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~*Sitam Dhaate rahe..*~ - 6th June 2014, 09:36 PM

yaaron doston ki khidmat me ek baar phir pesh hoon, ek adnaa si koshish ke saath... ummeed hai nosh farmaaiyega....



dil ki choTon ke liye ham khud ko samjhaate rahe,
aur wo zaalim ke us par bhii sitam Dhaate rahe.

main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe.

ham ne dil apnaa nikaalaa thaa bharii mahfil ,magar,
sab ne sach maanaa use, jo aap farmaate rahe.

wo andheroN kii duhaai de ke naa aaye kabhii,
aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

khaak tere koo ki ab bhii hogiii pahle kii tarah,
ik wajah ye bhii hai, tere shahr jo jaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe.



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दिल कि चोटों के लिये हम खुद को समझाते रहे,
और वो ज़ालिम के उस पर भी सितम ढाते रहे.

मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

खाक तेरे कू कि अब भी होगी पहले की तरह,
इक वजह ये भी है, तेरे शहर जो जाते रहे.

एक दिन वो पूछ बैठे इस क़दर क्यूं शाद हो?
क्या बताते दर्द में अपने ही मुस्काते रहे.



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6th June 2014, 09:59 PM

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yaaron doston ki khidmat me ek baar phir pesh hoon, ek adnaa si koshish ke saath... ummeed hai nosh farmaaiyega....



dil ki choTon ke liye ham khud ko samjhaate rahe,
aur wo zaalim ke us par bhii sitam Dhaate rahe.

main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe.

ham ne dil apnaa nikaalaa thaa bharii mahfil ,magar,
sab ne sach maanaa use, jo aap farmaate rahe.

wo andheroN kii duhaai de ke naa aaye kabhii,
aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

khaak tere koo ki ab bhii hogiii pahle kii tarah,
ik wajah ye bhii hai, tere shahr jo jaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe.



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दिल कि चोटों के लिये हम खुद को समझाते रहे,
और वो ज़ालिम के उस पर भी सितम ढाते रहे.

मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

खाक तेरे कू कि अब भी होगी पहले की तरह,
इक वजह ये भी है, तेरे शहर जो जाते रहे.

एक दिन वो पूछ बैठे इस क़दर क्यूं शाद हो?
क्या बताते दर्द में अपने ही मुस्काते रहे.



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yaar kya bolu?
tumme hasrat mohani ki rooh aa gayi hogi...tumne nahi likha hai ye...aamad hai upar se

is ghazal par wapas aaunga.
tafseel se.

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Uffo sher khan ne dubaare aane ki dhamki di hai...khuda khair kare........




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7th June 2014, 11:02 AM

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar
kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi
muskaate rahe.Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar
kyuN Shaad ho?
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muskaate rahe.



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7th June 2014, 11:04 AM

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar
kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi
muskaate rahe.
Shoib bhai ....kya baat hai.bhai maza aa gaya..aapki shayri mein ek alag luft aata hai...,.likhte rahein aur mehfil kee raunak badate rahein..
Aur haan..reps. bhi dunga...(aap to kabhi dete nahin... )



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yaar kya bolu?
tumme hasrat mohani ki rooh aa gayi hogi...tumne nahi likha hai ye...aamad hai upar se

is ghazal par wapas aaunga.
tafseel se.

Zidd saahab aadaab.... main bataa nahi saktaa mujhe kitnii khushii ho rahii hai aapko apne kalaam pe maujood paakar....

aur yakeen maaniye aapka comment is darjaa mutassir kar rahaa hai ke jee chaah rahaa hai aapko gale lagaa loon aur is comment ko frame karke deewaar pe taang loon.... best compliment i got till now... really it means alot for me..

sach kahun to mujhe khud yakeen nahi aa rahaa hai ke kis kafiyat me ye kalaam ho gayaa... aur aapka comment milaa to yoon lagaa kisii ne neend se jagaa diyaa..... bahot shukriyaa mere bhai...

aapke dobaara aane ke intzaar mein hoon, mohlat mile to thoda sa waqt dijiyegaa nacheez ko....

mukhlis...


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Bohat khoob Shaad sahab

Behad purasar ghazal likhi hai aapne

Umdaa soch , ghazab ke jazbaat !

Aapka andaaz e sukhan dilkash hai aur andaaz e bayaaN nirala ...

Har sher par meri dili daad Qabool farmaiye

Yuhi likhte rahiye

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7th June 2014, 09:24 PM

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe

Kya kar ke maanoge bhai. Main zara qadd ka chhota aadmi huN ghazal ki taareef karne ke liye warna to pata nahi kya kah deta. Khayaalo ki parwaaz bahut oonchi hai sahab. Mujhe shaagirdi me le lo yaar


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7th June 2014, 09:30 PM

WWWWWWWAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!! LAAJAWAAB BAAKAMAAL BEMISAAAL !!!!

kis kis sher ki ki taareef karoon aur kis kis baat ki daad doon !!! bas ghazab dha gaye Shaad mere yaar !!!

koyee sher ek kahani hai, koyee daastaan, koyee fasaana !! is ghazal ke zer o bam aur pech o kham itne dilkash hain ki un meiN kho jaane se kya lutf haasil hota hai kya bayaan karoon !!!

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7th June 2014, 09:36 PM

Shaad Bhaaii

namaste

bhaaii kyaa kahuun Ghazal ke baare me laa-jawaab andaaz. . . mazaa aa gayaa Ghazal paDh kar. . dil se daad aur duaaen. . yuunhi likhte rahiye aage bhee

duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Uffo sher khan ne dubaare aane ki dhamki di hai...khuda khair kare........
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Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar
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kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi
muskaate rahe.Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar
kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi
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मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

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मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
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yaaron doston ki khidmat me ek baar phir pesh hoon, ek adnaa si koshish ke saath... ummeed hai nosh farmaaiyega....



dil ki choTon ke liye ham khud ko samjhaate rahe,
aur wo zaalim ke us par bhii sitam Dhaate rahe.

main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe.

ham ne dil apnaa nikaalaa thaa bharii mahfil ,magar,
sab ne sach maanaa use, jo aap farmaate rahe.

wo andheroN kii duhaai de ke naa aaye kabhii,
aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

khaak tere koo ki ab bhii hogiii pahle kii tarah,
ik wajah ye bhii hai, tere shahr jo jaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe.



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दिल कि चोटों के लिये हम खुद को समझाते रहे,
और वो ज़ालिम के उस पर भी सितम ढाते रहे.

मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

खाक तेरे कू कि अब भी होगी पहले की तरह,
इक वजह ये भी है, तेरे शहर जो जाते रहे.

एक दिन वो पूछ बैठे इस क़दर क्यूं शाद हो?
क्या बताते दर्द में अपने ही मुस्काते रहे.



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Bohat khoob Shaad sahab

Behad purasar ghazal likhi hai aapne

Umdaa soch , ghazab ke jazbaat !

Aapka andaaz e sukhan dilkash hai aur andaaz e bayaaN nirala ...

Har sher par meri dili daad Qabool farmaiye

Yuhi likhte rahiye

khush rahiye
aapkii inaayatoon aur mehrbaani ka behad shukrguzaar hoon zainy saahibaa...

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Kya kar ke maanoge bhai. Main zara qadd ka chhota aadmi huN ghazal ki taareef karne ke liye warna to pata nahi kya kah deta. Khayaalo ki parwaaz bahut oonchi hai sahab. Mujhe shaagirdi me le lo yaar
anjaan saahab aadaab..... yakeen maaniye aapki baaten mujhe sharmindha kar rahii hain..... main to khud ek bahot chotaa aadmii hoon aur usse bhii chotaa shaayar ... yakeen maniye maine khud ko aajtak shaayar kabhii maanaa hi nahii....

aap doston ki bahot muhabbaat aur meehrbani hai jo aap mera hauslaa badhaate hain.... aur jo thoda bahot sahi ghalat toota foota likh paaata hoon aaap sab use saraahte hain yahi mere liye badee baat hai....

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WWWWWWWAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!! LAAJAWAAB BAAKAMAAL BEMISAAAL !!!!

kis kis sher ki ki taareef karoon aur kis kis baat ki daad doon !!! bas ghazab dha gaye Shaad mere yaar !!!

koyee sher ek kahani hai, koyee daastaan, koyee fasaana !! is ghazal ke zer o bam aur pech o kham itne dilkash hain ki un meiN kho jaane se kya lutf haasil hota hai kya bayaan karoon !!!

tah e dil se dheron daad aur us se bhi zyada duaein !!

Zarraa mere bhai aapki aamad ke binaa ye bazm sooni sii lagtii hai , aap aaye aur muhabbaton se nawaaz diyaa jiske main shaayad laayaq bhi na thaaa.... khair aapko ye alfaaz pasand aaye meri khushnaseebi hai, aur usse bhi zyaada khushi ke aapko jazbaat mutasssir kar sake... aate rahen bhai apna khayaal rakkhen

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Shaad Bhaaii

namaste

bhaaii kyaa kahuun Ghazal ke baare me laa-jawaab andaaz. . . mazaa aa gayaa Ghazal paDh kar. . dil se daad aur duaaen. . yuunhi likhte rahiye aage bhee

duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Dhaval bhai... khushi hui jaankar ke aapko ye adnaa sa kalaam pasand aaya.. aate rahen aur duaaon se nawaazte rahen... shukriyaa

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फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

Bahut behatreen shaad sahib.......purasAr ghazal sar se paa talak........likhte rahiye ....khush rahiye


aapki inaayaton se mashkoor hoon ufaq saahab... bazm me tashreef laakar aapne mujh haqeer pe ehsaan kiyaa hai.. aage bhi aapki aamad ka talabgaar rahungaa....

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aur bhee hai SDC pe sukhanwar bahot achchhe...
kehte haiN ki Shaad ka andaaz-e-bayaan kuch aur....

waah hi waah nikaltee hai, Sameerbhai...... Kya khubsurat ghazal pesh kee hai aapne..... alfaaz hi nahi..........
aur maktaa toh..... uffffffff..... kya kaheN?
Aadeil bhai behad mamnooon hoon aapkaa is darja muhabbat aur khuloos ke liye..


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[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';459142]yaaron doston ki khidmat me ek baar phir pesh hoon, ek adnaa si koshish ke saath... ummeed hai nosh farmaaiyega....



dil ki choTon ke liye ham khud ko samjhaate rahe,
aur wo zaalim ke us par bhii sitam Dhaate rahe.

main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe.

ham ne dil apnaa nikaalaa thaa bharii mahfil ,magar,
sab ne sach maanaa use, jo aap farmaate rahe.

wo andheroN kii duhaai de ke naa aaye kabhii,
aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

khaak tere koo ki ab bhii hogiii pahle kii tarah,
ik wajah ye bhii hai, tere shahr jo jaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe.



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और वो ज़ालिम के उस पर भी सितम ढाते रहे.

मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

खाक तेरे कू कि अब भी होगी पहले की तरह,
इक वजह ये भी है, तेरे शहर जो जाते रहे.

एक दिन वो पूछ बैठे इस क़दर क्यूं शाद हो?
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Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad
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waahhhhhh !!! laajawab shaad shaheb.. bahut shayro ko padha or aapko padha.. aapka andaaz din b din unchaiya choota jaa raha hai.. is peshkash ke liye aapko mubarakbaad..
   
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bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe."

mashallllaaaah...bahut umdaa... kaha aapne


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MASHAALLAH bahot khoob....har ek sher par bas wah! wah! nikli hai...khoobsurat alfaz aur andaz-e-bayan har jagah bas kamaal kar diya aapne...dilse daad qubool kijiye shaad saahab
aapki zarranawaazi hai huzoor......

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yaaron doston ki khidmat me ek baar phir pesh hoon, ek adnaa si koshish ke saath... ummeed hai nosh farmaaiyega....



dil ki choTon ke liye ham khud ko samjhaate rahe,
aur wo zaalim ke us par bhii sitam Dhaate rahe.

main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe.

ham ne dil apnaa nikaalaa thaa bharii mahfil ,magar,
sab ne sach maanaa use, jo aap farmaate rahe.

wo andheroN kii duhaai de ke naa aaye kabhii,
aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

khaak tere koo ki ab bhii hogiii pahle kii tarah,
ik wajah ye bhii hai, tere shahr jo jaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe.



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मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

खाक तेरे कू कि अब भी होगी पहले की तरह,
इक वजह ये भी है, तेरे शहर जो जाते रहे.

एक दिन वो पूछ बैठे इस क़दर क्यूं शाद हो?
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thank you soooooo much praneetaa saahiba..... aapko sher pasand aaa gayaa merii khushnaseebii hai.... yunhi aati rahiyega...

apna khyaaal rakhiye, aur hamaare bhanje ka bhii.....

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Shaad sahab ishaseen ghazal ke liyn behisaab daad qubool farmaaiye har sher mashaAllah se kya khiyeagr aap mujhse khein ke mein aapki khi besht ghzals ko sortout to us khzaane mai shyad meri nigaah sabse pehle aapke is kalaam pr jaayegi khoob kha hai aur bhut khoob kha hai tamaam sher dil ko choo gye



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aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad
ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe..

waahhhhhh !!! laajawab shaad shaheb.. bahut shayro ko padha or aapko padha.. aapka andaaz din b din unchaiya choota jaa raha hai.. is peshkash ke liye aapko mubarakbaad..
bahot bahot shukriyaa janaab.... aapki nazre inaayat hai mujh par...

aate rahen.. khush rahen...

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Shaad sahab ishaseen ghazal ke liyn behisaab daad qubool farmaaiye har sher mashaAllah se kya khiyeagr aap mujhse khein ke mein aapki khi besht ghzals ko sortout to us khzaane mai shyad meri nigaah sabse pehle aapke is kalaam pr jaayegi khoob kha hai aur bhut khoob kha hai tamaam sher dil ko choo gye



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Aslam saahab aadaab... aapne jis tarah muhabaat aur khuloos mujh khaaksaar par lutaaya hai uske liye main aapka behad ehsaanmand hoon....
aapki nazre inaayat aur zarra nawaazi huii hai mujh haqeer par.. iltijaa hai ke yooonhi apnii duaaon se hame nawaazte rahenge aap....

shukriyaa

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main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

Bohat khoob Shaad sahab!


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yaaron doston ki khidmat me ek baar phir pesh hoon, ek adnaa si koshish ke saath... ummeed hai nosh farmaaiyega....



dil ki choTon ke liye ham khud ko samjhaate rahe,
aur wo zaalim ke us par bhii sitam Dhaate rahe.

main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe.

ham ne dil apnaa nikaalaa thaa bharii mahfil ,magar,
sab ne sach maanaa use, jo aap farmaate rahe.

wo andheroN kii duhaai de ke naa aaye kabhii,
aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

khaak tere koo ki ab bhii hogiii pahle kii tarah,
ik wajah ye bhii hai, tere shahr jo jaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe.



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दिल कि चोटों के लिये हम खुद को समझाते रहे,
और वो ज़ालिम के उस पर भी सितम ढाते रहे.

मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

खाक तेरे कू कि अब भी होगी पहले की तरह,
इक वजह ये भी है, तेरे शहर जो जाते रहे.

एक दिन वो पूछ बैठे इस क़दर क्यूं शाद हो?
क्या बताते दर्द में अपने ही मुस्काते रहे.



Shaad....
Waah shaad ji har ek sher pe bas waah waah hi nikali
Jitni baar b padi aapki ye gazal....bahut hi khoob likha hai.
...yoon hi hame padne ka mauka dete rahein.



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yaaron doston ki khidmat me ek baar phir pesh hoon, ek adnaa si koshish ke saath... ummeed hai nosh farmaaiyega....



dil ki choTon ke liye ham khud ko samjhaate rahe,
aur wo zaalim ke us par bhii sitam Dhaate rahe.

main naheeN kahtaa , kahaa hai SaahiboN ne pahle hii,
faasale baDh jaaaeNge, nazdeek jo jaate rahe.

jhuuT sach kaa faislaa karte bhalaa kya khaak ham,
bas wahii dekhaa kiye jo aap dikhlaate rahe.

ham ne dil apnaa nikaalaa thaa bharii mahfil ,magar,
sab ne sach maanaa use, jo aap farmaate rahe.

wo andheroN kii duhaai de ke naa aaye kabhii,
aur ham naadaaN ke is dil ko hii sulgaate rahe.

khaak tere koo ki ab bhii hogiii pahle kii tarah,
ik wajah ye bhii hai, tere shahr jo jaate rahe.

Ek din wo pooch baiThe , is kadar kyuN Shaad ho?
kyaa bataate dard me.n apne hi muskaate rahe.



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दिल कि चोटों के लिये हम खुद को समझाते रहे,
और वो ज़ालिम के उस पर भी सितम ढाते रहे.

मैं नहीं कहता , कहा है साहिबों ने पहले ही,
फ़ासले बढ़ जाएंगे, नज़दीक जो जाते रहे.

झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम,
बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.

हम ने दिल अपना निकाला था भरी महफ़िल ,मगर,
सब ने सच माना उसे, जो आप फ़रमाते रहे.

वो अंधेरों की दुहाई दे के ना आये कभी,
और हम नादां के इस दिल को ही सुलगाते रहे.

खाक तेरे कू कि अब भी होगी पहले की तरह,
इक वजह ये भी है, तेरे शहर जो जाते रहे.

एक दिन वो पूछ बैठे इस क़दर क्यूं शाद हो?
क्या बताते दर्द में अपने ही मुस्काते रहे.



Shaad....
Shaad bhai.........behad khoobsurat gazal.... har aik sher tareef ke kabil hai...!

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झूट सच का फ़ैसला करते भला क्या ख़ाक हम, | बस वही देखा किये जो आप दिखलाते रहे.


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