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18th June 2006, 11:48 AM
Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno 
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18th June 2006, 01:30 PM
shrdha dost
ek bohat khoobsurat ehsaas, ek nihayet pur-lutf aur haseen jazbe ko aap ne apni is ghazel mein kiyaa hai. aap ke kalam ki khoobsurti is mein chupa jazbaa aur khud-supurdgi ka walwala hai jo aap ko bohat mumtaaz ker raha hai aur munfarid bana raha hai. ajab si naghmagi, taazgi, aur yagaangat ka ehsaas jaga rahi hai aapki yeh ghazel. shrdha aap ki tehreer aap ki zehni pukhtgi ki alaamat hai aur zindagi se aap ki mohabbat ki daleel hai. isi tarah likhti rahein, aap ko bohat aage jaana hai , yeh yaad rakhein. hamari duayein hamesha aap ke saath hongi. aap mehsoos karein. musharrafhusain |
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18th June 2006, 01:53 PM
Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno beautifulll..... Shraddha, A very very very beautiful poem... Tumhaare aashaar ki saadgi dil chhoo jaati hai... jab bhi tum saada lafzon me likhti ho ek alag hi baat aati hai.... mujhe bahut pasand aayi yeh ghazal tumhaari.... yun hi likhti raho... and do TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th June 2006, 02:43 PM
very well expressed and nice poetry shrddha
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18th June 2006, 02:43 PM
very well expressed and nice poetry shrddha
keep it up regards manu |
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Re: Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno -
18th June 2006, 07:17 PM
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abhi kya kahun......shaayad shabdon ka gareeb mehsoos kar raha hoon aapki in himmat deti hui panktiyon ke aage. Aapki yeh peshkash sach mein ek 'shabdon ka sangam' hai. Bahaut kuch kehgayi hai aapki har ek pankti aur bahaut kuch degayi hai prerna ke roop mein. Isi tarah likhtey rahiyega aur aapko parhney ka awsar detey rahiyega. v i p i n 
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18th June 2006, 09:49 PM
Wonderfully written shrdha di,
Keep writing ... take care Rohin |
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18th June 2006, 11:46 PM
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sach kaha hai vipin ji ne... shabdo ka akaal sa pad gaya ho jaise ,, ye bataane ke liye ki ye kitni saadgi se likhi gayi khoobsoorat peshkash hai yu hi likhti raho dear apna khayal rakhna ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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Re: Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno -
19th June 2006, 11:31 AM
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ye sach mei bohat-bohat-bohat sunder hei. Jaise lafzo ne baandhliya ho or keh rahe ho ki humey pado or kho jao. aapki kaanch |
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19th June 2006, 11:47 AM
Priye Shraddha...
Tumhari iss rachnaa mein chahat aur jeene ka jazzbaa umadhta chala aa raha hai...ek geet kee tarah dil mein ghar kar gaye yeh ashaar...khaaskar Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno kyun nahin...duniya kee har adbhut kriti, har reet kuchh na kucch tau sikhaa hi rahi hai roz roz hamein...bus ham aankhein khol ke dekhein tau... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th June 2006, 05:20 PM
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bahut khoob, good one. keep it continue. Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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20th June 2006, 01:17 AM
HI shard
bahote dino bade tume hara likha pada aacha laga bhoate hi aacha likha hia tumne simple laine truth of life. nice work keep it up mushkan |
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20th June 2006, 06:36 AM
Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno Wah di... kitne dino baad aapko padha... ek furti si bhar gai badan mein.. aapko padhkar energy milti hai... likhti rahiye aapke bache younhi phalte phoolte rahenge  "Trust is the base of relations, but LOVE is Unspoken promise of Trust" <<<<<SaHiL and His Violin>>>>>>>> |
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