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Thumbs up You Will Be Mine - 7th June 2005, 03:30 PM

In this cold speechless night
I wonder where and what went wrong.....in this night

We could communicate, though two worlds apart
I could listen to your silence...by the voice of your heart
Why do you have to stay so far away?
If only you weren't at sea while I'm on the bay
I could've shown LOVE in every single way

Oh! Why is it that I'm not in your thoughts?
Oh! Why aren't you in my arms?
Is it wrong to crave for your sight?
If this is wrong ...then what is right?
Sometimes I wonder why ...
..things are wrong or right

I wonder why....in this night
In this cold speechless night


It's true I crave for your Love. I crave for your touch
I know I love you..I wish you'd know how much !!
I'm delayed not for that I'm searching reasons to Love you
But I'm finding ways to express my Love..
And I don't know how...I'm a fool, I dont know How

I'm not the worst though not the best
Why can't you see me out of the rest?
I'm clutched by destiny or some merciless fate
Or...you would be mine..If only GOD was just
'coz I know I'm your mate....your only perfect soulmate

I'm insane I'm blind
I'm out of my mind...
Right from the time
you are out of sight...
But why? I ask.......this night
This cold and speechless night

One thing is for sure
If my Love is pure
One day my world is going to shine
One day everything's gonna be fine
And that day ...my love....you'll be mine

Under the bright-white,milky moonlight...
In a warm yet speechless night...
Everything's gonna be right...when..

YOU WILL BE MINE


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8th June 2005, 03:42 PM

hie, Alien Sadhu.

its really a beautiful experssion..
do keep writing..

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8th June 2005, 07:19 PM

In this cold speechless night
I wonder where and what went wrong.....in this night

We could communicate, though two worlds apart
I could listen to your silence...by the voice of your heart
Why do you have to stay so far away?
If only you weren't at sea while I'm on the bay
I could've shown LOVE in every single way

Beauitfulllllllll!


Oh! Why is it that I'm not in your thoughts?
Oh! Why aren't you in my arms?
Is it wrong to crave for your sight?
If this is wrong ...then what is right?
Sometimes I wonder why ...
..things are wrong or right

I wonder why....in this night
In this cold speechless night

Amazinggg.....!


It's true I crave for your Love. I crave for your touch
I know I love you..I wish you'd know how much !!
I'm delayed not for that I'm searching reasons to Love you
But I'm finding ways to express my Love..
And I don't know how...I'm a fool, I dont know How

Very beautifulll


I'm not the worst though not the best
Why can't you see me out of the rest?
I'm clutched by destiny or some merciless fate
Or...you would be mine..If only GOD was just
'coz I know I'm your mate....your only perfect soulmate

Very nice!!


I'm insane I'm blind
I'm out of my mind...
Right from the time
you are out of sight...
But why? I ask.......this night
This cold and speechless night

Aaah.. too good!


One thing is for sure
If my Love is pure
One day my world is going to shine
One day everything's gonna be fine
And that day ...my love....you'll be mine

Under the bright-white,milky moonlight...
In a warm yet speechless night...
Everything's gonna be right...when..

You'll be Mine


Hi!

This is an amazingly welll expressed poem... loved every stanza....Accpet my praises on writing a beauty...Plz do keep it up.. TC


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28th June 2012, 06:35 PM

Thanx to niral and pulkit I had lost my password to my ID. I know...how foolish of me... Well...thats d reason for my late reply. Shall upload loads of new shayris and poems...do have a look and write ur opinions... Thank you...


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Originally Posted by alien_sadhu View Post
In this cold speechless night
I wonder where and what went wrong.....in this night

We could communicate, though two worlds apart
I could listen to your silence...by the voice of your heart
Why do you have to stay so far away?
If only you weren't at sea while I'm on the bay
I could've shown LOVE in every single way

Oh! Why is it that I'm not in your thoughts?
Oh! Why aren't you in my arms?
Is it wrong to crave for your sight?
If this is wrong ...then what is right?
Sometimes I wonder why ...
..things are wrong or right

I wonder why....in this night
In this cold speechless night


It's true I crave for your Love. I crave for your touch
I know I love you..I wish you'd know how much !!
I'm delayed not for that I'm searching reasons to Love you
But I'm finding ways to express my Love..
And I don't know how...I'm a fool, I dont know How

I'm not the worst though not the best
Why can't you see me out of the rest?
I'm clutched by destiny or some merciless fate
Or...you would be mine..If only GOD was just
'coz I know I'm your mate....your only perfect soulmate

I'm insane I'm blind
I'm out of my mind...
Right from the time
you are out of sight...
But why? I ask.......this night
This cold and speechless night

One thing is for sure
If my Love is pure
One day my world is going to shine
One day everything's gonna be fine
And that day ...my love....you'll be mine

Under the bright-white,milky moonlight...
In a warm yet speechless night...
Everything's gonna be right...when..

YOU WILL BE MINE

Good one Vinay ji

Pls keep writing....................




Zainy


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