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**abb aur nahi** - 26th January 2007, 01:05 PM

Teri mahfil ma jana ki himat abb nahi
kisi aur sa dill lagana ki himat abb nahi
kahdo khayalo sa apna ana ki koi jarurat nahi
garo ka liya khud ko satana ki himat abb nahi.........


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"ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye"



..........KASH WO HUM SA NA MILA HOTA..........

~saloni~





   
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26th January 2007, 02:49 PM

saloni ji namskaar

Teri meHfil meiN jaane ki himat ab nahiN wah bahot hi khub kaha hai, saloni ji aap kosisH kijiye aap isse bhi achha likh sakti hai

aapko paRh ke achha laga

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

aapka dost
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shukriya dhaval ji ki aap na meri shayri padhi......aap jasa acha shayar ko yaha dakh ka bada acha laga........bass agar apka asa hi sath raha to yakinan ma aur acha likhugi......eak bar aur shukriya
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"ajnabi nahi thi pahla ya duniya........
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye"

...............kash wo hamsa na mila hota...................

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27th January 2007, 05:30 PM

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Teri mahfil ma jana ki himat abb nahi
kisi aur sa dill lagana ki himat abb nahi
kahdo khayalo sa apna ana ki koi jarurat nahi
garo ka liya khud ko satana ki himat abb nahi.........


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"ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye"



..........KASH WO HUM SA NA MILA HOTA..........

~saloni~





hi sloni ji kese ho? aapko padha achha laga aap is ke kai behtar likh sakte ho ha aap ki rachanaye padh kar lagta hai ki aap ko gussa bahut aata hai but use express nahi kar pate ho starting gusse se karte ho magar ending bahut udasi se.

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28th January 2007, 03:01 PM

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Teri mahfil ma jana ki himat abb nahi
kisi aur sa dill lagana ki himat abb nahi
kahdo khayalo sa apna ana ki koi jarurat nahi
garo ka liya khud ko satana ki himat abb nahi.........


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"ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye"



..........KASH WO HUM SA NA MILA HOTA..........

~saloni~





hi saloni ji

aaj shayad maine pahli dafa pada hai aapko
accha laga

ese hi likhti rahiyega

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28th January 2007, 03:18 PM

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Teri mahfil ma jana ki himat abb nahi
kisi aur sa dill lagana ki himat abb nahi
kahdo khayalo sa apna ana ki koi jarurat nahi
garo ka liya khud ko satana ki himat abb nahi.........


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"ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye"



..........KASH WO HUM SA NA MILA HOTA..........

~saloni~






sahi kaha apne akhir kab tak koi kisi ke sitam uthayega. ek din to woh tang aayega hi.
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29th January 2007, 01:51 PM

hi saloni ji
aapko sayad mein pehli baar padh raha hu..

ji saloni ji dhaval ji ne sahi kaha hai ki aap isse bhi achchh likh sakti hai..

teri mehfil mein jaane ki himmat nahi
kisi aur se dil lagane ki himaat nahi
kehdo khayalo se ki aane ki koi zarurat nahi,
geroin ke liye khud ko satane ki zarurat nahi...

wah huzur wah..

Hamein bhi pyaar karne ka khayal aaya,
Jab bhi ye khayal aaya khud ko akela paya,
Dhundhte rahe is dunia mein humsafar,
Kisiko dhokebaz kisiko bewafa hi paya.


aapko padh ke achchha laga
ese hi sath nibhate rahiyega
aapka dost
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Teri mahfil ma jana ki himat abb nahi
kisi aur sa dill lagana ki himat abb nahi
kahdo khayalo sa apna ana ki koi jarurat nahi
garo ka liya khud ko satana ki himat abb nahi.........


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"ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye"



..........KASH WO HUM SA NA MILA HOTA..........

~saloni~







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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.


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29th January 2007, 08:26 PM

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Teri mahfil ma jana ki himat abb nahi
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kahdo khayalo sa apna ana ki koi jarurat nahi
garo ka liya khud ko satana ki himat abb nahi.........


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"ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya
tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye"



..........KASH WO HUM SA NA MILA HOTA..........

~saloni~





Saloni ji...

Bahut khoob kaha aapne..

Daad kubool keejiye...

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26th February 2007, 08:33 PM

shukriya medha ji, aap na huma padha aur apki bat sach haine huma gussa bahut ata haine..........kya kara?..........asa hi padhta rahiya huma ........


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dilip ji aap na huma padha iska liya sukriya asa hi hamara sath data rahiyaga


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sakhi jii sukriya aap yaha ayin aur huma padha ..........buss uhine huma padhta rahiyaga.............aapki dost.....saloni


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merul jii bahut bahut sukriya .........huma padhna ka aur sarahna ka..................asa hi sath data rahiyaga.........


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priya ji aap ko yaha dakh kar bahut khushi huin .........aapki sari shayri huma bahut achi lagti haine aur maine dil sa aapki fan hu...........sukriya huma padhna ka liya ............asa hi sath data rahiyaga...........aapki dost saloni


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