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kisi kisi tarah se dil ko behlaya karte hai -
13th April 2003, 03:04 PM
this for that person whom i really admire and i want to say him...hats off to ur love
______________________________________ kisi kisi tarah se... apne dil ko behlaya karte hai aansuo ko mitane ke liye,unhe bahaya karte hai ek wohi hai jiske liye rote rehte hai har waqt ek wohi hai jisko dekhkar muskuraya karte hai koi aa kar puchh le agar thikana hamara to ab bhi tere dil ka pata bataya karte hai tu chahe yakiN kare ya na kare muj par teri turbat par apna dil jalaya karte hai jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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14th April 2003, 12:01 AM
koi aa kar puchh le agar thikana hamara
to ab bhi tere dil ka pata bataya karte hai tu chahe yakiN kare ya na kare muj par teri turbat par apna dil jalaya karte hai waah sahab... bohat khoob likha hai aapne... padh ke tabiyat khush ho gayi... sach me aapne apne chahne waale ke liye bohat kashish bhare lehze me likha hai... aise hi likhte rahiye aur muskurate rahiye... |
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14th April 2003, 06:41 AM
Meri sanam..
Waah.. kya khoob ghazal likhi hai aapne  bahot dinoN ke baad hi sahii, magar aapke darshan to ho gaye! sachaaii ke saath khoobiyat bhi aapne in lafzoN ke zariye pesh ki hai.. sach meiN, tabiiyat achchi hogi =] likhte rahiye, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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Nice.. -
14th April 2003, 11:14 AM
Hey Sanam ,
You have written really nice. The last stanza is absolutely great..Aapne True love ki baat ki hain. To Hum bhi Kuch kehna chahenge.. Its when you shed Tears and still you care for her, Its when she ignores you and still long for her, .........Its when she begins to love another......... and yet you still smile and say I'm happy for you. -HamzaAli But Magic may sometimes just be an Illusion... |
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14th April 2003, 03:29 PM
Sanam ji,
Kaisi hai aap. Bahut dino ke baad aayi hain aap is site par magar entry jabardast rahi Bahut hi badia kalaam likha hai aapne.If such a wonderful poem is written in admiration of ones love,thAT person really deserves all the praise. Aapki likhi hui yeh lines bahut pasand aayi kisi kisi tarah se... apne dil ko behlaya karte hai aansuo ko mitane ke liye,unhe bahaya karte hai Aise hi likhte rahiye, Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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14th April 2003, 08:03 PM
wah wah ,
ek wohi hai jiske liye rote rehte hai har waqt ek wohi hai jisko dekhkar muskuraya karte hai yeh line mujhe behad pasand aayi hai. zeba |
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14th April 2003, 08:12 PM
hello BEDIL (sorry) BENAAMji
first of all thanks for reading. and secondly... ye kashish bhare lafz is nacheej ke chahnewale ke liye nahi hai. Qki me jinda hu, meri turbat nahi hai Aur qki meri turbat nahi hai us par dil kaun jalayega. Kash.... wo meri bhi turbat ho jis par koi diye ke badle dil jalaye... dil na sahi kamse kam meri ruh to khus ho jaye . khair, har kisi ke naseeb aisa kaha hota hai. And again thanks for replying. aise hi padhte rahiye...qki aap jaise chahnewale hi to hamari himmat hai. sanam ======================================== Hamgam AMAN uff....... wohi aap, wohi aapki aankhe (wohi spects....hehe), aur wohi maiN, magarrrrrrrrr aapki tabiyat!!!! khusi hui ye jankar.. ki kuchh lamho ke liye hi sahi, aapki ladkhadati hui tabiyat atchhi hui. Aur baaat rahi "bahot dino" ki, to kya kare....aakhir duniya gol hai. gum fir kar dil wahi aata hai jaha hamgam milte hai. khair, aur ek baar hosla afjayee ke liye sukriya khus raha kijiye aapki sanam ======================================== Hamza sahab ab me aapko kya kahu. pichhli bar jab aap mile the to tension me chhokar gaye the aur ab jab mile hai to dil khus kar diya. really aapne bahot bahot bahot hi atchha likha hai Its when you shed Tears and still you care for her, Its when she ignores you and still long for her, .........Its when she begins to love another......... and yet you still smile and say I'm happy for you lagta hai aap ko bhi kisi ke dil ne sikast dedi. aur agar aisa hai to meri hamdardi aap ke sath hai. bye n take care padhte rahiye sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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14th April 2003, 08:15 PM
Virendarji
kaise hai aap? han!!! kuchh dino ke liye site se door rehna pada tha, magar aap hi ke lafjo me kahu to... kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai e dost chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... aur aap sab se door....akele to reh nahi sakte khair, padhne ke liye aur likhne ke liye bahot bahot sukriya. aise hi padhte rahiye sanam ================================= Zebaji sukriya, likhne ke liye aur pasanad karne ke liye. aise hi padhte rahiye aur hosla-afjayee karte rahiye sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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11th November 2013, 12:47 PM
Sanam
Bas aise hi waapis padh rahe the aapki likhi hui Kavita ko Kahan ho ? But Magic may sometimes just be an Illusion... |
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15th November 2013, 02:25 PM
kya baat hai sanam jee....pata nahin kyon pehle nazar nahin padi aapke kalaam pe.....its marvellous, heartblowing....amazing creation...main chahunga aap mehfil mein fir se roshni karein....i m waiting.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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