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meri kahaani part 1 love MADIIII forever - 22nd July 2014, 09:56 PM



do dilon mein dafn
teen sabdon ki ye kahaani hai
baat koi 4 saal purani hai.... *
ek ghamandi si ladki thi
jiski naak pe gussa rehta tha
woh sabse gussa rehti thi
galat use sab lagta tha...
ek padhaaku sa ladka tha
jo hardam padhta rehta tha
"kitaabein he meri duniya hain" woh aksar kehta tha...
dono ke padhne jaane ka
tha waqt ek ek rasta tha
ladki scooty waali thi
ladka cycle se chalta tha...
ladki kabhi na hasti thi woh iss baat pe aksar hasta tha
par hamesha usse darr ke nazrein woh ghuma liya karta tha...
ladki ko jaanne pehchaanne ki baat se bhi darta tha
uski dabanngai ke kisse woh doston se suna karta tha...
kuchh dost us ladke ke
ladki ka peechha karte the
par kehte hain ladki ke rutbe se
woh saale bhi darte the....
july ka mahina tha
baadal ghane the
subah ka samay tha
lagbhag 9 baje the....
ladki scooty se aa rahi thi
ladka cycle liye khada tha
ladki has rahi thi
ladka bhi has pada tha...
ladke ke has dene pe
woh aankhein dikha gayi thi
par ladke ki aankhon mein woh
hasti soorat chha gayi thi...
us ek pal mein jaise woh sabkuchh haar gaya tha
ghar tak pahuchne mein woh bimaar ho gaya tha...
poore rashte wahi chehra
aankhon mein aa raha tha
aa jaaye woh ladki phir se
ladka chaah raha tha...
bheeg ke halki baarish mein ladka beemar hua tha
ek dabanng ladki ki hasi se usko pyaar hua tha...
4 dinon tak woh ladka bistar se laga raha
us chehre ko soch soch ke har raat jaga raha...
tabiyat ke theek hote he ladka coaching ko ja raha tha
woh nikli kyun nahin ye sochke sar khuja raha tha...
coaching ladka pahuch gaya par ladki na nikli thi
ladke ke man mein ho rahi badi khalbali thi...
wapas lautte waqt bhi woh bechain ho raha tha
anjaane mein kahin woh apna dil kho raha tha..

abhi meri jaan jaani hai
aage bhi kahaani hai....
continued.....


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do dilon mein dafn
teen sabdon ki ye kahaani hai
baat koi 4 saal purani hai.... *
ek ghamandi si ladki thi
jiski naak pe gussa rehta tha
woh sabse gussa rehti thi
galat use sab lagta tha...
ek padhaaku sa ladka tha
jo hardam padhta rehta tha
"kitaabein he meri duniya hain" woh aksar kehta tha...
dono ke padhne jaane ka
tha waqt ek ek rasta tha
ladki scooty waali thi
ladka cycle se chalta tha...
ladki kabhi na hasti thi woh iss baat pe aksar hasta tha
par hamesha usse darr ke nazrein woh ghuma liya karta tha...
ladki ko jaanne pehchaanne ki baat se bhi darta tha
uski dabanngai ke kisse woh doston se suna karta tha...
kuchh dost us ladke ke
ladki ka peechha karte the
par kehte hain ladki ke rutbe se
woh saale bhi darte the....
july ka mahina tha
baadal ghane the
subah ka samay tha
lagbhag 9 baje the....
ladki scooty se aa rahi thi
ladka cycle liye khada tha
ladki has rahi thi
ladka bhi has pada tha...
ladke ke has dene pe
woh aankhein dikha gayi thi
par ladke ki aankhon mein woh
hasti soorat chha gayi thi...
us ek pal mein jaise woh sabkuchh haar gaya tha
ghar tak pahuchne mein woh bimaar ho gaya tha...
poore rashte wahi chehra
aankhon mein aa raha tha
aa jaaye woh ladki phir se
ladka chaah raha tha...
bheeg ke halki baarish mein ladka beemar hua tha
ek dabanng ladki ki hasi se usko pyaar hua tha...
4 dinon tak woh ladka bistar se laga raha
us chehre ko soch soch ke har raat jaga raha...
tabiyat ke theek hote he ladka coaching ko ja raha tha
woh nikli kyun nahin ye sochke sar khuja raha tha...
coaching ladka pahuch gaya par ladki na nikli thi
ladke ke man mein ho rahi badi khalbali thi...
wapas lautte waqt bhi woh bechain ho raha tha
anjaane mein kahin woh apna dil kho raha tha..

abhi meri jaan jaani hai
aage bhi kahaani hai....
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Interesting story madi.....waiting for the next chapter of ur love
I'm expected happy ending...
what is your opinion, Naaz?


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23rd July 2014, 01:42 AM

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I hope happy ending ho, but i think nhi hai
umeed pe dunia qaaim hai.... kia pata achii ho.....

My heart wants happy ending...


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We all want happy ending in luv, but its quite uncommon, according to me i think this story does nt have happy ending, its my opinion u may differ, ppl often prefer writing about their incomplete love stories, its my observation
Yeah you're right that not all stories have a happy ending.
Sometimes, on rare occasions, you get that one story that doesnít end with.
May be in this story we got on the end that
"And they lived happily ever after let's hope for good...


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I too hope for happy ending lets c whts in next chapter.

@Madi:Sorry madi we are discussing ur luv life in ur absence, we both dnt hv anythng bettr to do

@Hassan: Ab kya fazr ke waqt soge
seems like we don't have any other work despite
spreading the nuisance on other's threads..


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hahaha so lets quit warna moderators ajaenge kaan khichne waise filhaal to sab ghode gadhe bech kar so rahe honge mai bhi sojati hun, gn
hahahahaha..... .. yeah... goodnight...


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Interesting story madi.....waiting for the next chapter of ur love
kitne ajeeb ho aap log mera majaak uda rahe ho shayad apni kismat he aisi hai


hum se bhulaya he nahin jaata ek mukhlis ka chehra,

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I too hope for happy ending lets c whts in next chapter.

@Madi:Sorry madi we are discussing ur luv life in ur absence, we both dnt hv anythng bettr to do

@Hassan: Ab kya fazr ke waqt soge
aap logon ko kisi ke emotions ka jara sa bhi khayal nahin aaya... :-(


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23rd July 2014, 05:04 AM

i think i made a big mistake by posting my story
sorry for that


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i think i made a big mistake by posting my story
sorry for that


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Extremely sorry madi never thought u'll take it negatively, we were just appreciating your story and i cant be insensitive towards love, i know the feeling, i apologise on behalf of Hassan too.

One more thing when you make your feelings public be ready for every type of comments if u r so sensitive then whats the point of posting in open forum.

I'll surely avoid commenting on any other of your post.

Stay Happy.
naaz ji i din't mean that.... you posted your veiw i posted my veiw that's it. if you think you din't do wrong then why are you being sorry. and you don't need to be so. i said that i think i made a big mistake posting my story and i mean it i din't said anything that could make you feel sorry.


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23rd July 2014, 09:22 AM

that's okey actually i felt hurting myself by posting my story you are right i'm so sensitive and that's my mistake...


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yeah sure i'll be posting but i won't do this mistake again i won't post my story again...
now you helped me..


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If you feel posting your story is helping you ease your pain pls do post it, dnt let my comments influence you in doing otherwise.
whatever but now my heart won't allow me to do so... don't worry i'm fine and i'll be fine i'll post something else but i won't be able to post my story :-)


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23rd July 2014, 11:09 AM

what the....

Array Boss Madi, hum to sirf happy ending ki wish kar rahay thay,

aap baat ko kahan se kahan le gaye....

Khair.... agar bura laga aap ko to jese Naaz ne kaha, I, too, sorry for that...

Stay happy,


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hassan ji....
don't be sorry above i said i made mistake ab mujhe kya pata tha koi kya comment kar dega but woh naaz ji ne mujhe samjha diya


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hassan ji....
don't be sorry above i said i made mistake ab mujhe kya pata tha koi kya comment kar dega but woh naaz ji ne mujhe samjha diya
That's good.

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