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wo abhi Nadan hai - 3rd September 2003, 06:26 PM

mat Azzamao wo abhi Nadan hai
Pyar ki Baten karte hai
wo abhi Nadan hai
Jeene marne ki khate hai wo kasme
wo abhi Nadan hai
chand tare bicha denge kadmo mai
sabhi karte hai batein
wo abhi Nadan hai
kutch kaho na labzo se
ankhoo se karo zahir
meri batein lagti hai unhe
kahani ki tarah
wo abhi Nadan hai
is janam main na mile to
agle janam ka kare wo wada
wo abhi Nadan hai
Laila Majnu ki karte hai wo batein
wo abhi Nadan hai


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nadan - 3rd September 2003, 06:51 PM

Ha, woh abhi nadan hai,

Khub pehchana,
nadangi ek pyar ki nishani hai,
is janam me mile na mile,
karte hai vada agle janam milneka

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???????? - 3rd September 2003, 07:20 PM

mita,
koi nadaan nahi hai.... muje to nahi laga k nadani maie kasmae khai ho... haan yah baat alag hai k mukar jana hai to kah do k jo huaa nadani maie huaa..... baki sab juthh
tum bholi ban kar na kaho k ...
is janam main na mile to
agle janam ka kare wo wada
wo abhi Nadan hai

sab mukarne ki baat hai....... aaj milne ki himmat nahi pata nahi aglae janam maie pahchaane bhi ?
   
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hi - 3rd September 2003, 08:50 PM

mita ben aur meena ben....aa su chale che....mahare tau samjh nathii pade..LOL
Bura na mane thoda sa mazak hai meta ji hum meena jii ke sath tau aksar yu hii pesh ate hai woh dost joo hai humarii.... unhone hume haq diya hai mazak kaa aur woh jawab mai hass karr reply kartii hai tau bada sukun milta hai..bass ye chotii chotii khushiya jinndagii ko badha detii hai...apne khub likha hai....kabhi kabhi jab nadan se dosti ho jatii hai tau iss dard se wasta ho hii jata hai....kya kare...ek kahawat hai shayad ap ko pata hogii..nadan kii dosti jii ka jannjal

woh hii bat yaha parr bhi lagu hotii hai...chalta hu tarif ke sath apnna khayal rakhe...


Jindagi se to khair shikvaa tha,

muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..

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3rd September 2003, 08:54 PM

sanjj dost,
tumhari majaak yaha bhi sar aankho par.........
haahahahahah kya tum bhi........ gr8
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3rd September 2003, 10:49 PM

Jee aapne us dukhti rag pe hath rakh diya pyar ki.
Very Touching and real.


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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THANK U - 4th September 2003, 11:21 AM

Mina
koi mil gaya tha unke ahsas pe likha hai beleive it or not but its true.


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thanks - 4th September 2003, 11:43 AM

Banooji
thanks 4 the shayri. mina ne jo kaha aap se wosahi hai.aap kahte hai usi tarah masti mazak se life main khushi bhi cha sakti hai.i dont mind bye.


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thanks - 4th September 2003, 11:45 AM

Dard ji
thanks alot. aap ko real aur touchy lagi. kisi ko alag lage sabhi ke khayal alag hote hai.take care.


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4th September 2003, 12:46 PM

Hellooooooooooooooooooo meta i am not banooji..LOL .......galti se apne likh diyaaa...ha ha ha ha ha ha !!!!kyoii baat nahi yun hii sahi.....bura na manne hum kabhi kabhi mazk bhii karr lete hai..gar kisi bat ka bura lage tau maaf kare...and i mean it...bye n take care


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SORRY - 4th September 2003, 12:51 PM

Sorry Sanjoo ji
i was in hurry really sorry 4 that. bye.


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hi - 4th September 2003, 06:38 PM

hi mita aunty

hw u doin i hope u r ok

really like this poem its really nice and but people are not as naieve as they pretend to be well most of the time thats wot i have heard and experianced ne way i liked the way u write

keep it up
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4th September 2003, 09:16 PM

MiTa Ji ..

Aap HamesHa Hi aise LikHTi HaiN ..

KaHne ki zuRoRaT NaHi ..

BaHuT kHooB Likha Hai ..

TaReef kaBuL faRmaiye


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thanks - 5th September 2003, 12:49 PM

Romana
thanks a lot . u r right.peopole r different wat they says. but sometimes........ anyway take care.


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thanks - 5th September 2003, 12:51 PM

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khushi - 5th September 2003, 03:57 PM

wo abhi nadan hai,

Padhkar khoob acha laga,

kitana karib se jana hai apne kisko
kash nadan dunia hoti

aap ki nazam bar bar padhneko ji karta hai

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THANK U - 5th September 2003, 04:25 PM

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aap ka naam something different. well thanks a lot . i liked that u wrote bar bar padhne ko jee karta hai.


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