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Lightbulb Just Punjabi !!! - 2nd February 2005, 03:39 PM

Hi everybody,

i want to start a thread which shud contain only punjabi shers,wordings,etc.I want that evrybody plz reply my post but with punjabi shers,etc only....

Right now going to post some lines written by Debi Makhsoospuri. He is one of my favourite punjabi singers ::


Koi khat kise da parda hai,
taan tera cheta aunda hai,
koi kise naal rusda larda hai,
taan tera cheta aunda hai,
koi dosh kise sir marda hai,
taan tera cheta aunda hai,
koi achanchet aa kharda hai,
taan tera cheta aunda hai,,
Debi naal tere rishte da bas pata thodeya lokan nu,
jinu pata zikar jad karda hai taan tera cheta aunda hai...


umeed hai tusi sare jane meri es thread nu aage continue karonge


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2nd February 2005, 04:28 PM

jad koyi kise te marda ee..
taan tera cheta aunda hai,
koyee ishq vicch hayuke bharda ee..
taan tera cheta aunda hai,
jad sarri raat na sayunda ee..
taan tera cheta aunda hai,
apne keh vi jad,oh uss nu chaad janada ee..
taan tera cheta aunda hai,
ishq di bazzi vich har koyi maar khaa jandaa ee,
uss hari bazzi lyee jad,apni kismat te ronda ee..
taan tera cheta aunda hai........


i tried to write......continue ur thread...


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4th February 2005, 07:45 PM

Paa neevein kolon lang jaana
ni main akh tere val nahin takni
apne vichaale vahi leekh tu jo
main oh bhul ke vi nahin tapni
yaari da lekha jokha jad marzi kar lain adiye ni
gam rakh laye tere debi ne teri hor koi cheez nahin rakhni....


thks for repling arpan,u wrote very well

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hi - 4th February 2005, 09:10 PM

hi i cannot rite nething to continue the thread, as i am not tht good with shayri. tho i am a punjabi myself, i dono wot to rite but i jus wana say u guys hve both done a really nice job. its really butiful. n do carry on. keep it up. good luck

tc


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Hello! - 5th February 2005, 04:42 AM

Tere ishq ton main daud ke kis than chali jaavan ,
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Kasam Khuda Di - 5th February 2005, 04:46 AM

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Intezaar - 5th February 2005, 04:50 AM

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asin jaan den lage ik pal vi na laya
us jaan lain lage nakhra hazaar keeta...


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Mahina Saun Da - 5th February 2005, 04:55 AM

Rukh kidhar nu badal gaya e paun da
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5th February 2005, 03:55 PM

Hi Devdaas,

Mujhe punjabi samjh mein aati hai magar likh nahi pata...

Magar tumne bahut hi acha likha hai... Aur baaki sab ne bhi...

I read all of them really beautiful words...

I will try and send u one which u can trasnlate for me and put here...

Thanks reaally very nice thread.


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5th February 2005, 03:59 PM

hi reemzi

mere layi aina hi bahut hai ki tuhanu meri post pasand aayi.
apna khayal rakhna

likhde rehna


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5th February 2005, 04:01 PM

hi sukanya

tuhanu meri thread pasand aayi esde layi bahut bahut shukria,
je sab da saath reha taan hor nazraane vi tuhade sab di khidmat vich pesh karda ravngaa



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5th February 2005, 04:09 PM

hi jaan jaan

eh taan pata lag gaya ki tusi punjabi hon
par ik sach eh hai ki
tusi taan mera dil khush kar ditta
tusi bahut vadiya likhiya hai...
tusin shayri.com te naven aaye lagde hon,
sade es shayri.com parivaar valon tuhanu nighi jee aayan nu...

ik cheez hor kehna chavanga apni har post de akhir vich apna naam zaroor likh dena,kyonki rabb di kirpa naal tuhada id bada zabardast hai,je hi jaan likhiya taan saare sochi na pai jaan..
just kiding....

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5th February 2005, 04:12 PM

unj nere nere rehande hon,
par dilan vich duriyan ne,
lokan layi tusan kol hase ne,
par saade layi bas ghurian ne,
sada raaj aaya taan dasange,
aje gode-gode majbooriyan ne,
saanu maar chadeya badnaamiyan ne,
te tainu patt chadeya mashhuriyaan ne....




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Shukriya Devdaas Ji - 9th February 2005, 03:21 AM

Hello Devdass Ji,

Tuhada message parhiya....it's nice....thanks ji.....welcome karn da vi sukriya ji, haanji bas main hunne thode din pehlan hi register kita.....

Bahut vadhiya site hai, ate tuhaadiyan saariyan posts vi bahut hi vadhiya han.....likhde riha karo!!!

You know what I didn't even think about it, that I should post my name at the end of the message, I will from now on.....

By the way, what's your real name, besides "Devdaas" !?!?!?

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Udeek... - 9th February 2005, 04:30 AM

MudtaN to tEri kiti si udik, TuN hamEshaN paraya riha
FaaslE sada lammE rehNgE, Man nu veham laaya riha
Lal mirchaN di kurHatanH bajhoN, Naina wich surma sajaya riha
Kach dE baksE wich dil, Tuttanh toN bachaya riha
Main labhia jameeno asmaani, Kalpana wich tuN samaya riha...
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Asin pyar tere naal keeta si, bari aas si ke torh nibhaayengi tu
Aitebaar tere te keeta si, ki pata si ke chad tur jaayengi tu....
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Jo asar hai akh di maar andar, oh na teer te na talwaar andar
onhna rab nu labh ke ki laina, jinha pa liya rab nu yaar andar...
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Peed tere jaan de kiddan jaranga main, tere bagair zindagi nu ki karanga main...
Ki karanga pyar di lutti bahaar nu, sajiyan sajiyan mehfilan te gunde shingar nu...
Hathi mari muskaan da matam karanga main, Tere bagair zindagi nu ki karanga main...

Je ro paya taan kehange dewaana ho gaya, Je na boliya te kehenge begana ho gaya...
Lokaan di is jubaan nu kiddan farranga main, Tere bagair zindagi nu ki karanga main...

Sahan di dubdi naav nu choga mile ja na, Es zehan wich milan da mouka mile ja na
Aglay janam wich milan de koshish karanga main, Tere bagair zindagi nu ke karanga main...

Sajna jara ku thehar ja sajda te kar lavan, Athroo na koi vekh lave parda te kar lavan
Mannia dillan di sez te patthar dharanga main, Oh jaan walia alvida bas eh hi kahanga main...
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Neend Naina Chon Udd Gaye Mere .. Naini Hanjuan Dera Laaya ..
Chadke Turrgey Sajjan Jaddon De .. Haasa Buliyan Te Na Aaya ..
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Har roop vich zindgi nu jee aayan keha, Same di har peer ban ke mehmaan aayi
Wafa de arthan nu jaaneya hai zindgi ne, Aapne paraye sab di pehchaan aayi
Pahunchni si pahunch gayi kishti kinare, Unjh har ik lehar is nu dubaun aayi
Jihna de hise bahaar aayi, Oh hor ne...Sade hise bas zindagi viraan aayi!!!

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9th February 2005, 01:52 PM

hi muskaan ji
ki haal hai tuhada
tuhada jawaab miliya,bahut khushi hoyi
jehra main keha si ki apni har post te apna naam likhan layi,kite tusi us gal da bura taan nahin mana leya...
umeed hai nahin....

anywaz myself rohit chawla,24 yrs old hardware engineer based in punjab(india)..

eh taan waqt ne sada naam badal ditta,oh kehande ne na...
"ishq ne gaalib nikamma kar diya,
warna aadmi to hum bhi the kaam ke..."

khair likhde rahio..
apna khayal rakhna

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9th February 2005, 01:56 PM

Rabba husan ditta je sohniyan nu,
phir katon dittiyan naal magrurian ne,
pehlan patt ke putt beganeyan nu,
phir lang diyan watt ke ghurian ne,
dil lai ke yaar da den dhokha,
dagebaaz majajanan pooriyan ne,
je puchho eh ki kiita phir kehan haske,
majboorian ne.............




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Hi! - 10th February 2005, 04:55 AM

Hello Rohit Ji,
Nahin nahin main tuhaadi gal da bikul bura nahin manaaya...Acha, te tusin hardware engineer ho!?!?
Par shauk bade alag alag ne, kithe shyari te kithe tuhaadi Engineering .... just playin' with ya'
By the way, nice post ... "majbooriyan ne"
Talk to you later. Take care.
Best Regards,
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11th February 2005, 11:57 AM

hi muskaan ji
ki haal hai tuhada
meri post nu pasand karan da bahut bahut shukriya...

ki kariye waqt de age kise da zor taan chalda nahin
pehlan waqt ne ik hardware engineer di post de ditti,pher devdaas di...
rahi gal shayri di taan eh mera shaunk nahin.....
khair....leave it

apna khayal rakhna
likhde rahio...


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11th February 2005, 11:59 AM

rabb jaane ohna di soch hai ki
jehre sochde nahin bas kehande ne
dil ohna nu pher kaboole na
ik vaar jo nazron lainde ne
fatt samein naal ne bhar jaande
talwaar gandaasi goli de
debi zakhm chandariyan jeeban de
saari umar tasakde rehande ne..........


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jis din ton change paase nu halaat badal gaye sajna de
asin lokan kolon suniya ae khayalaat badal gaye sajna de
kal hor keha aj hor kehan byanaat badal gaye sajna de
hun dinen chadaunde taare oh din raat badal gaye sajna de
asin apneyan ton hor hoye kayi hor to apne ho gaye ne
hun debi fashion wangu hi angsaak badal gaye sajna de..........


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Ghamaan di raat lammi eh,
Jaan mere geet lame ne.

Na bhaiddi raat mukkdi eh,
Na mere geet mukkde ne.

Eh sar kinne ku dhunge ne
Kis ne haath na paayi,

Na barsaataan 'ch chadhde ne
Te na auddaan 'ch sukhde ne.

Mere hadd hi avalle ne
Jo agg laiyaan nahi saddade

Ne saddade haukkeyaan de naal
Haavaan naal dhukhde ne.

Eh phatt han ishk de
Ehna di yaaro ki dava hove,

Eh hath laayaan vi dukhde ne
Malham laayaan vi dukhde ne.

Je gori raat hai chann di
Te kaali raat hai kisdi?

Na lukde taareyaan vich chann
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add to your punjabi post - 9th September 2005, 09:38 AM

Jaad sever'h de kirn boohe vich chaanan paonde ya
Tera cheetha onda ya

Chera jaddon sheeshe'ch apna vekh de ya
Tera chehra naal nazaar onda ya

Tar'e jaddon raat nu tim timonde' ne, chanda mamma jad'o apni chaandni da saath deenda ya
Tere saath da cheetha onda ya

Jaadon raat andhere nu apne bahaan'ch lokhonde ya
Tere bahaan da sahara cheethe onda ya

Kadmon de aahat jado kaana'ch peene ya
Dil nu tere kadmaan de udeek rende ya

Bas jaan ji ke daseye tuanu..
tuade he laye rooz rab naal gal karde ya.

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Bahut sohny kavita hai ji!! Parhke mazaa aa gya.

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hi - 10th September 2005, 12:52 PM

Shukria ji!!!



"Work like you dont need money,
Love like you have never been hurt,
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Smile ek choti jehi koshish meri bhi - 29th October 2007, 02:34 PM

jad koi pyar naal bulaunda hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad savere suraj hasda aunda hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad sawaan vich koi beejda hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad raata.n nu neend na aaundi hai
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jab patiya.n nu tarel di boond chumdi hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad meri gut meri kamar nu galvakdi paundi hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad sab menu ekali nu chad jandey ne,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad maiN saah bhardi haan,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai....tan tera cheta aaunda hai...


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Kis da doush sikis da nayi
aey gallan hunkaren diyan nayi

welay lang gaye tauba walay
rataan hokay paran diyan nayi

jo hoya aey hona eee si
tay honirokiyan rukdi nayi

ik waari jadonn shuru ho jawey
gal fir neewin mukdi nayi


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ਜੇ ਹੋਇਆ ਦਿਨ ਤੇ ਸੂਰਜ ਬਨਣ ਪਊ,
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ਇੱਕ ਦਰਿਆ ਵਗਣਾ ਹੰਝੂਆਂ ਦਾ,
ਓਹਦਾ ਰਸਤਾ ਸਾਡੀ ਅੱਖ ਸੱਜਣਾ...
ਪੈੜਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਲਿਤੜ ਜਾਵਾਂਗੇ,
ਤਾਹਨੇ ਮਾਰੂ ਕੱਖ ਸੱਜਣਾ...
ਸਾਡਾ ਵਾਸਤਾ ਏ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਨਾ ਰੋਲੀਂ,
ਕਦੇ ਹੋਵੀਂ ਨਾ ਸਾਥੋਂ ਵੱਖ ਸੱਜਣਾ...
ਤੇਰੇ ਨਾ 'ਤੇ ਉਮਰ ਲਿਖਾ ਦੇਵਾਂ..
ਹਰ ਜਨਮ ਮਿਲਣ ਦਾ ਕਰ ਵਾਦਾ...
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ਅਸੀ ਮੰਨਦੇ ਗਰੀਬ ਤੇਰੀ ਏ ਵੀ ਗੱਲ ਮੰਨੀ, ਨਹੀਓ ਵੇਖਣ ਨੂੰ ਸੋਹਣੇ ਤੇਰੀ ਏ ਵੀ ਗੱਲ ਮੰਨੀ,ਤੂੰ ਵੀ ਸਾਡੀ ਇੱਕ ਮੰਨ ਪਿੱਛੇ ਜਾ ਨਾ ਜੱਗ ਦੇ,ਅਸੀ ਐਨੈ ਵੀ ਨੀ ਮਾੜੇ ਜਿੰਨੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਲੱਗਦੇ, ਸਾਨੂੰ ਉਹਨਾਂ ਚੋਂ ਨਾ ਗਿਣੀ ਜੋ ਨੇ ਦਿਲਾਂ ਦੇ ਵਪਾਰੀ,ਹਰ ਪਿੰਡ ਹਰ ਸ਼ਹਿਰ ਜਿਹੜੇ ਰੱਖਦੇ ਨੇ ਯਾਰੀ,ਓ ਨੀ ਕਿਸੇ ਦੇ ਵੀ ਹੁੰਦੇ ਲੱਗਦੇ ਨੇ ਜੋ ਸਭ ਦੇ,ਅਸੀ ਐਨੈ ਵੀ ਨੀ ਮਾੜੇ ਜਿੰਨੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਲੱਗਦੇ, ਸਾਨੂੰ ਦਿਲ ਨਾਲ ਦੇਖ ਜੇ ਨੀ ਅੱਖਾਂ ਤੇ ਯਕੀਨ,ਅੱਖਾਂ ਖਾ ਜਾਣ ਧੋਖਾ ਚਿਹਰੇ ਵੇਖ ਕੇ ਹਸੀਨ,ਚੋਗਾ ਸਾਦਗੀ ਦਾ ਪਾਕੇ ਜੋ ਦਿਲਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਠੱਗਦੇ,ਅਸੀ ਐਨੈ ਵੀ ਨੀ ਮਾੜੇ ਜਿੰਨੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਲੱਗਦੇ, ਅਸੀ ਉਹਨਾ ਲੋਕਾਂ ਵਿੱਚੋਂ ਜਿਹੜੇ ਰੱਖਦੇ ਜ਼ੁਬਾਨ, ਤੇਰੇ ਇੱਕ ਹੀ ਇਸ਼ਰੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਦੇ ਦਿਆਂਗੇ ਜਾਨ,ਜਸ ਫੇਰ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਆਖੇ ਸਾਡੇ ਜੇ ਨੀ ਲੱਭਦੇ,ਅਸੀ ਐਨੈ ਵੀ ਨੀ ਮਾੜੇ ਜਿੰਨੇ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਲੱਗਦੇ,
   
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ਸੌਖੀ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਦੀ ਬਾਜ਼ੀ ਨਹੀ,ਸੌਖੀ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਦੀ ਬਾਜ਼ੀ ਨਹੀਂ, ਅਸੀਂ ਜਿੰਨਾ ਪਿੱਛੇ ਰੁਲ ਗਏ,.ਉਹ ਤਾਂ ਬੋਲ ਕੇ ਰਾਜ਼ੀ ਨਹੀਂ, ਅਸੀਂ ਲਿੱਖ-ਲਿੱਖ ਚਿੱਠੀਆਂ ਪਾਉਂਦੇ ਰਹੇ, ਉਹ ਬਿਨਾਂ ਪੜੇ ਹੀ ਤੀਲੀ ਲਾਉਂਦੇ ਰਹੇ.,ਇਸੇ ਉਮੀਦ ਵਿੱਚ ਲੰਘ ਗਈ ਜ਼ਿੰਦਗੀ ਸਾਡੀ,.ਉਹ ਰੁੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੇ ਅਸੀਂ ਮਨਾਉਂਦੇ ਰਹੇ, ਚੰਨ-ਤਾਰਿਆਂ ਨਾਲ ਸੀ ਸਾਂਝ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ,.ਹੁਣ ਉਹ ਵੀ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਰੁਵਾ ਜਾਂਦੇ ਨੇ, ਰਾਤੀਂ ਅੱਖੀਆਂ ਚ ਨੀਂਦ ਤਾਂ ਆਵੇ ਨਾ, ਉਸਦੀ ਯਾਦ ਦੇ ਹੰਝੂ ਜ਼ਰੂਰ ਆ ਜਾਂਦੇ
   
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10th November 2007, 01:29 AM

ਸੋਹਣੀਆਂ ਤਾਂ ਲੱਖ ਹੋਣੀਆਂ ਤੇਰੇ ਵਰਗੀ ਹੋਰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ
ਇੱਕ ਤੂੰ ਹੀ ਸੋਹਣੀ ਲੱਗਦੀ ਹੋਰ ਦਿਲ ਦੀ ਚੋਰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ
ਇੱਕ ਤੂੰ ਹੀ ਚੰਗੀ ਲੱਗਦੀ ਤੇਰੇ ਵਰਗੀ ਹੋਰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ
ਸੋਹਣੀਆਂ ਤਾਂ ਲੱਖ ਹੋਣੀਆਂ.....

ਤੱਕਿਆ ਸੀ ਹੱਸਦੀ ਨੂੰ ਜਦੋਂ ਪਹਿਲੀ ਵਾਰ ਨੀ
ਮੱਲੋਮੱਲੀ ਹੋਇਆ ਸਾਡੇ ਦਿਲ ਦਾ ਵਪਾਰ ਨੀ
ਦਿਲ ਤੇਰੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਡੁੱਲਿਆ,ਨਾ ਮੁੱਖ ਤੇਰਾ ਗਿਆ ਭੁੱਲਿਆ
ਦਿਲ ਤੇਰੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਡੁੱਲਿਆ ਫਿਰ ਚੱਲਿਆ ਜ਼ੋਰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ
ਸੋਹਣੀਆਂ ਤਾਂ ਲੱਖ ਹੋਣੀਆਂ ਤੇਰੇ ਵਰਗੀ ਹੋਰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ.....
ਜਿੱਥੇ ਕਿਤੇ ਹੁੰਦੀ ਤੇਰਾ ਰੱਖੀਏ ਖਿਆਲ ਨੀ
ਆਪ ਤੋਂ ਬੁਲਾ ਕੇ ਤੇਰਾ ਪੁੱਛਦੇ ਆਂ ਹਾਲ ਨੀ
ਪੁੱਛ-ਪੁੱਛ ਅਸੀਂ ਥੱਕ ਗਏ ਪਰ ਤੂੰ ਨਾ ਦੱਸਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਆਉਂਦੀ,
ਜੇ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ ਗੱਲ ਕਰਨੀ ਕਾਹਤੋਂ ਜਾਣ-ਜਾਣ ਅੱਖੀਆਂ ਮਿਲਾਉਂਦੀ,
ਜੇ ਨਾ ਸਾਡੇ ਨਾਲ ਬੋਲਣਾ ਕਾਹਤੋਂ ਫਿਰਦੀ ਭੁਲੇਖੇ ਜਿਹੇ ਪਾਉਂਦੀ,
ਜਿੱਥੇ ਕਿਤੇ ਹੁੰਦੀ ਤੇਰਾ ਰੱਖੀਏ ਖਿਆਲ ਨੀ,
ਆਪ ਤੋਂ ਬੁਲਾ ਕੇ ਤੇਰਾ ਪੁੱਛਦੇ ਆਂ ਹਾਲ ਨੀ,
ਸਾਨੂੰ ਤੇਰਾ ਫਿਕਰ ਬੜਾ,ਕਰਦੇ ਆਂ ਜ਼ਿਕਰ ਬੜਾ
ਸਾਨੂੰ ਤੇਰਾ ਫਿਕਰ ਬੜਾ ਰਹੀ ਆਪਣੀ ਗੌਰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ
ਸੋਹਣੀਆਂ ਤਾਂ ਲੱਖ ਹੋਣੀਆਂ ਤੇਰੇ ਵਰਗੀ ਹੋਰ................
   
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10th November 2007, 01:30 AM

ਸੋਚਦਾ ਹਾਂ ਭੁੱਲ ਜਾਵਾਂ ਮੈਂ ਤੈੰਨੂ ਜਾਂ ਲੱਭਾਂ
ਹੱਥ ਦੀ ਲਕੀਰ ਿਵੱਚੋਂ ਮੈਂ ਤੇਰਾ ਨਾਂ ਲੱਭਾਂ

ਿਜਵੇਂ ਕੋਈ ਟੋਭੇ ਿਵੱਚੋਂ ਸੱਚੇ ਸੁੱਚੇ ਮੋਤੀ ਲੱਭੇ
ਿਜਸਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਧੁੱਪ ਿਵੱਚੋਂ ਰੂਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਮੈਂ ਛਾਂ ਲੱਭਾਂ

ਿਜੱਥੇ ਕੋਈ ਿਪਆਰ ਵਾਲਾ ਬੂਟਾ ਇੱਕ ਲਾ ਸਕਾਂ
ਆਪਣੇ ਹੀ ਘਰ ਿਵੱਚ ਏਨੀ ਕੁ ਜਗਾਂ ਲੱਭਾਂ

ਪਤਾ ਵੀ ਹੈ ਜਾ ਕੇ ਉਹਨੇ ਫੇਰ ਨਹੀਓਂ ਮੋੜਾ ਪਾਉਣਾ
ਐਵੇਂ ਮੈਂ ਬਨੇਰੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਬੈਠੇ ਹੋਏ ਕਾਂ ਲੱਭਾਂ

ਤੈੰਨੂ ਮੈਂ ਗਵਾਇਆ ਹੈ ਤਾਂ ਖੁਦ ਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਭੁੱਲ ਚੁੱਕਾਂ
ਖੁਦ ਨੂੰ ਮੈਂ ਭਾਲ ਸਕਾਂ ਤੈੰਨੂ ਹੁਣ ਤਾਂ ਲੱਭਾਂ

ਕਰ ਦੇਵੀਂ ਰੱਬਾ ਮੇਰੀ ਏਨੀ ਅਰਦਾਸ ਪੂਰੀ
ਹਰ ਇੱਕ ਿਵੱਚੋਂ ਵੀਰ, ਧੀ, ਭੈਣ, ਮਾਂ ਲੱਭਾਂ

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unj nere nere rehande hon,
par dilan vich duriyan ne,
lokan layi tusan kol hase ne,
par saade layi bas ghurian ne,
sada raaj aaya taan dasange,
aje gode-gode majbooriyan ne,
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10th December 2007, 01:41 AM

Hi Devdaas.


Absolutely fantastic. Lakhi hokar meine issee parah par kya baath hai yaar. Kine sone tarikee naal gal keethe ya.

Keep it up!


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Rabba husan ditta je sohniyan nu,
phir katon dittiyan naal magrurian ne,
pehlan patt ke putt beganeyan nu,
phir lang diyan watt ke ghurian ne,
dil lai ke yaar da den dhokha,
dagebaaz majajanan pooriyan ne,
je puchho eh ki kiita phir kehan haske,
majboorian ne.............




Devdaas...


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Love like you have never been hurt,
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Dance like no one is watching."

"Janee kya likha hai us Rub ne apne kismat par, roz hathon ko dekh kar unee parne ke koshish karthe hai"
   
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Hi Devdass

you have done a very good work to promote Punjabi............my best wishes are with you...

Teri yaadaan di pitaari hun kiven dhoiyye
jad tu hi bewafaa niklyaa...


Akele To Hum Pehle Bhi Jee Rahe The,
Kyu Tanha-Se Ho Gaye Hai Tere Jane Ke Baad......JAYA
   
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jad koi pyar naal bulaunda hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad savere suraj hasda aunda hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad sawaan vich koi beejda hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad raata.n nu neend na aaundi hai
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jab patiya.n nu tarel di boond chumdi hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad meri gut meri kamar nu galvakdi paundi hai,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad sab menu ekali nu chad jandey ne,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai,

jad maiN saah bhardi haan,
tan tera cheta aaunda hai....tan tera cheta aaunda hai...


kuch hor ahsaas v add kar rahi aa..................!

jad zulf chehre te bikhar janudi hai,
taan tera cheta aauNda hai....

jad hawa dupata sarkauNdi hai,
taan tera cheta aauNda hai...

jad koi naa wafa da lainda hai,
taan tera cheta aauNda hai...

jad koi lagiyaN nibhauN da wada karda hai,
taan tera cheta aauNda hai.....


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majboorian da - 22nd March 2009, 05:13 PM

eh mera reply hai devdass ji de vallo likhe "majboorian ne " de laye ......
hope u dnt mind ........

je pata hunda ohna saadiyan majboori da
tan kade na saade te gusse da izhaar karde
dil ch se jo ohna laye pyaar
ijhaar karaan laye kade na takraar karde
dilan nu hunde a dilan di saanjh
jaroori tan nai har gall da karde firye jag ch ellan ......

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