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Let me Free..... - 9th January 2006, 10:49 PM

Please let me free....

I plead to you all...let me free...
of all your expectations...

I wanna get lost in the crowd,
I dont wanna be what u want me to be
I wanna be myself, happy admiring those bright stars
I wanna make a new start
Please let me....

I dont wanna be there ne more, amongst those stars
I dont wanna get noticed, I wanna be myself,
whose deeds affect me and only me...

Each time I hurt you, falling short of your expectations,
It hurts me too, It shatters me too,
I dont belong to here,
Let me be rooted to my earth
Dont keep me on the skies of ur expectations,
Dont keep me in ur hearts.......
I dont have eunf left in me......

I wanna make a fresh new start...
This time I'll draw margins around my heart,
beyond which I wont let anyone enter,
Coz I too have a heart that hurts....
Tears fall from my eyes too...

Why should only I care?
Why do only I have to explain?
and each time it comes to me...
why evrything is but understood...!

You made me count the number of times I hurt you
What about the endless nights i havent sleapt?
What about the moments I felt all alone?
What about the moments my heart pained
what about the endless seconds.. my eyes kept waiting....
what about the moments i wanted to cry? wanted to shout?
but didnt...just becoz it may not hurt any of you......

Did you even once think that sumthing can hurt me too....?
Did you try to understand me?
I always valued ur tears...I tried never to let u cry...
but did u even realize, what cud make me cry?
I will shout today...I will cry...I will laugh like mad...
You wanna go away...go.. leave me alone...
You all do what u want...I never stopped you...!
and you never stopped either...
then why wud i stop anyone today....!

My heart is no longer ready to give u the authority
to rule over it...
You may be my love, my sister, my brother...
Try to be only a friend now....
Stop expecting from me.......!
I have learnt to expect now....

I wanna be me again...
I am tired of seeing myself frm ur eyes,
I am tired carrying this burden,
I wanna say what i want to...
I wanna express the way i want
I wanna breathe freely....
I wanna live once again....
I want to make a new start....!

This world of glory is not meant for me,
This brightness is blinding me,
Too much of noise is killing me...
I wanna go back to my silence.....

Let me get lost into the crowd,
Let me be amongst those many
Dont try to find a jewel in me
I am an ordinary stone, who is very happy with what he is....
Let me free...Let me make a new start....

Let me fly with my own wings
to that endless sky...........................


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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9th January 2006, 10:56 PM

heyy pulkit...
well...u hav written very well...butt...vat happ...any thin wrong or vatt...take good care of urself...
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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@};- :) Main Kuchh Galat To Nahin Keh Diya? - 9th January 2006, 10:59 PM

Yes, You Should Do How You Feel Like **I Love You As A Friend~Be Like Before You Used To Be~Happy You Were~I Loved It So Much~Baas Yehii Kehna Tha~Tumhein Parhkar Achchha Laga~Tumhein Woh Khushi Dubara Mil Jaaye Yehii Duwaaen Dil Se Rahegi...**Dil Ki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Dher Dher Saare Phoul_Shukriya**Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care **God bless You.


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9th January 2006, 11:34 PM

Mere chhote se bhaai pulkit..........

main chali toh gayi thi par sabko padha karti thi .........tumhaara ye dusra post hai jo iss tarah ka hai .........achanak aise aapko tutta dekh mujh se raha nahi gaya ........aap aaj kal baat toh karte nahi ho so mujhe aapke baare main pehle bhi kutch khaas pata na tha aaj bhi kutch khaas pata nahi hai .........fir bhi aap na jaane kyoun upset se lage ...............nahi pata mujhe kyoun mujh se raha nahi gaya .......aap mujhe avoid karo par main kisi ko avoid nahi kar paati ..........chaahe wo kooi bhi ho ........

mujhe pata hai do pal ka tufaan aaya hai jise shayad aap sambhaal loge ...........coz aap bahAAdur didi(chandsi) ke bhaai jo ho .....he he ..... hai ki nahi ........................?


bhagwaan kare aapke saare dukh mujhe mill jaaye ..aap humesha khush raho ....................aapke saare sapne pureEE hon ...

AAMEEN!!!.....



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10th January 2006, 09:38 AM

Mere Bhaiya...

jaanti hoon aise soch ko kaayam karna aise hi nahi ho jaata, jab dard bardhaasht ki seema rekha tod ke baahar aa jaaye dam ghutane lage to fir ek visfot hota hai... wo abhi mujhe dikh raha hai...

lekin ek baat bol rahi hoon aapne jo jo yeha likha wahi baat bol rahi hoon.. dusaro ke liye jeete jeete thak jaaye aur apna astitva khokhala ho jaaye isase behtar hai ki ham apane astitva ke liye jeeye, hamaare astitva se agar koi khada rehana chaahe to theek hai warna darwaaja khula hai wo jaa sakta hai..
jab ham dusare ke liye jeete hai to hum sirf rishte nibhaate hai, jabki Rishto ko jeena chahiye.. chaahe wo koi bhi ho, dost, bhai, maa-baap, koi bhi.. isase antar nahi padta kisake liye ye baat hai.. koi bhi rishta ho use jeena chahiye.. harpal jeena chahiye.. us waqt ek alag santoosti milati hai, apana ek wajood dikhata hai.. aur wahi sache aur khushhaal rishte ka janm hota hai.. agar kisi term condition bandh ke mera koi rishta hai to use toot jaana mai jyaada behtar maanti hoon.. ek baar himmat se pankh faila ke dekhiye saara jahaan aapka hai..
mujhe aapki ye baate bahoot achhi lagi.. isake pichhe ke dard ko bhool jaaiye aane wali sunahari kiran aapki hai..

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10th January 2006, 10:17 AM

Dear Pulkit,

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If you are feeling good then we all friends are happy. We are always with u Pulkit, no matter what.


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10th January 2006, 01:22 PM

Let me fly with my own wings
to that endless sky...........................


By Pulkit




Mujhe koi achraj nahi huva mere dost...tumhe parhkar...

mai samajh sakta hooN.....har insaan ke apne khule aasmaan ki chaah......mujhe laga tumne aaj meri si bhaasha boli hai....


Mai aksar sochta hooN ...ki mai bahut swaarthi hooN...apne hisaab se rishte banaata hooN.....or apne hisaab se unper amal karta hooN......or kaheeN na kaheeN dard bhi hi mujhe meri is aadat ka.....

per afsos nahi shaayad.......

KyoNki mera maan.na hai ...

jindgi ki is utha-patak ke beech...
is swaarth or niswaarth ke beech...
hamaari in achchhaiyoN or buraaiyoN ke beech....
hamaare is khule aasmaan ki chaah...
or bandishoN ke beech...
hamaari is sankuchit maansikta...
or khulepan ke beech...
hamaare is gambheer ya haNsmukh swabhaav ke beech.....

kuchh hai jo waastvik hai.....or jo hamaari is waastvikta ko swatantrata se samjhega...ham us.se judeiNge or wo ham se judega hi.....


mai aksar ye kehta hooN....hame dost banaana nahi hai....dost ban.na hai....so...taali donoN haathoN se bajti hai.....kisi bhi rishte ki ho....ham apni start karte haiN per bina kisi ko force kiye...or ummeed ( haaN ummeed ) bhi yahi karte haiN ki koi hame bhi bina force kiye....usi swatantrata se...taali bajaane ka mauka de....

Khush raho....

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10th January 2006, 01:59 PM

my dearest partner... wht to say... m always happy to c u alwayz whenever & whichever way u feel free & comfortable.. just fly... flyyyy... & flyy in this vaasssttttt sky of thoughts & people around u..bass hanste rehna... lekin sachhi muchhi waali hansi... jo seedha dil se ho...aur kabhi takleef bhi ho kisi baat ope to khul ke rona bhi... lekin apne mann ko pehle ki tareh free... open aur saaf rakhna.. u make everybody smile.. u dont want expectations from anybody... but partner i 'll always expect a charming , true smile from u ... this i m saying from d deepest corner of my heart
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11th January 2006, 12:45 PM

mere pulkit,

aaj muje tumhari yah rachna ne bahut hi prabhaviit kiya hai.
jo mai chahti thi tumhare ander... wahi aaj bahut hi saaf drashti kon se oobhar aaya hai. yah rachna humesha yaad rahegi.
khushi or ghum to waqt k sath badal bhi jaate hai... oos tarah humari soch ka bhi hai... jivan ka naam hi har pal parivertan hai... par baat jaha sach se joodti hai... woh sanaatan hoti hai... aisi hi ek soch tumhari rachna mai jo maine paayi ...

I wanna go back to my silence.....


yah jo silence hai na humare ander ka... oose soon sake ... samaj sake ...jina aasaan ho jaata hai ... sangharsh bhale hi lakh sath chale fir bhi kahungi k jina aasan sa lagta hai is silence k sath.

muje bahut hi khushi hui hai aaj..........
dard aur ghum se pare ....

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11th January 2006, 01:07 PM

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mere pulkit,

aaj muje tumhari yah rachna ne bahut hi prabhaviit kiya hai.
jo mai chahti thi tumhare ander... wahi aaj bahut hi saaf drashti kon se oobhar aaya hai. yah rachna humesha yaad rahegi.
khushi or ghum to waqt k sath badal bhi jaate hai... oos tarah humari soch ka bhi hai... jivan ka naam hi har pal parivertan hai... par baat jaha sach se joodti hai... woh sanaatan hoti hai... aisi hi ek soch tumhari rachna mai jo maine paayi ...

I wanna go back to my silence.....


yah jo silence hai na humare ander ka... oose soon sake ... samaj sake ...jina aasaan ho jaata hai ... sangharsh bhale hi lakh sath chale fir bhi kahungi k jina aasan sa lagta hai is silence k sath.

muje bahut hi khushi hui hai aaj..........
dard aur ghum se pare ....

tumhari di


v true meena ji ....................................


jahan maine usse bas tutta huaa keval padha bas uska dard samjh aaya wahi aapko ek nai raah dikhi ki wo khuch khushi apne liye talaash raha hai ..................................isi ko kehte hain pehloono ke do rookh hote hain samjhne waala jaha tak samjh sake .................har baaton ke do pehlo .............kooi ulta soch jaata hai kooi sahi ...........kooi aadha hin sochta hai kooi poora ..................................kooi baaton ko bana deta hai kooi bigaad deta hai ....................kooi kisi ke dukh ko kisi ke feeling ko samjh sakta hai toh kooi bas has jaata ya hasiii uda jaata hai .............................

kutch log kutch puraani baatain bhool naya shuru kar sakte hian kutch nahi kar sakte sabke apne apne feelings hai ...........sabke feelings ke liye hum ek hin rules nahi bana sakte par................


par yahan pata nahi ye chtoo ye bhoolo ram kis baat se dukhi hai par iska ye step ki wo change hona chaHta hai apne liye jina chahta hai...........ye bhi sahi ..................khush raho .......ALL THE BEST!!!!



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Hi Karthik,

Glad to know u liked it... but its not ne poem or nething...Its just my frustrations that i threw out on paper....Feeling free from it...!

Tum saath dete raho aise hi... Do TC..!


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Re: @};- :) Main Kuchh Galat To Nahin Keh Diya? - 11th January 2006, 04:54 PM

Shimul,

Main to humesha se hi aisa hoon...haan circumstances change hote rehte hain jo aapko hansne aur rone pe majboor karte hain.... What we need is not to let them come over us...

Bass.. wohi koshish hai khulke jeene ki...

Saath to yeh bana rahega... tum apna khayal rakhna..!


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11th January 2006, 04:55 PM

Chandsi ji,

Aapki duwaaon k liye shukriya...Apna khayal rakhiyega...!


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Gudiya,

tumne jo kaha sahi kaha...Apna astitva nahi khona chhaiye kabhi bhi kisi ko...Koshish yehi rahgei ke yeh khullapan kabhi khone naa paaye...!

tum aise hi saath deti raho...apna khyal rakhna acche se...


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Dearest Shalini,

I know my friends are with me always.... and I am happy.... Khush hi rehna chhiye hum sabko.. tumhe mujhe... however bad the Today may get..we have to make our tomm. smile...!

So koshish karni hai udhte jaane ki...saath yun hi bana rahgea...afterall khoon ka rishta hai


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11th January 2006, 06:45 PM

Hi Pulkit
nice creation

per kya yeh sirf ek poem hai ya kucch or??????????


SHWETA


jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...


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Chandsi ji,

Aapki duwaaon k liye shukriya...Apna khayal rakhiyega...!

DIDI bhi kehte ho or shukriyaa bhi!!! not done ...............
MA ke baad = MASI ke baad =DIDI. sab Ma samman hoti hain jo bas bhav ki bhookhi hoti hai shukriyaa ki nahi ..................

so u r not allowed to be free .........aapko sabko sambhalna hai chaahe wo kooi bhi ho sabko apna pyaar dena hai .......saath dena hai ............................
samjhe mere Chote se bhooloo RAM !!!



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11th January 2006, 08:11 PM

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DIDI bhi kehte ho or shukriyaa bhi!!! not done ...............
MA ke baad = MASI ke baad =DIDI. sab Ma samman hoti hain jo bas bhav ki bhookhi hoti hai shukriyaa ki nahi ..................

so u r not allowed to be free .........aapko sabko sambhalna hai chaahe wo kooi bhi ho sabko apna pyaar dena hai .......saath dena hai ............................
samjhe mere Chote se bhooloo RAM !!!



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CHANDSI.......................
Tumhe samajhna kabhi aasaan nahi raha mere liye .. par ek baat jaroor yahaN kehna chahuNga .... mujhe khushi hai tumhe is roop maiN dekh ke ...

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sach me bhaiya bahut dino ke baad padha aapko ahcha laga kaafi padh kar.sach me kaafi kathin hota hai logon ke xpectations ko kadhon pe utha kar chalna.par jo bhi ho likha aapne hai bilkul hi jabardast.kaafi ahcha laga aapko phir se padh kar.dua hai ki aap bas yunhi likhte rahen.

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hmmm....pulkit bhai....excellent...really outstanding...but brother...whos stopping u? u have the pen in ur hand....uve got the great talent and power to do whtever u want....go ahead...and if u think its right...then it is...dont listen to wht the world says.....its not always a gud idea to...

well...dont mind my idiotic nonsense....but....very ncely written....

keep writing such gems

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Pulkit,

It's an amazing feelings, so nice to read you buddy, I loved it. keep writting like this... take good care of yourself. Have a nice day!


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Tumhe samajhna kabhi aasaan nahi raha mere liye .. par ek baat jaroor yahaN kehna chahuNga .... mujhe khushi hai tumhe is roop maiN dekh ke ...

bhagwaan tumhe surakshit rakhe ... yahi dua hai...




aur pullu bhaai ... aapne bohat accha likha hai ye batana nahi bhooluNga .. mujhe accha laga .. bas khule gagan maiN udte raho aise hi ...

Kunal



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main wahi hoon.......... main abb bhi wahi hoon ...........mujhe aap abb bhi nahi samjhe ho ..............agar aapko main kahi buri lagi hoon toh aaj bhi hoon ....................agar kahi main galat lagi hoon toh galti ka ehsaas mujhe kal bhi tha .............aaj bhi hai ..............coz agar main hin galtiyaana karoongi toh apni beti ko kya shikhaaoungi ...........................so mujhe bas ek roop main mat dekhna ................mujhe kal bhi aapne galat roop main liya tha or aaj bhi galat ho .........ye keh kar ki ===mera ye roop aapne pehli baar dekha hai ..........yaad karo toh sab yaad aayega ........bas dill se

kisi ko apna maan kar usse samjhne ki jarorat hoti hai ...............coz apna kehna or apnaa banne main fark hai ...


pulkit dil ka achcha hai uss_se mujhe sneh milaa hai bina chal kapat ka ..............issliye shayd usse tuttaa nahi dekh paai ...........wo mujh se naaraj hai main nahi ..................



.khair main bas kutch pal ke liye hin aai thi .........main fir issee apna aadat nahi banaana chahti so ..............



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Chaand bhai,

Bahut hi acchi baat kahi aapne...Dost banane nahi dost banna hai...sach ek freedom honi zaroori hai har rishte me... agar woh naa ho to dam ghutega....!

Koshish ab yehi rahegi ke apna aasmaan kabhi naa khoyoon main... udhna hai ba door tak...!

aap aise hi saath rahiyega... apna khyal rakhiye..!


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Dearest partner,

I know you are concerned abt me...My smiles matter to you as urs do to me...I m happy buddy....I am just trying to find back my skies... Rishte banane jitne mushkil hain unhe sambhaalna usse zyada mushkil hai... at times a small mistake creates hell...!

Bass...ab khulkar jeene ki tamanna hai...aur saath me mere dost hain sang udhne ko itna mujhe pata hai

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Aap saath ho tabhi yeh sab mumkin bhi ho paaya hai... Woh jo silence hai mere andar ka woh mujhe bahut pasand hai... at times.. u want to stay away from all... just with ur silence...!

Woh waqt nahi mil paa raha thha...bahut shor-gul thha...usse baahr nikalne ki koshish hai...!

Dard-Gham pe likhne se mujhse zyada kise chidh hai didi...? I dont want to...kucch bhi ho... ladhke usse oopar aana hai...

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Dear Shweta,

Well....All th poems that i write myself have some menaing... they r my feelings....Cant write without feeling yaar...so yeh bhi meri feelings hi hain...!

Kucch frsutration thhi jo kaagaz par utaar di...aur free ho gaya hoon...

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Haan udhna hi hai ab...khule aasmaan me...koshish chalti rahegi...

tum saath rehna...apna khayal rakhna


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Tumhe pasand aaye alfaaz, accha laga... Koshish rahegi kucch naa kucch likhta rahoon...Tum saath dete rehna...Do TC..!


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Dearest Warda,

Dont tell me liked it as a poem? Whenever i imagine some good english poetry... ur creations are often in my mind... yeh to poetry kya...bass main likhta chala gaya jo dil me thha...!

Hmmm...I know I've the pen in my hand...but my writings affect a lot of ppl... if i am sad...they get sad...So i dont express always....!

haan.. but sometime u do need to throw whats in ur heart out... so i did this time... We shud listen to the world sis, but we shud let heart decode whats worng and whats right...and do that only...!

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Hi Parul,

I am glad that u liked it... I never thot i wud throw out my frustration on paper and it wud become a poem...

So...aise hi saath deti raho...aur apna khayal rakhna...varna dambook yaad hai naa...


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It's rare that I read your feelings in English...Chote Bhaiya !This
poem of yours is marvellous...! I have read it many times...still I
find something new in it !

Let me free...! Tann azaad hai, lekin mann azaadi nahin paa sakta...hai na ? Hota hai...hota hai !

Hamesha khush rehna aur muskaate rehna...thik hai ?

Bhaiya...



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pulkit ji,
aapki poem ne aaj bhaut kuch sochne par majboor kar diya.kise liye hum ye jindgi jite chle jaa rahe hain.sach kaha hai aapne apne liye bhi kuch karna hai .log tarif karen iske liye bhaut ji liye hum ab khud ki khushi k liye jina hai

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Bhaiya,

Sahi kah aapne... Tann to azaad hai.. magar jab tak mann azaad naa ho...woh azaadi mehsoos kar hi nahi sakta...and I ma gonna get my freedom...!

Frankly speaking... I dont find this one a poem... it was just my frustration i put on paper...but u all liked it so much...am flattered...

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Shraddha,

aapko ek baar fir mere ehsaas pasand aaye aur aapne saraaha.. mujhe accha lagaa... Sach hi hai ke doosron ke liye jeetejeete hum apne astitva ko hi bhool jaate hain...jo ki galata hai....one shud always respect oneself's dignity and humbleness....!

Saath deti rahiye... apn khayal rakhiyega...and pzl stop calling me jee...Pulkit sounds better...


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