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Kuch Aisa - 27th August 2003, 03:42 PM

hi, kaise hai aap saab? maaf karna hum thodi dehr se khafa ho gaye the. aaj humne itna khaas nehi likha lekin een do lines mei humare dil ki baat bayan ki hai ho sakke aap saab ko pasand aaye aur aate samme mei hum aur likhenge


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ishika ji - 27th August 2003, 04:11 PM

adaab..


yeh kya likh diya aapne...sirf jo Jumlon mein jo Zamane ki baat lagti hai...aur aap khafa kyon ho gaye the bhai...abb to mood thik hai...chaliye phir....kagaz kalam uthaiye.....


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27th August 2003, 08:28 PM

welcome back Ishiqka ji...
kyoN khafa haiN aap.. aur kisse...?
agar hum dostoN se koi ghustakhi ho gayii ho to itni saza kya kafii nahi k aapne itne arse se darshan nahi diye is bazm meiN...

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behad kam lafzoN meiN bohat gehrii baat keh gayeeN aap...
aur kehti haiN k kuch khaas nahi likha...
kaisa likha hai ye padhne waaloN per chorh diya kariye...
do hi misroN meiN pur-dard baat keh di aapne...
aur likhti to jaane kya kya likha hota...

daad aur mubaaraqbaad qubool kijiye...

agle kalaam ka intezaar rahega...

likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...


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hi - 29th August 2003, 07:43 PM

Ishiqka....waah ek sher ne puri kahani kehadi...

toda dosto par bhii karam karoo jaldi jaldi mila karoo..hume tau kaha chod ke naa javoo aur khud kitane dino baad nazar aate hoo..?????
Ek sher hai shayad ap ko pasaand aayeN...

Kitnna nochu pathhaR ko
Dil tuta parr woh kabhi na bhikrr......


Jindagi se to khair shikvaa tha,

muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..

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29th August 2003, 08:21 PM

Ishiqka ji..

Aapko yahan doobara dekh kar dil ko bahut sakoon mila..

Aur bhi sakoon mila aapki likhi ye do lines padkar..jisme shayad ik poori zindagi ka khulaasa kiya ja sakta hai..

Jeete hai pal pal siva tumhare
Jaane kon ye dard siva humare

kitna sahi..kitna gehra likha hai aapne..

Bas khush rahiye


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chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
   
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