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uske aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya - 19th June 2006, 04:26 PM

dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"


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hum to samjhe the ki barsaat main barsegi sharaab,

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11th July 2006, 12:25 PM

hi all, i tis not mine.. but i must share with u all .. here..

kal tak to kaheta tha ki bistar se utha jata nahin ,
aaj uth gaya duniya se , bata itni takat kahan se aa gayi....
   
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11th July 2006, 12:27 PM

arz kiya hai...

saaki ne naa dekhe honge humse sharaabi,
ki maikhana pee gaye peete peete..

saaki ne na dekhe honge humse sharabi,
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4th August 2006, 03:51 PM

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hi all, i tis not mine.. but i must share with u all .. here..

kal tak to kaheta tha ki bistar se utha jata nahin ,
aaj uth gaya duniya se , bata itni takat kahan se aa gayi....
hello dost

appke share ka reply kar rahi hu:

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"kahdey meri laash par kahtey hai woh has kar,
aji tum to kahtey thy ki mujhe neend nahi aati"


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Jara Gaur Farmaiye
meri urdu bahut achchhi nahin hai, maafi chahunga, yadi koi galti ho jaye to.

" Dekha ki -e-bo mast nigahon se baar baar,
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" kaun Kahta hai ki aasmaan main suraakh nahin ho sakta,

Ek patthar to tabiyat se uchhalo yaaro. "
mujhe to urdu ke bahut kum words hi yaad rahtey hai.

"milla baharo ko fareb teri berukhi se verna,
yeh pedoo se pattey jadney ka mousam na tha"


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Jara Gaur Farmaiye
meri urdu bahut achchhi nahin hai, maafi chahunga, yadi koi galti ho jaye to.

" Dekha ki -e-bo mast nigahon se baar baar,
jab tak sharaab aayi , kai daur ho gaye".
"jaam nahi to na sahi, ankho se hi pilla de saaki,
kaise uth jau maikhane se abhi hosh hai bakki"


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" Bo kagaj ki naav tumhari kaise doob gayi Zafar,
tum to yaar bade maahir they aisi naav chalane main".
"kismat ne mujhe dhokha diya har pal,
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" Buland hausale Fateh ki buniyaad hua karte hain,
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kaanpate hathon se talwaar na uthaya kijiye".

" Bhulana humko na itna assan hoga,
gujarish ye hai ki koshish to kijiye".
"jab jab tumey bulaya tum aur yaad aaye,
jatey nahi hai dil se ab tak tumarey saaye,
tumse bichdney ka jab bhi khayal aaya,
tanhai to kaya hum mahfil mai bhi gabraye"


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bahut khoob Sunita ji, Bahut khoob, kafi dinon ke baad koi umda sher suna hai. tahe dil se taarif karna chahoonga.

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" Buland hausale Fateh ki buniyaad hua karte hain,
kaanpate hathon se talwaar na uthaya kijiye".

" Bhulana humko na itna assan hoga,
gujarish ye hai ki koshish to kijiye".

Atul ji appne appna naam to bataya, bahut bahut shukriya. aur mera share appko pasand aaya, yeh pad kar accha lagga.

arz hai:

"aaj phir dil se ek awaaz aai hai,
is liye humne ye shayari bnai hai,
aapko bhulane ki koshish kaise karen hum,
nas nas mein teri yaad samaai hai"

appki dost


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"Achchhi Surat bhi kyaa Shai hai,
jisne daali buri nazar dali".

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"us par hi na janey kyu aa gaya appna dil,
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"Maloom hai ki safar na assan hoga ye,
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"socha tha ab na jayegey us taraf,
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SALAM...........


SHUKRIYAA AAP KA JOH AAPNE MERE ASHAAR KO PHIR SE YAHA DORAYA THAX ONCE AGAIN GOD BLESS U.....................
balekum salaam

sir app kis ashaar ki baat kar rahey hai, mai samji nahi. agar app last wala kah rahey hai, to pls dont mind yeh maine kuad joda hai. aur agar appke kisi share se milta hai to pls mujhe maaf karey. mujhe b pasand nahi hai ki mai kisi ka likha phir likhu.

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"tu etna shatir hoga yeh humey andaza na tha,
khar ishq mai tu akhir appni manzil to pa gaya"
atul ji appka reply nahi aaya, i m waiting........!


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Sunita ji,
ye lines mujhe bahut pasand hain. jitni baar sunta hoon utna aur sunane ki ichchha hoti hai.

please parh kar reply jaroor kariye. ki apko kaisi lagi?.

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Judai Ke Safar Ko Kum Karde.
Jitna Duur Chale Gaye Woh Mujhse,
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Sunita ji,
ye lines mujhe bahut pasand hain. jitni baar sunta hoon utna aur sunane ki ichchha hoti hai.

please parh kar reply jaroor kariye. ki apko kaisi lagi?.

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E Khuda Aaj Ye Faisla Karde,
Use Mera ya Mujhe Uska Karde.
Bahut Dukh Sahe He Maine,
Koi Khusi Ab Toh Muqadar Karde.
Bahot Muskil Lagta Hai Usse Duur Rehna,
Judai Ke Safar Ko Kum Karde.
Jitna Duur Chale Gaye Woh Mujhse,
Use Utna Kareeb Karde.
Nahi Likha Agar Nasib Me Uska Naam,
To Khatam Kar Ye Zindagi aur Mujhe FANAA Karde.
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atul ji yeh shayri bahut hi acchi hai, es ke jawab dena to bahut mushkil hai, phir bhi koshish jaroor karugi.

"eh mere dost aisa bhi kabhi hua hai kaya,
jo hum mangey woh kabhi milla hai kaya,
aur yeh baata aisa bhi kabhi hua hai kaya,
jisey hum dil se chahey woh kabhi milla hai kaya,
bin mangey to bahut kuch mil jaata hai jaha,
par waffa ke badley kabhi waffa milli hai kaya,
jiska mahboob ka naam dil par woh likh deta hai,
uska naam hattho ki lakeero mai kabhi likha hai kaya"

appki dost

-sunita virender


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11th August 2006, 05:58 PM

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atul ji yeh shayri bahut hi acchi hai, es ke jawab dena to bahut mushkil hai, phir bhi koshish jaroor karugi.

"eh mere dost aisa bhi kabhi hua hai kaya,
jo hum mangey woh kabhi milla hai kaya,
aur yeh baata aisa bhi kabhi hua hai kaya,
jisey hum dil se chahey woh kabhi milla hai kaya,
bin mangey to bahut kuch mil jaata hai jaha,
par waffa ke badley kabhi waffa milli hai kaya,
jiska mahboob ka naam dil par woh likh deta hai,
uska naam hattho ki lakeero mai kabhi likha hai kaya"

appki dost

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kaya baat hai didi aapki hazir jawabi ka
pata nahi itne acche shawad dhood ke kahan se lati ho
jawab padkar maza aa gaya

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kaya baat hai didi aapki hazir jawabi ka
pata nahi itne acche shawad dhood ke kahan se lati ho
jawab padkar maza aa gaya

dilip
dilip agar appko mere yeh shawad acchey lagey to bahut kushi ki baat hai, vaise maine to atul ke likhey ka jawab hi diya hai.

thanks alot

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Re: uske aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya - 14th August 2006, 03:37 PM

Bohat khoob jee

aaj kaafi dino baad ish mehkhane mein aaya aur aapki post dikh gayi jaisa socha tha vaisa hi khoobsurat sher padhne ko mila


Dard-e-dil walo ka bas yahi thikana hai
mere ghar k pass khula ek mehkhana hai
dard-o-ghum ki har dawa yaha milti hai
is liye hi hamara yahaaN aana jana hai....


koi dum nahi mere sher mein bas taang adane ki aadat jo hai...hahaha


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dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"


Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha


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Re: Re: uske aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya - 15th August 2006, 02:12 PM

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Bohat khoob jee

aaj kaafi dino baad ish mehkhane mein aaya aur aapki post dikh gayi jaisa socha tha vaisa hi khoobsurat sher padhne ko mila


Dard-e-dil walo ka bas yahi thikana hai
mere ghar k pass khula ek mehkhana hai
dard-o-ghum ki har dawa yaha milti hai
is liye hi hamara yahaaN aana jana hai....


koi dum nahi mere sher mein bas taang adane ki aadat jo hai...hahaha


Shukriyah sunita jee itna acha likhne k liye
Diggaj ji bahut accha lagga appko es mahkhane mai dekh kar, aur appney jo share likha hai bahut lajwaab hai. umeed karti hu es mahkhane mai aana janna nahi chodeygey app.

"dard had se gujar jaye to tu hi batta kaya karey,
tere ghar ke paas wale mehkahne mai aakar marey,
2 gunt piney ko milley na miley tere se nazar jaroor miley,
jo nasha teri nazro mai miley woh sharab mai kaha miley"


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"Kar diye taj mahal ke tukade tukade humane
Faink kar abe yamuna main patthar"
"taj mahal ke tukade karke kaya samjtey ho,
tum bewaffeai karne wallo ke kudha ban gaye,
aji janab ishq to dil mai hota hai taj mai nahi,
aise sitam sahney ke baad ishq aur nikharta hai"

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hi all, i tis not mine.. but i must share with u all .. here..

kal tak to kaheta tha ki bistar se utha jata nahin ,
aaj uth gaya duniya se , bata itni takat kahan se aa gayi....
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Taj ke sitam - 2nd September 2006, 04:22 PM

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"taj mahal ke tukade karke kaya samjtey ho,
tum bewaffeai karne wallo ke kudha ban gaye,
aji janab ishq to dil mai hota hai taj mai nahi,
aise sitam sahney ke baad ishq aur nikharta hai"

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