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kabhi mile gar tu jo - 20th July 2014, 08:57 PM

milne ke jaise kabhi apna milna na hua.....
phir bhi tanhaai banke har mehfil mein mila karti ho tum....

aankhon ki khata thi jo dil se dil ke taar jude....
dard ki gehraayi banke mere dil mein mila karti ho tum....

khud hi khud se karte rehte hain sawaal ham tamaam....
sawaalon ki purwayi banke mushkil mein mila karti ho tum....

khwabon mein the khwaab tujhe apna banane ke....
toote khwabon ki parchhayi banke har manjil mein mila karti ho tum.... love madiiii...


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20th July 2014, 10:18 PM

Madi jii,,

Shayri parivaar meiN aap ko khush-amdeed kehta hooN..

boht achii lagi aap ki yeh koshish,

Younhi mehfil meiN aate rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Smile shukriya nazneen ji - 20th July 2014, 10:24 PM

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Welcome to sdc madi.......apki pehli koshish bht hi achchi lagi yunhi likhte rahiye
shukriya nazneen ji apne meri nazm ko tarif-e kabil samjha or pasand kiya... apki duaa se yunhi likhte rahenge... :-)


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shukriya hassan ji - 20th July 2014, 10:36 PM

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Madi jii,,

Shayri parivaar meiN aap ko khush-amdeed kehta hooN..

boht achii lagi aap ki yeh koshish,

Younhi mehfil meiN aate rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,
shukriya hassan ji maine aapki kai nazmein padhi mujhe bahut hi lagaav sa laga aap ne meri nazm ki taareef ki ye mere liye bahut khushkismati ki baat hai aate rahenge hasan ji aapki duaa se


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log jigar wale hote hain jo roz naya mehboob dhoond lete hain..

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