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11th January 2007, 07:58 PM
Ye jo aaj maine likha hai.. shaayad yeh woh rosh hai jo dil ke kisi kone me chupa hua tha.. woh aawaaz jise dabaane ki bahut koshish ki duniya ne.. lekin haar gayi... Aaj bad jaise woh gussa.. woh aawaaz woh sab likh diya..
Some might find it offending, for them I would just say, It's my point of view and can not be the same of what everyone thinks. Everyone has there own mind set. And everyone has a right to express themselves.
Is rachna me jahan bhi "Tum" "Tumhara" ya phir "Tumne" ka istemaal kiya hai, woh "Duniya" ke liye hai, woh kuch "zaalim logon" ke liye hai.
Ye aaj ki ladki ki aawaaz hai, jo dabi hui thi kahin.. ki woh jaag gayi hai, aur kisi ke bhi zulm nahi sahegi. Use apni khushiyan paani aati hai.. ab maa, beti, behan, patni, bahu... ke naam pe woh apni khushiyon ki kurbaani nahi degi.. use bhi khush rehne ka hakk hai.. hasne ka hakk hai... apni khushiyon ko haathon se ab aur na woh fisalne degi... Dahej ke laalchiyon se bas yehi kahungi.. ki tumhe beti mil rahi hai usse pe agar tumhara dil nahi bharta.. to fir apne bete ka sauda kisi aise bazaar me karna.. jahan uski boli ki achi keemat mil jaaye.. jaise kisi saamaan ki neelaami karte hain vaise apne bete ki bh neelaami kar dena.. tabhi shaayad ache paise mil paayenge tumhe.
Shaadi koi sauda nahi.. ye sirf aur sirf pyar ka bandhan hai... jis ki neev pyar honi chaahiye.. dahej ki bhook nahi..
BahuT jal chuki ladkiyan..
Kayion ne apni khushiyan kurbaan kar di..
Kaiyon ne apne pyar ki kurbaani de di..
Bas ab aur nahi...
Ye aaj ki ladki hai.. annyaaye sehan nahi karegi....
Nahi jhukegi.. nahi tootegi.. nahi badlegi khud ko..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
Khushiyon pe hakk mera bhi uTna hai.. jiTna hai Tumhara..
Is hakk ko main kam karne doongi..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
Nahi jaloongi ab kisi aag mein, o dahej ke deewaano..
Ek paisa bhi Tumhe na dene doongi..
Main apne maa-baap ko yeh na karne doongi..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
Nahi raundne doongi kisiko bhi apni khushiyon ko..
Woh meri hain, meri hi rahengi..
Ye gunaah main kisi ko karne na doongi..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
Har jawab jaanke bhi jab sawal duniya ke khaTam na ho..
To sunle ae duniya.. main na kisi ka jawab ab tumhe doongi..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
Mujhe Todne ki sochna bhi maT..
ITni kamzor nahi main.. Main Tumhe hi badal doongi..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
Mere pyar ko na dard pohchaana..
Unki aankhon me aansoon na aane doongi..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
Ise aandolan samjho, ya chetaavni..
Isse kuch Tumhe alag main karne na doongi..
Mujhko nuksaan Tumhe pohchaane na doongi..
Main aaj ki ladki hun.. annyaye sehan nahi karungi..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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11th January 2007, 08:16 PM
kya baat hai priya,waah waah.bahut khoob.bahut sahi likha aapne.yeh aaj ki ladki hai,anyaaye sehan nahi karegi.
bahut acha likha,yunhin likhti raho.khush raho.
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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11th January 2007, 10:41 PM
priya di namskaar,
kya kahuN maiN ?? soch meiN pad gaya
priya di aapne jis tarike se awaaz uthayi hai sach me aaj ki ladki ki tasveer si dikha di aapne to jo anyaay aur uspe hone wale sitam ka takkar se jawab deti ho
aapka ye rosh saf saf dikhai deta hai jo baateN aap ne is rachna ke zariye sab ko batane ki kosisH ki haiN , aapki baat bilkul sahi hai aaj ke zamane mei ab kuch bhi fark nahi raha ladko me aur lakiyoN meiN fir bhi kai jaGah pe in dono meiN fark dhundhne wale log bhi bahot se maujud haiN is duniyaa meiN
shadi ek sauda nahi hota ye ek pyaara sa bandhan hai aapki ye bat mujhe bahot pasaNd aayi aur ye sahi bhi hai par kuch lalchi log is par dahej mang ke is pyaare se bandhan ko sauda banane me bhi nahi chukte inko to sirf paisa hi dikhai deta hai kisi ki beti nahi
di apako paRh ke bahot hi achha laga , ek alag se andaaz meiN aap nazar aayi aaj to wakehi meiN bahot hi badhiya sandesh lekar aap hazir hui is mehfil meiN
daad hazir hai kubul kjiyenga
khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN
aapka chhota bhai
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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18th January 2007, 07:52 PM
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Originally Posted by akelijaan
kya baat hai priya,waah waah.bahut khoob.bahut sahi likha aapne.yeh aaj ki ladki hai,anyaaye sehan nahi karegi.
bahut acha likha,yunhin likhti raho.khush raho.
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Pyari Sara,
Tumhe apne thread pe dekh ke humesha hi bahut khushi hoti hai!
Tumne phir se saraaha... bahut acha laga...
Bas I just wanted to give words and direction to those who get weakened up, and do compromise for there own happiness all the time!!!
We women, also deserve to be happy, and we will make this world a better place to live for everybody!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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hey Priya -
19th January 2007, 02:47 AM
bohat khoobsorti se aap ne woh saari baat keh di joh aaj ki ladki keh nahi sakti. Really gud poem..very touchy.
keep writing
tc
bichad k tujhse naa milna toh ek bahana tha,
mujhe to sirf tera waada aazmana tha.
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20th January 2007, 11:01 AM
Chaahat Ji
Mahila shakti ko ujaagar karti hui aapki kriti aur aapke vichaar bahaut pasand aaye.
aabhaar
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20th January 2007, 09:03 PM
bahut badiya
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" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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22nd January 2007, 12:38 PM
wah wah....dil kush kita hai kudiye....priya aise hi agar har ladki ban jaye...to hamarey samaj ki himmat hi na ho kisi par julam karne ki, mujhe tumko es roop mai.n dekh kar bahut jayada kushi ho rahi hai......!
yu hi himmat banaye rakna, mai.n hoon tere saath....phir dar kaya....!
lots of love
tumhari dii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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bhut khub -
22nd January 2007, 01:16 PM
priya ji ko raj ka namaskaar......is himmat bhare kalaam or itnii bahadur soach par meri daad hazir hai yun hii likhti raho.........raj..........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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22nd January 2007, 08:12 PM
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priya di namskaar,
kya kahuN maiN ?? soch meiN pad gaya
priya di aapne jis tarike se awaaz uthayi hai sach me aaj ki ladki ki tasveer si dikha di aapne to jo anyaay aur uspe hone wale sitam ka takkar se jawab deti ho
aapka ye rosh saf saf dikhai deta hai jo baateN aap ne is rachna ke zariye sab ko batane ki kosisH ki haiN , aapki baat bilkul sahi hai aaj ke zamane mei ab kuch bhi fark nahi raha ladko me aur lakiyoN meiN fir bhi kai jaGah pe in dono meiN fark dhundhne wale log bhi bahot se maujud haiN is duniyaa meiN
shadi ek sauda nahi hota ye ek pyaara sa bandhan hai aapki ye bat mujhe bahot pasaNd aayi aur ye sahi bhi hai par kuch lalchi log is par dahej mang ke is pyaare se bandhan ko sauda banane me bhi nahi chukte inko to sirf paisa hi dikhai deta hai kisi ki beti nahi
di apako paRh ke bahot hi achha laga , ek alag se andaaz meiN aap nazar aayi aaj to wakehi meiN bahot hi badhiya sandesh lekar aap hazir hui is mehfil meiN
daad hazir hai kubul kjiyenga
khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN
aapka chhota bhai
dhaval
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Chotte Bhaiya!
Tumhara reply padh ke mujhe behad khushi hui... Tumne is rachna ko saraaha aur iske bhaav ko samjha.....
Agar yeh sandesh un lalchiyon me se ek bhi padh le, aur is baare me kuch kare.. to yeh rachna safal ho jaayegi...
Bas na jaane.. us vakt yeh likhte hue.. itna gussa kahan se aa gaya...
Tum bhi apna khayal rakho chotte bhai!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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22nd January 2007, 08:14 PM
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bohat khoobsorti se aap ne woh saari baat keh di joh aaj ki ladki keh nahi sakti. Really gud poem..very touchy.
keep writing
tc
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Apka bahut bahut shukriya.. jo aapne is rachna ko padha aur saraaha...
Ji haan maine koshish ki hain us dabi aawaz ko uthaane ki... dekhte hai... kitni aage jaayegi...
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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22nd January 2007, 08:16 PM
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Chaahat Ji
Mahila shakti ko ujaagar karti hui aapki kriti aur aapke vichaar bahaut pasand aaye.
aabhaar
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Vipin ji..
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya... jo aapko yeh rachna pasand aayi...
Aapko yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui...
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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24th January 2007, 04:20 AM
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bahut badiya
greeeee8
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Bahut bahut shukriya Dilip ji....
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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24th January 2007, 04:22 AM
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wah wah....dil kush kita hai kudiye....priya aise hi agar har ladki ban jaye...to hamarey samaj ki himmat hi na ho kisi par julam karne ki, mujhe tumko es roop mai.n dekh kar bahut jayada kushi ho rahi hai......!
yu hi himmat banaye rakna, mai.n hoon tere saath....phir dar kaya....!
lots of love
tumhari dii
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Aapka jawab padh ke bahut khushi hui Di...
Haan jab aap saath ho, to mujhe kiska darr....
Main to pehle hi nahi darrti kisi se aur oopar se ek aur support.. vaah.. meri to lottery lag gayi... just kidding!!!
Thankyou so much for appreciating this one..
Take Care Di..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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25th January 2007, 07:44 PM
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priya ji ko raj ka namaskaar......is himmat bhare kalaam or itnii bahadur soach par meri daad hazir hai yun hii likhti raho.........raj..........
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Raj ji..
Aapne meri rachna ko padha, aur ehsaas ko samjha.. bahut khushi hui..
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka...
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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24th March 2009, 12:25 AM
superb Superb...beyond Words Can Describe..............
Priya Ji Aap To Eid Ka Chaand Ho Gayi Hain, Ghayab Hi Ghayab...kabhi Kabhi Doston Ke Liye Bhi Waqt Nikal Liya Kijiye........keep Writing
Zainy
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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25th March 2009, 07:56 PM
Sabse pehle to aapka shukriya ada karna chaahungi, meri koshish ko saraahne ke liye
Aur rahi baat gaayab hone ki... to aisi baat bhi nahi hai.. pichle kuch 15 dino se lag bhag roz hi aa rahi hun.. gustaakhi ke liye maafi chaahti hun... doston ke liye to humesha wakt hi wakt hota hai.. lekin haalaat hi laachaar bana dete hain, ki chaahte hue bhi contact ho paana mushkil ho jata hai.. khair.. poori koshish karungi apne parivaar me regular aane ki..
Thanx once again!!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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