ho gayi
apne pyar ki usne itni keemat vasool ki ki hamari arthi tak nilaam hogayi


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jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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dear jubin ji,
wow, bohot acha likha hai. whoever she was, she didnt have the courage to appreciate your love. usne aapke saath bewafaii ki and im really sorry for that....log bewafa kyun hote hain? hame khush kar ke phir dar kyun dehte hain? muje kabhi yeh samaj nahin ayi.
take care
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dear jubin ji,
wow, bohot acha likha hai. whoever she was, she didnt have the courage to appreciate your love. usne aapke saath bewafaii ki and im really sorry for that....log bewafa kyun hote hain? hame khush kar ke phir dar kyun dehte hain? muje kabhi yeh samaj nahin ayi.
take care
mukhra
thanks for reading mukhra jiii
meri bhi samajh me kabhi nahi aayi ke log bewafa kyu hote hai
bas yahi soch lete hai ki
zindagi me kuch raha nahi dard ke siva
pehle aate the sapne tere in aankhon me
ab kuch aata nahi aansuo ke siva


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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kuch nasha to aapki baat ka hai
kuch nasha dheemi barsaat ka hai
hame aap yu hi sharaabi na kahiye
dil pe ye asar aapse mulakaat ka hai


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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bewafa bewafa nahi hota
khatam yaha ye faisla nahi hota
kam piye to behekna lagte hai
zyaada piye to nasha nahi hota
kuch to majbooriyan unki bhi rahi hogi
yu hi to koi bewafa nahi hota........

******************************

dear dard ji,
humein pata hai aapke jajbaat,
par agar unhe pata hi nahi pyaar nibhate kaise hai,
jab woh hamra pyaar sajhate nahi, to phir woh humse dil lagate kyun hai, pal pal bewfai se marnese to accha hai, ki woh 1 hi pal main maar de...............
gar unki bhi koi majburiya hai, to kya woh ye pehele nahi samjh sakte, ke humara dil jab tutega to kitni takleef hogi hamein, pal pal unki yadon main hum yuhi mar jayenge................


ab gawara nahi koi aur bhi ho jo meri tarah u tumpe mare.....
tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di.......
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dear dard ji,
humein pata hai aapke jajbaat,
par agar unhe pata hi nahi pyaar nibhate kaise hai,
jab woh hamra pyaar sajhate nahi, to phir woh humse dil lagate kyun hai, pal pal bewfai se marnese to accha hai, ki woh 1 hi pal main maar de...............
gar unki bhi koi majburiya hai, to kya woh ye pehele nahi samjh sakte, ke humara dil jab tutega to kitni takleef hogi hamein, pal pal unki yadon main hum yuhi mar jayenge................
aashika ji
unki nasheeli aankhon ne to hame pehle hi maar diya tha
aur aapke sawaalo ka jawaab main de nahi sakta kyuki mujhe khud ko pata nahi aisi kaunsi majbooriya tha unki

kyu hoti hai zindagi aapse shuru?
kyu aap per hi khatum ho jati hai?
kyu hasati hai aapki baatein hume?
kyu aapki baatein hi rulati hai?
kyu soch kar aapko hi muskurate hai?
kyu soch kar aapko hi gum ho jate hai?
kyu jagte hai raaton ko?
kyu din main bhi na so pate hai?
kyu lagti hai zindagi khoi si?
kyu ise hum dhundna chahate hai?
kyu dusro ko samjhakar bhi?
kyu khud na samajh pate hai?
kyu khud se yeh sawal karte hai?
kyu aapse kuch na kahe paate hai?


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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hiii
Doli me bithaoge to aayenge
maa se maang ke lejaoge to aayenge
sochlo ye mushkil ka safar hoga
na laut jaane ke liye bulaoge to aayenge.

Kehnay ko woh haseen thay, aankhen thi bewafa
Daman meri nazaron se bacha kar chale gaye
Itna mujhko bata do mere dil ki dhadkano
Woh kaun the jo khwab dikha kar chale gaye

wise to poora post hi achha tha but yeh do paras bohot hi achhe the
keep writing


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those sparkling eyes
A 100 watt smile
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hiii
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wise to poora post hi achha tha but yeh do paras bohot hi achhe the
keep writing
thanks for the compliments khushiiii ji
hamne aapko yaad kiya aur aap chale aaye
bahut ehsaaan aapka
thanks a lot


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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Sanam ki bewafai ka kissa kya sunau
ab to kagaz pe bhi koi jagah na rahi
mar ke kabr me leta hua hoon
par yahan bhi har dum teri yaad satati rahi


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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Kafan na dalo mere chehre par, mujhe aadat hai muskurane ki
aaj raat na dafnao mujhe, aaj umeed hai unke aane ki

aaj ki raat hai,
kehni ek baat hai
namkeen ki tarah nahi,
misri se meetha apna pyar hai

sagar ki gehrai se gehra apna pyar hai
apne pyar ki hawaon si duniya me aayi bahaar hai
Kahan se ye khizan aayi, bewafai ki rut kaha se laayi hai
juda hokar humne khuda se, tumhari khushi ki guhar lagai hai.....


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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Bahut Khoob Jubin

Keep it up


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thanks alot naresh ki keeeeeep reading


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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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ZARA POOCH MERE GHAR KE DARO-DEEWAR SE
KYA THA MERI DEEWANAGI KA AALAM TERI JUDAAI KE BAAD.

SACH KEHTE HAIN BOHOT ROYE LIPAT KE DARO-DEEWAR SE
TERI BEWAFAAYI KE BAAD.

FIKRMAND HOON TERE HAATHON KE PATTHAR MERE ZAKHMON
SE RISHTA NIBHAYENGE YA NAHI
MERE JISM SE ROOH KI WIDAYI KE BAAD.

AGAR TUJHE ROSHNI CHAHIYE THI TO MUJHE SE MAANGLETI
MAIN KHUD KO BHI JALAALETA MERE GHAR KO JALAANE KE BAAD.

LAGTA HAI JAHANNUMI BANAKAR CHODEGI MUJHE,MERE KABR
PAR FAATEHAA PADHNE AAYI HAI
MERI ZINDAGI KO JAHANNUM BANANE KE BAAD
--------JUBIN JOSHI


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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hey frnds mujhe pata chal gaya hai kaun hai vo ladki

kya kahoon kitni deewani thi woh ladki
thodi jani thodi begaani thi woh ladki
mujhse na poocho ke kaun thi woh ladki
meri hi likhi hui ek kahani thi woh ladki


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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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Sanam ki bewafai ka kissa kya sunau
ab to kagaz pe bhi koi jagah na rahi
mar ke kabr me leta hua hoon
par yahan bhi har dum teri yaad satati rahi

Us BeWaFa Ke BiNa HuM Jee To LeN Ge

PaR Us Ki YaaDoN Ka Kia KaRooN

Us Ki ShaDi Pe Us Ko KhuShiYoN Ki Dua De To DooN

PaR BehTe HoYe AanSuWoN Ka Kia KaRooN ?........

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Us BeWaFa Ke BiNa HuM Jee To LeN Ge

PaR Us Ki YaaDoN Ka Kia KaRooN

Us Ki ShaDi Pe Us Ko KhuShiYoN Ki Dua De To DooN

PaR BehTe HoYe AanSuWoN Ka Kia KaRooN ?........

ApNa AsGheR....

bahut khoooob asgher ji
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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