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Originally Posted by tishna
sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha
salaam aaj tak waqt ki masrufiyat ki wajah se aap ke kalaam par nazar nahi daali
thi lekin ab hum aap ke har kalaam par gaur karenge kyunki
inmein bahot kuch hai jis se humein bhi seekhne ko milega
main aapko apni khaami batata hoon
main jab bhi kuch likhta hoon to bahot kam sochta hoon
bahot kam gaur karta hoon 5 se 7 min mein main apni gazal poori karta hoon
lekin aap ko pad kar lagta hai ki aap in sheron ko apna din apni raatein saunp chuke ho
aap ko pad kar ek baat to zaahir hoti aisa kahin mehsoos nahi hota hai ki aap ne koi bhi sher mechanically likha ho
ek ek lafz dil ki sada lagta hai
ho sake to mujhe maaf karna kyunki zara waqt ki kami ki wajah se main ne aap ke kalaam par gaur nahi kiya
lekin aaj se ek wada jab bhi hum SDC visit karenge to sab se pehle aap ke naksh ko dhoodenge
shukriya itne behtar kalamon ke liye
aaj se hum acche dost hue
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appki is innayat ne mera likhna aur bhi khushnuma bana diya ... yakeen maaniye appke is jawab ne mera dil jeet liya ... app jese her pedhne waala ho to shayad ... likhne waale kabhi rok hi na paaien khud ko ...
app ki tareef ne mujhe baagh baagh ker diya ...
mujhe meri auqaat se bhi zyada alfazo se nawaza hai aapne , behad shukriya appka
Mujeeb