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31st December 2012, 06:07 PM
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab....!
Dosto….! Aik Adnaa Si Kaawish Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai.
Be-Laag Raaye De Kar Shukria Ka Mauqa Den,
BHULA DENA HEE BEHTAR HAI
Agar Ho Dard Ka Baais, Bhula Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Dilon Se Naqsh Maazi Ka Mita Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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31st December 2012, 07:08 PM
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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab....!
Dosto….! Aik Adnaa Si Kaawish Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai.
Be-Laag Raaye De Kar Shukria Ka Mauqa Den,
BHULA DENA HEE BEHTAR HAI
Agar Ho Dard Ka Baais, Bhula Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Dilon Se Naqsh Maazi Ka Mita Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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SUB'HAN ALLAH SUB'HANALLAH SUB'HANALLAH!
Adaab Ahmad bhaee! Waaah!!!!!! kya baat haye... dilfarayb ghazal! Har Shayr Zabardast! MashaAllah! Mandarja zeel ashaar nay dil ko pursuroor kerdia... dhayron daad qabool karayn!...
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
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31st December 2012, 07:17 PM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab....!
Dosto….! Aik Adnaa Si Kaawish Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai.
Be-Laag Raaye De Kar Shukria Ka Mauqa Den,
BHULA DENA HEE BEHTAR HAI
Agar Ho Dard Ka Baais, Bhula Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Dilon Se Naqsh Maazi Ka Mita Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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Masha Allah bohat hi behetreen ghazal hai Ahmed sahab......sabhi ashaar lajawaab haiN...........aanay waalay naye saal ke liye jaisay hum sab ke liye ek nasihat ho.....
Khush rahiye....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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31st December 2012, 07:25 PM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab....!
Dosto….! Aik Adnaa Si Kaawish Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai.
Be-Laag Raaye De Kar Shukria Ka Mauqa Den,
BHULA DENA HEE BEHTAR HAI
Agar Ho Dard Ka Baais, Bhula Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Dilon Se Naqsh Maazi Ka Mita Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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Acchii koshiish hai Shakeel saahab... bahot ummdah bayaani aur andaazee-bayaan...
Bas ek baat kehnaa chahunga ke jo aapne maqtaa kaha hai... usme na jaane kyon wo baat nazar nahii aai.. aisaa lagtaa hai oolaa aur saani ek dusre ka haq baqaayda nibhaa nahi paa rahe hain...
Roshni daalenge to behtar hogaa.... baaki to kalaam aalaa hai, bahot aala..
Duaago
Shaad...
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1st January 2013, 10:02 AM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab....!
Dosto….! Aik Adnaa Si Kaawish Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai.
Be-Laag Raaye De Kar Shukria Ka Mauqa Den,
BHULA DENA HEE BEHTAR HAI
Agar Ho Dard Ka Baais, Bhula Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Dilon Se Naqsh Maazi Ka Mita Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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bahot khoooooooooooob ...................
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4th January 2013, 12:44 AM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab....!
Dosto….! Aik Adnaa Si Kaawish Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai.
Be-Laag Raaye De Kar Shukria Ka Mauqa Den,
BHULA DENA HEE BEHTAR HAI
Agar Ho Dard Ka Baais, Bhula Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Dilon Se Naqsh Maazi Ka Mita Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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bahot hi behtreen ghazal
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7th January 2013, 04:41 PM
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SUB'HAN ALLAH SUB'HANALLAH SUB'HANALLAH!
Adaab Ahmad bhaee! Waaah!!!!!! kya baat haye... dilfarayb ghazal! Har Shayr Zabardast! MashaAllah! Mandarja zeel ashaar nay dil ko pursuroor kerdia... dhayron daad qabool karayn!...
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
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Ahmad Sahab....! Hamesha Ki Tarah Aap Ne Bahot Daryaa Dili Ke Sath Is Adnaa Kalaam Ko Daad Se Nawaaza HAi.... Aap Ki Is Inaayat PAr Tah-e-Dil Se MAshkoor Hun....
Sada Khush Rahiye Aur Yunhi Sath Banaaaye Rakhiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
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7th January 2013, 04:44 PM
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Masha Allah bohat hi behetreen ghazal hai Ahmed sahab......sabhi ashaar lajawaab haiN...........aanay waalay naye saal ke liye jaisay hum sab ke liye ek nasihat ho.....
Khush rahiye....
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Zainy Ji............!
Tah-e-Dil Se MAhskoor-o-Mamnoon HUn JO Aap Ne Is Bazm Me Haazri Di Aur Hausla-Afzaayi Farmaayi...
Jiiiii.... Agar Samjha Jaaye To Is Ghazal Me Naye Saal Ke Hawaalay Se Ya Zindagi Ke Hawaalay Se Bahot Se Haqaayiq Bayaan Kiye Hain Main Ne....
Shayad Kisi Ke Kaam Aa Saken..........
Sada Khush Rahiye Aur Yunhi Sath Banaaye Rakhiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
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7th January 2013, 05:01 PM
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Acchii koshiish hai Shakeel saahab... bahot ummdah bayaani aur andaazee-bayaan...
Bas ek baat kehnaa chahunga ke jo aapne maqtaa kaha hai... usme na jaane kyon wo baat nazar nahii aai.. aisaa lagtaa hai oolaa aur saani ek dusre ka haq baqaayda nibhaa nahi paa rahe hain...
Roshni daalenge to behtar hogaa.... baaki to kalaam aalaa hai, bahot aala..
Duaago
Shaad...
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Sameer Shaad Sahab….!
Aap Bazm Me Aaye, Ye Aap Ki Inaayat Hai,……Aap Ne Kalaam Pasand Kia, Ye Aap Ki Zarrah-Nawaazi Hai….Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun …….
Aap Ne Maqta Ke Baray Me Jo Kaha Ke Oola Aur Saani Aik Dusray Ka Haq Baqaayida Nibha Nahi Paa Rahay, To Mere Khayal Me Ye Faqat Aap Ke Dekhnay Ki Baat Hai…… Baaqi Aap Ne Kuch Wazahat Karnay Ka Kaha Hai TO Zarurr Koshish Karta Hun Kuch Waazeh Karnay Ki…
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shaamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Sher Waazeh Hai, Ke Agar Mera Dost Aaj Dushmaon Ke Sath Mil Ke Mere Muqaabil Aa Gaya Hai, To Ye Us Ka Zarf Hai,…Aur Mera Zarf Ye Kehta Hai Ke Main Us Par Waar Na Karun Kiunke Wo Kal Tak Mera Yaar Hee Tha,Is Liye Dua Dun Ke Wo Dushmani Chorr Kar Daubara Dosti Ke Liye Hath Barha De….
Ummid Hai Kuch Wazeh Ho Gaya Ho Ga…..
Agar Ab Bhi Kaheen Kuch Wazeh Na Hua Ho To Aap Bila-Jhijak Daubara Puch Saktay Hain….
Sada Khush Rahiye Aur Yunhi Sath Banaaye Rakhiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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7th January 2013, 05:01 PM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab....!
Dosto….! Aik Adnaa Si Kaawish Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai.
Be-Laag Raaye De Kar Shukria Ka Mauqa Den,
BHULA DENA HEE BEHTAR HAI
Agar Ho Dard Ka Baais, Bhula Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Dilon Se Naqsh Maazi Ka Mita Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Abhi Hadd-e-Nazar Me Hai Wo Tum Se Roothnay Wala
Anaa Ka Khol Ab Torro, Sadaa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Saf-e-Dushman Me Hai Shamil Jo Mera Yaar Bhi AHMAD
Karun Main Waar Kiun Us Par, Dua Dena Hee Behtar Hai
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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taslee'maat Ahmad bhai,
mashah allah ek mayaari Ghazal raqm ki hai aapne, tam'aam ashaar behadd pasaNd aaye, khaaksaar ka shukriya aur mubarakbaad qabuul farmaiiye
ummiid hai aap yuuN hi bazm ki raunaq baDhaate raheNgey
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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7th January 2013, 05:36 PM
Ahmad bhaaii:
namaste!
bahot hi umdaah Ghazal paDhne ko mili... sabhee aSh'aar Khoob raheN... yeh Sher dil ko Chhu gayaa
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dil se daad aur duaaeN
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
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7th January 2013, 11:40 PM
Kaise haiN Ahmad saaheb...
Hum to aapke pehle se hi talabgaar haiN ...
Mashaallah aapka andaaz e sukhan kabil e tareef hai..mujhe har sher babahar behtareen aur rabt kaayam karta nazar aaya ..
Daad qubool farmaaeiN ..aur
Apna khyaal rakheiN
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9th January 2013, 01:35 PM
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bahot khoooooooooooob ...................
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Neetu bala Ji....!
Aap Ki Hausla-Afzaayi Par Tah-e-Dil Se MAshkoor Hun
Khush Rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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9th January 2013, 01:56 PM
bahut khubbbbb...............
ye line bahut hi pasand aai.............
umadaaa...............
Kaha Kis Ne Muhabbat Me Milan Ki Shart Hoti Hai.?
Agar Ho Ishq Me Sharten, Ganwa Dena Hee Behtar Hai
Tum Aakhir Kab Talak Dil Se Laga Kar Dard Rakho Gay.?
Meri Maano To Aankhon Se Baha Dena Hee Behtar Hai
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9th January 2013, 01:58 PM
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taslee'maat Ahmad bhai,
mashah allah ek mayaari Ghazal raqm ki hai aapne, tam'aam ashaar behadd pasaNd aaye, khaaksaar ka shukriya aur mubarakbaad qabuul farmaiiye
ummiid hai aap yuuN hi bazm ki raunaq baDhaate raheNgey
rab raakha
maikash
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Janab Maikash Sahab....!
Aap Ko Apni Bazm Me Dekh Kar Khushi Hui.....Aap Ki Daad Par Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun....
Sada Khush Rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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9th January 2013, 03:08 PM
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Ahmad bhaaii:
namaste!
bahot hi umdaah Ghazal paDhne ko mili... sabhee aSh'aar Khoob raheN... yeh Sher dil ko Chhu gayaa
dil se daad aur duaaeN
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Dhaval Ji.....!
Aap Ki Bazm Me aamad Aur Hausla-Afzaayi Par Tah-e-Dil Se Mashkor HUn...
Sada Khush Rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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9th January 2013, 03:14 PM
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Kaise haiN Ahmad saaheb...
Hum to aapke pehle se hi talabgaar haiN ...
Mashaallah aapka andaaz e sukhan kabil e tareef hai..mujhe har sher babahar behtareen aur rabt kaayam karta nazar aaya ..
Daad qubool farmaaeiN ..aur
Apna khyaal rakheiN
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KShitiz JI...........!
ALLAH PAAK Ke Karam Se MAin THeak Hun....
Aap Is KHaksaar Ki Bazm Me Aaye Aur Adnaa Kalaam Ko Pasand Kia, Is Ke Liye Aap Ka Mashkoor Hun...
Sada Khush Rahiye
Yunhi Sath Banaaye Rakhiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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