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Yaadein........ - 19th October 2009, 12:45 PM

PART I
Yaado ke dhundle hue safar me
aur yaade aaa jati hai !!!!
Jaane kaha se timtimati hui...
jeevan ko aur timtima jati hai....

Khatti Yaade-Mithi Yade
Gudgudati Yaade-Khilkhilati Yaade
Jalati Yaade-Tadpati Yaade
Mehkti Yaade-Mehkati Yaade
Hasati Yaade-Rulati Yaade
Choti Si Yaade-Moti Si Yaade
Shabdo Ki Yaade-Socho Ki Yaade
Phoolo Ki Yaade-Pahado Ki Yaade
Leharti Yaade- Teharati Yaade
Yaado Ki Yaade-Yaado Me Yaade
AAti AAti Jati Yaade---Jati Jati AAti Yaade

Yaado ke is dhundle hue safar me.....
Timtimati hui...Jeevan ki Kaisi Kaisi yaade

PART II
Le Jayegi Jaha Bhi
chala jaaunga me...
yaado ke saath is safar me...
bahut door tak jaaunga me....
karna jo bhi tha kar chuka hu me...
aur bhi bahut kuch kar jaaunga me...
Yaado Me Jiya Hu...Yaado Me Aur Jiye Jaunga Me...
Le Jayegi Jaha Bhi Chala Jaaunga Me....
Timtimate Hue is Jeevan Me...Roshni Aur Kar Jaunga Me
Yaado Me Jiya Hu...Yaado Me Jiye jaunga Me...


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Thumbs up nice one - 19th October 2009, 07:38 PM

[QUOTE=amit7600;370374]PART I
Yaado ke dhundle hue safar me
aur yaade aaa jati hai !!!!
Jaane kaha se timtimati hui...
jeevan ko aur timtima jati hai....

Khatti Yaade-Mithi Yade
Gudgudati Yaade-Khilkhilati Yaade
Jalati Yaade-Tadpati Yaade
Mehkti Yaade-Mehkati Yaade
Hasati Yaade-Rulati Yaade
Choti Si Yaade-Moti Si Yaade
Shabdo Ki Yaade-Socho Ki Yaade
Phoolo Ki Yaade-Pahado Ki Yaade
Leharti Yaade- Teharati Yaade
Yaado Ki Yaade-Yaado Me Yaade
AAti AAti Jati Yaade---Jati Jati AAti Yaade

Yaado ke is dhundle hue safar me.....
Timtimati hui...Jeevan ki Kaisi Kaisi yaade

PART II
Le Jayegi Jaha Bhi
chala jaaunga me...
yaado ke saath is safar me...
bahut door tak jaaunga me....
karna jo bhi tha kar chuka hu me...
aur bhi bahut kuch kar jaaunga me...
Yaado Me Jiya Hu...Yaado Me Aur Jiye Jaunga Me...
Le Jayegi Jaha Bhi Chala Jaaunga Me....
Timtimate Hue is Jeevan Me...Roshni Aur Kar Jaunga Me
Yaado Me Jiya Hu...Yaado
Me Jiye jaunga


Amit ji,

Mujhe aapki yeh koshish achhi lagi, khas taur pe ''timtimane'' jaise shabd ka achha istemaal......

Aapke vichaar Khoobsurat haiN, aap issi kriti ko dobaara likhne ki koshish kijiye, uske behtar likh paayenge.

Aap se gustaakhi ki muafi chahunga, mere kehne ka mahtaab yeh bilkul nahi hai ke iss wali me koi kami, bs Yuo'n hi mera dil kehta hai ke aap isko iss se Kahi'n behtar likh sakte hai'n......

Aapka khair-khwah

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Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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19th October 2009, 11:31 PM

Vikramji,

Jab Dil milte hai to gusthakhiya nahi hoti......maine jitna samjha hai kalam ko chalane vale....dil ke bahut mithe hote hai.... vaise mera aisa manana hai agar aapne parkha hai to sahi hi parkha hoga....jab dil ke tar mile hai to sabdo ko milne me jayda samay nahi lagega.....
vaise meri koshish yehi thi ki awaaz dil tak pahuche.....sabdo ki banvat pe itna dhyan nahi de paya.....koshish imandari se karna chatha tha.......aage se aur mahnet ki mujhse umeed rakhiye.....niraash nahi hone doonga

Thoda aur timtima lu....phir chale aana


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Smile Achha laga..... - 20th October 2009, 12:42 AM

Maine aapko pehle hi kaha tha ke aap khoobsurat vyaktitva ke maalik hain aur aapke vichaar bhi bahut sundar hain.....

Main khud koi badhiya kavi ya shayar nahi hu, mujhe aapki kriti padh ke laga ke aap achha to bin shubha likhte hain lekin ye ehsaas bhi hua ki aap aur bahut behtar likh sakte hain....

Ab jab dil milne ki baat hui hai toh ek baat aur kehni chahunga ke iss ''ji'' shabd ka pryog band karen....aap mujhe sirf Vikram keh ke mukhatib honge toh achha lagega.....

Meri uss Khuda se yeh dua rahegi ki taraqi karen aur bulandi ke mukaam ko hasil karen..

Ek Dost
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20th October 2009, 01:08 AM

Tariquui aur bulandi ke baare me bahut kam socha hai.....kisi ne kaha tha..."Me nahi chatha chir sukh me nahi cahata chir dukh....." me ye bhi jaanta hu ki aapki bhi soch is tarah ki hai.....

aapke in hasin ehsaaso ke liye tahe dill se dhanyavaad.....yakin kijiye yehi khayalat mere aapke liye aur doosro ke liye bhi hai....
kisi aur ehsaas ke saath phir hazir haunga....
aur aapke sabdo ka bhi intizaar hai....
Isi dua ke saath ki aapki kalam ko aur taqat mile....

Aaapka

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Tariquui aur bulandi ke baare me bahut kam socha hai.....kisi ne kaha tha..."Me nahi chatha chir sukh me nahi cahata chir dukh....." me ye bhi jaanta hu ki aapki bhi soch is tarah ki hai.....

aapke in hasin ehsaaso ke liye tahe dill se dhanyavaad.....yakin kijiye yehi khayalat mere aapke liye aur doosro ke liye bhi hai....
kisi aur ehsaas ke saath phir hazir haunga....
aur aapke sabdo ka bhi intizaar hai....
Isi dua ke saath ki aapki kalam ko aur taqat mile....

Aaapka

A-mit

"JI" ka durupoyog aap bhi na kare ise varjit hi samajiye
Amit bhai,

Agar ab tak taraqi aur bulandi ke baare me nahi soocha to please socna shuru kar do...

Taraqi ka sidha matlab aapke mansik star se hai, amuman log isse paise se taulte hain..

For me progress means elevatiion of one's mental faculties and firmness of one's character

Aapka andaaz mujhe khoob pasand aaya......

Milte rahiye
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9th November 2009, 11:44 AM

bahut khooooobb... amit g
aapke liye ..

le chalegi jaha bhi ye hawa udd chala jauga mai
mai to tinka hu meri fitrat hai sang uske chalna..


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10th November 2009, 02:55 PM

sumanaji,
aapke prosthaan bhare shabdo se bahut shakti milti hai,
aaise hi milte rahiye,

duao ke saath


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PART I
Yaado ke dhundle hue safar me
aur yaade aaa jati hai !!!!
Jaane kaha se timtimati hui...
jeevan ko aur timtima jati hai....

Khatti Yaade-Mithi Yade
Gudgudati Yaade-Khilkhilati Yaade
Jalati Yaade-Tadpati Yaade
Mehkti Yaade-Mehkati Yaade
Hasati Yaade-Rulati Yaade
Choti Si Yaade-Moti Si Yaade
Shabdo Ki Yaade-Socho Ki Yaade
Phoolo Ki Yaade-Pahado Ki Yaade
Leharti Yaade- Teharati Yaade
Yaado Ki Yaade-Yaado Me Yaade
AAti AAti Jati Yaade---Jati Jati AAti Yaade

Yaado ke is dhundle hue safar me.....
Timtimati hui...Jeevan ki Kaisi Kaisi yaade

PART II
Le Jayegi Jaha Bhi
chala jaaunga me...
yaado ke saath is safar me...
bahut door tak jaaunga me....
karna jo bhi tha kar chuka hu me...
aur bhi bahut kuch kar jaaunga me...
Yaado Me Jiya Hu...Yaado Me Aur Jiye Jaunga Me...
Le Jayegi Jaha Bhi Chala Jaaunga Me....
Timtimate Hue is Jeevan Me...Roshni Aur Kar Jaunga Me
Yaado Me Jiya Hu...Yaado Me Jiye jaunga Me...
Amit,

Good work, I liked your poem.

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26th November 2009, 12:07 AM

vibhuti ji
dhanyavad..."good work" maine nahi ...aapne kiya hai, jo ek samanya rachna ko itna maan diya.aapke shabd mere shabdo ke saath isi tarha chalte rahe aisi hi meri kaamna hai...

shubkamanye

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