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Door Jo Tum Bethe Ho Mujh Se - 1st October 2003, 11:15 AM

ek anjane khauf se maan kapne lagta hai
Door jo tum bethe ho mujh se
man main hazaro sawal uthte hai
Door jo tum bethe ho mujh se
Tumhari tasveer se baten karti hu din bhar
Door jo......................................
Anchal main bharlu palko main basalu
Door jo........................................
Tumhara naam le kar sans meri chalti hai din bhar
Door jo........................................


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1st October 2003, 11:25 AM

oh mitaaaaaa,
apne aapko samhalo dost
duur bhale hi hai aaj woh tujse
kal ooski zindgi sunahri bhi to banegi
yahi to naam hai zindgi ka....
jo sabse aziz ho oose sabse duur paao.
par dost........
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1st October 2003, 12:11 PM

mita ji,

Na koi tumse dur hai,
avaz do who ayega daud ke,
paogi use tum apni bahon mein
tadap raha hoga who bhi bin tumhare
avaz do ayega who daud ke
   
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I AM TRYING 2 CONTROL. LETS HOPE.


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2nd October 2003, 12:22 AM

mita dost

bohat khoob khoob jazbaat ka izhaar kerti hain aap.
mein bhi meena ki tarah yehi kahoon gaa ke aap sanbhalein apne aap ko.
aap jis jazbe ki maalik hain yeh us ka taqaaza hai ke aap use jaane detein, isi mein us ki bhalayee aur us ka mustaqbil hai. aur us ke mustaqbil ki behtri aap chahti hain . hai na yehi baat.
bas to phir ab muskurayee aur gungunaayee.
aur ham sab yahan shayri forum ke dost hain na aap ke saath.
ok.
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2nd October 2003, 12:29 AM

aaj dard ko kaagaj par utar jaane do,

dil kii bhadaas aaj nikal jaane do.

kal fir uthega ek aur naya dard,

ese aaj hii bhikhar jaane do.

aamin.

paplu.


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thanks - 2nd October 2003, 02:25 PM

Mushi dost
bas aap sab ka sath raha aur hai i will try to come out.itne salo main niyat se kabhi door nahi gayi. shayri likh ke man halka hota hai. thanks alot aap jaise dost mera sath he to ye din zaroor kat jayenge. mina also gave yr message . take care.


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thanks - 2nd October 2003, 02:27 PM

Popat ji
ye dard jab kagaz se baten karta hai
dil ka bhukhar halka hota hai
thanks a lot . mina se aap ke bare main jankari milti hai.take care.


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hi - 2nd October 2003, 06:04 PM

hi mtraparekh@
how r u?
bohat dukh hota hay kisi k dor hone ka
khas jab apna samne ho kar door ho...
any way..bohat chi nazm likhi hay
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kya hua - 5th October 2003, 07:12 PM

hallo mita ji
apne dard ko juba di hai.
but dard ko kam karne ka ye acha jariya hai hai na.
takecare
sakhi
thanx apko mera name pasand hai.


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6th October 2003, 12:32 AM

namastee... mita ji ..

kasie hoo yar... aur kahiye..kya chal raha hai ... ...bahut khoob likha hai apne.. i mean ..its..awesome.. bahut khoob ji .... mein assha karta hun .. ke.. app aise hi agge.. likhte rahoge.. aur mehfill sajate rahoge...

bye and take care..


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6th October 2003, 03:20 AM

Wah, kitni khubsurti ke sath aapne yeh dilki kalam likhha hein.
Bohot hi khubsurat hein. Yeh Pyaar hi toh hein jo aise kehrahe hein. Aapko mein aur keya likhhu? Ha, dilse duwa ke siva aur keya hein mere paas aur duwa toh hamesha hi karti rahti hu. Dilse daad kabul fharmaiyega.
Sukriya. Der se reply dene ke liye mafhi chahti hu.
Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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THANK u - 6th October 2003, 09:02 PM

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this shayri i have wrote 4 my son he is studies in UK.sometimes i am feeling lonely without him. any ways thanks a lot.


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thanks - 6th October 2003, 09:09 PM

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aap ki dad kabul hai aap hamesha reply karti hai. thanks a lot.mina also telling that u always appriciate to others.bye


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