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Love Uljhan - 17th July 2014, 05:13 PM

Guzare Gaya Jo beete vaqt ki tarah,
Use bhulana aasan nahi hota.

Sunkar Jise khush ho dil
Har kahani ka vo anjaam nahi hota.

Kah Diya tha unse,na yaad Karna mujhe,
Aur na yaad Ana tum...
Par koi rah aisi bhi to nahi,
Janha jaun main aur uska Naam nahi hota.

Ye muamle duniya ke Tamam baar
Suljhaye hain Maine.....
Par dil ke mamle me mujhse
ye Kaam nahi hota.

Kai sawaal uljhane Kai
jab chcha jati hain Jahan me,
Sach kahti hai madhu...
Dil ko kanhi araam nahi aata..
   
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17th July 2014, 05:44 PM

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Guzare Gaya Jo beete vaqt ki tarah,
Use bhulana aasan nahi hota.

Sunkar Jise khush ho dil
Har kahani ka vo anjaam nahi hota.

Kah Diya tha unse,na yaad Karna mujhe,
Aur na yaad Ana tum...
Par koi rah aisi bhi to nahi,
Janha jaun main aur uska Naam nahi hota.

Ye muamle duniya ke Tamam baar
Suljhaye hain Maine.....
Par dil ke mamle me mujhse
ye Kaam nahi hota.

Kai sawaal uljhane Kai
jab chcha jati hain Jahan me,
Sach kahti hai madhu...
Dil ko kanhi araam nahi aata..
bahot khoob likhaa hiaa madhu ji... likhtii rahen

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17th July 2014, 09:30 PM

kya baat hai madhu g...........bahut hee naajuk ehsaas ..



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17th July 2014, 10:07 PM

ehsaas bahaut gaardhe hain. bahaut khoob madhu ji !


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18th July 2014, 04:45 PM

Good one madhu ji!...........................




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Thanku - 19th July 2014, 01:52 PM

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Guzare Gaya Jo beete vaqt ki tarah,
Use bhulana aasan nahi hota.

Sunkar Jise khush ho dil
Har kahani ka vo anjaam nahi hota.

Kah Diya tha unse,na yaad Karna mujhe,
Aur na yaad Ana tum...
Par koi rah aisi bhi to nahi,
Janha jaun main aur uska Naam nahi hota.

Ye muamle duniya ke Tamam baar
Suljhaye hain Maine.....
Par dil ke mamle me mujhse
ye Kaam nahi hota.

Kai sawaal uljhane Kai
jab chcha jati hain Jahan me,
Sach kahti hai madhu...
Dil ko kanhi araam nahi aata..
Aadaab !

khayalaat o jazbaat qabil e tareef hai , daad qabool kijiye

saath saath ghazal ke kuch bunyadi asool bhi peRh laiN takeh apke kalaam mai mazeed nikhaar aaye

neechy dee gai link per ghazal ki bunyaadi jaankaari majood hai
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bahut khoob likhti hain aap....
aakhir baat kya hai jo sabse chhupati hain aap....

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shukriya - 20th July 2014, 02:54 PM

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Aadaab !

khayalaat o jazbaat qabil e tareef hai , daad qabool kijiye

saath saath ghazal ke kuch bunyadi asool bhi peRh
neechy dee gai link per ghazal ki bunyaadi jaankaari majood hai
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2125
Aapki salah pe zaroor gaur karoongi thank you mujeeb ji....



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