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Mujhko bhi kia acha laga - 12th July 2014, 01:05 PM

Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…..!
Dosto Aik Tarhee Ghazal Pesh Hai, Apni Aaraa Se Zaruuuur Nawaaaziye Ga….

"ZAIR-E-LAB WO MUSKURAATA SHUKRIA ACHA LAGA"

Pattharon Ke Dais Me Mujhko Bhi Kia Acha Laga
Aik Naazuk Sa Khilona Kaanch Ka Acha Laga

Kia Kahun Main Ay Dil-e-Nadaan Tere Bakht Ko
Saari Dunia Me Tujhay Wo Be-Wafaa Acha Laga

Apne Dil Ka Dard Saara Main Ne Us Se Keh Dia
Muddaton Ke Baad Mujhko Aayina Acha Laga

Uski Aankhon Me Thi Janay Aaj Kia Waaraftagi
Dil Ko Uska Dair Tak Wo Dekhna Acha Laga

De Gaya Mujhko Qareena Zindagi Ka Dosto
Aandhiyon Ke DarmiyaaN Hansta Dia Acha Laga

Gham-zada Logon Me Ahmad Muskurahat Baantna
Zinda Rehnay Ke Liye Ye Mashghala Acha Laga

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL




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Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi

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12th July 2014, 01:50 PM

Masha Allah bohat khoob Ahmed sahab. .

Wallah kya khubsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne..

Dil khush ho gaya padhker. ..

Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain

Khaasker ke yeh sher to bas qayamat hai


Kia Kahun Main Ay Dil-e-Nadaan Tere Bakht Ko
Saari Dunia Me Tujhay Wo Be-Wafaa Acha Laga


Wah!

Yuhi likhte rahiye aur mehfil ko roushan karte rahiye

Khush rahiye




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12th July 2014, 03:23 PM

wahhhh.. Both khoob Ahmed bhai...

Aise hi mehfil sajaatay rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,


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12th July 2014, 05:01 PM

Wwwaaahhh !!! Behtareen ghazal se nawaaza hai bazm ko Ahmad sahab !! Har sher meiN heere ki chamak aur os ki namee hai !! Dil ko sukoon sa ataa hua ise padh ke !! Bahaut si daad aur dheron mubaarakbaad aap ko !!!


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13th July 2014, 08:43 PM

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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…..!
Dosto Aik Tarhee Ghazal Pesh Hai, Apni Aaraa Se Zaruuuur Nawaaaziye Ga….

"ZAIR-E-LAB WO MUSKURAATA SHUKRIA ACHA LAGA"

Pattharon Ke Dais Me Mujhko Bhi Kia Acha Laga
Aik Naazuk Sa Khilona Kaanch Ka Acha Laga

Kia Kahun Main Ay Dil-e-Nadaan Tere Bakht Ko
Saari Dunia Me Tujhay Wo Be-Wafaa Acha Laga

Apne Dil Ka Dard Saara Main Ne Us Se Keh Dia
Muddaton Ke Baad Mujhko Aayina Acha Laga

Uski Aankhon Me Thi Janay Aaj Kia Waaraftagi
Dil Ko Uska Dair Tak Wo Dekhna Acha Laga

De Gaya Mujhko Qareena Zindagi Ka Dosto
Aandhiyon Ke DarmiyaaN Hansta Dia Acha Laga

Gham-zada Logon Me Ahmad Muskurahat Baantna
Zinda Rehnay Ke Liye Ye Mashghala Acha Laga

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14th July 2014, 12:24 PM

Ahmad miya....
hame.n aapka yeh andaaz sahi me.n bahot achchha lagaaaaaaaa

behad khubsurat qalamkaarii, janaab

bahot bahot achchha lagaaa



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15th July 2014, 11:13 AM

Zainy Ji Aapki Daaaaaad Sar AankhoN Par......
Be-had Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun aapki Hausla-Afzaayi PAr...
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Janab Hassan Sahab......!

Aapki HAusla-Afzaayi Par mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun.....
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15th July 2014, 02:50 PM

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waahhh bhai kyaa kahne.... kamaal ki ghazal pesh ki hai aapne, magar jo taseer jo mazaa is ek misre me hai uski khumaari hi beqaraar karne ko kaafi hai.... bahot mubaarakbaad...

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15th July 2014, 02:58 PM

Janab Zarrah Sahab..........!
Aapki Is Purkhuloos Daaaaaaaad Se Khushi Hui.....
Tah-e-Dil Se MAshkoor Hun Is Inaayat Par...
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Janaab Ahmad Shakil sahab ek shaandaar ghazal nazar nawaaz hui mashaAllah behad khoobsurat aashaaroN par murassa,is ghazal ke liyN aapki khidmat daad behad o behisaab hazir hai qubool farmaaiye


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16th July 2014, 11:07 AM

Janab Ufaq Sahab....!
Aapki Hausla-Afzaayi Ka Be-had Shukria...
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16th July 2014, 11:08 AM

NAZNEEN Ji...............

Aapki DAAAAAAAAD Ka Bahot Bahot Shukria....
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…..!
Dosto Aik Tarhee Ghazal Pesh Hai, Apni Aaraa Se Zaruuuur Nawaaaziye Ga….

"ZAIR-E-LAB WO MUSKURAATA SHUKRIA ACHA LAGA"

Pattharon Ke Dais Me Mujhko Bhi Kia Acha Laga
Aik Naazuk Sa Khilona Kaanch Ka Acha Laga

Kia Kahun Main Ay Dil-e-Nadaan Tere Bakht Ko
Saari Dunia Me Tujhay Wo Be-Wafaa Acha Laga

Apne Dil Ka Dard Saara Main Ne Us Se Keh Dia
Muddaton Ke Baad Mujhko Aayina Acha Laga

Uski Aankhon Me Thi Janay Aaj Kia Waaraftagi
Dil Ko Uska Dair Tak Wo Dekhna Acha Laga

De Gaya Mujhko Qareena Zindagi Ka Dosto
Aandhiyon Ke DarmiyaaN Hansta Dia Acha Laga

Gham-zada Logon Me Ahmad Muskurahat Baantna
Zinda Rehnay Ke Liye Ye Mashghala Acha Laga

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL


Ahmad Shakil ji..........bahut khoobsurat ehsaas, sabhi sher kabil-e-treef hai, yeh aik sher mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha aur bahut positive lga.

De Gaya Mujhko Qareena Zindagi Ka Dosto
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17th May 2015, 03:56 PM

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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…..!
Dosto Aik Tarhee Ghazal Pesh Hai, Apni Aaraa Se Zaruuuur Nawaaaziye Ga….

"ZAIR-E-LAB WO MUSKURAATA SHUKRIA ACHA LAGA"

Pattharon Ke Dais Me Mujhko Bhi Kia Acha Laga
Aik Naazuk Sa Khilona Kaanch Ka Acha Laga

Kia Kahun Main Ay Dil-e-Nadaan Tere Bakht Ko
Saari Dunia Me Tujhay Wo Be-Wafaa Acha Laga

Apne Dil Ka Dard Saara Main Ne Us Se Keh Dia
Muddaton Ke Baad Mujhko Aayina Acha Laga

Uski Aankhon Me Thi Janay Aaj Kia Waaraftagi
Dil Ko Uska Dair Tak Wo Dekhna Acha Laga

De Gaya Mujhko Qareena Zindagi Ka Dosto
Aandhiyon Ke DarmiyaaN Hansta Dia Acha Laga

Gham-zada Logon Me Ahmad Muskurahat Baantna
Zinda Rehnay Ke Liye Ye Mashghala Acha Laga

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL

Ahmed Shakil saheb, adaab !

Jenab ko pehli dafeh paDh raha huuN, aur yeh soch raha huuN ke aapko pehle kyun nahi paDha maine.
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