Jo Jeevan ko Arth diya...woh Lamha jee lo.....On An Inspiring Note

[sukanya]

Namaskar

Aap sabhi ki prerna se ek aur inspirational Rachna likhi hay.Asha karungi ki aapko ashaon ki kirnon se bhari yeh Rachna pasand aayegi......

Jo Waqt kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Waqt Abhi baki hay usey tum jee lo

Jo Lamha Ashqon mein kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Lamha kushi ka pal de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Pathghad pattey jhulsa gaya usey tum janey do
Jo Basant naye phuul de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Aandhi chaley gayi usey tum janey do
Jo Barish Mitti ki khushboo de gayi usey tum jee lo

Jo Andhera Ashaon ki kirney le gaya usey tum janey do
Jo Pal Ashaon ka sawera de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Jeevan vyarth kiya usey tum janey do
Jo Jeevan ko Arth diya woh Lamha jee lo

Jo Duniya ne liya usey tum janey do
Jo Duniya ko tumney kuch diya woh Lamha jee lo

Jo Pal kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Pal kushi ka jiya woh Pal jee lo

[Diggaj_Dave]

Namaskar sukanya ji

Bohat achi rachna apki...ye baat sabhi samjh le to kitna acha ho

shukriya itni khoobsurat inspirational rachna likhne aur hamare saath share karne k liye

take care


Diggaj

Originally posted by sukanya
Namaskar

Aap sabhi ki prerna se ek aur inspirational Rachna likhi hay.Asha karungi ki aapko ashaon ki kirnon se bhari yeh Rachna pasand aayegi......

Jo Waqt kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Waqt Abhi baki hay usey tum jee lo

Jo Lamha Ashqon mein kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Lamha kushi ka pal de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Pathghad pattey jhulsa gaya usey tum janey do
Jo Basant naye phuul de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Aandhi chaley gayi usey tum janey do
Jo Barish Mitti ki khushboo de gayi usey tum jee lo

Jo Andhera Ashaon ki kirney le gaya usey tum janey do
Jo Pal Ashaon ka sawera de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Jeevan vyarth kiya usey tum janey do
Jo Jeevan ko Arth diya hay woh Lamha jee lo

Jo Duniya ne liya usey tum janey do
Jo Duniya ko tumney kuch diya woh Lamha jee lo

Jo Pal kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Pal kushi ka jiya woh Pal jee lo

[Rohin]

Originally posted by sukanya
Namaskar

Aap sabhi ki prerna se ek aur inspirational Rachna likhi hay.Asha karungi ki aapko ashaon ki kirnon se bhari yeh Rachna pasand aayegi......

Jo Waqt kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Waqt Abhi baki hay usey tum jee lo

Jo Lamha Ashqon mein kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Lamha kushi ka pal de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Pathghad pattey jhulsa gaya usey tum janey do
Jo Basant naye phuul de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Aandhi chaley gayi usey tum janey do
Jo Barish Mitti ki khushboo de gayi usey tum jee lo

Jo Andhera Ashaon ki kirney le gaya usey tum janey do
Jo Pal Ashaon ka sawera de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Jeevan vyarth kiya usey tum janey do
Jo Jeevan ko Arth diya woh Lamha jee lo

Jo Duniya ne liya usey tum janey do
Jo Duniya ko tumney kuch diya woh Lamha jee lo

Jo Pal kho diya usey tum janey do
Jo Pal kushi ka jiya woh Pal jee lo

Hi Sukanya di,

Very Very nice... yes it is truly inspiring and each and every word of it so correct...

Optimism... is the best way forward...

I liked it very much...

Keep Writing
Take Care
Urs Rohin

[Parastaar]

Waah kya khuub likha hai Sukanya ji...

Jo Aandhi chaley gayi usey tum janey do
Jo Barish Mitti ki khushboo de gayi usey tum jee lo


yeh panktiyaan duur khoya ek manzar yaad dila gayin...barish ke baad mitti ki saundhi si khushboo ik pyaara sa ehsaas dila gayi...aasha ki kiran ka paigaam le kar aaya hai apka yeh kalaam...

[Pulkit_gupta]

Andhera Ashaon ki kirney le gaya usey tum janey do
Jo Pal Ashaon ka sawera de gaya usey tum jee lo

Jo Jeevan vyarth kiya usey tum janey do
Jo Jeevan ko Arth diya woh Lamha jee lo


Didi,

Kaafi inspiring likha hai aapne.. really positively jeena seekhlen to sab apne aap accha ho jaata hai... really well expressed... meri daad kubool kijiyega...aise hi likhti rahiye... apna khayal rakhiyega...

ek song ki line yaad aati hai...

Jugnuon se bhar lo aanchal, beet jaaye kahin naa yeh pal
kal jo hoga dekh lenge kal....

dil ke kareeb paata hoon is ehsaas ko...

[roshani]

my dearest di,
how are u?hope in best of ur health n very fine spirits. a very positive thought n expressed in a beautiful way. in life sumtimes u feel so low n everything around seems negative, sumtimes we regret to wat happened, sumtimes we are worried about our future and in all this mess up we forget to live in present,and forget to feel happy for small small things tht cud be a reason of our smile. a beautifull creation written by u n sach mein it gives u strength to face the situations boldly. sumtimes sum words help u lead ur life in a better way n today ur thought brought a smile on my face n yes i cud learn so much today frm this. thx for making everyones path radiant by sharing it with all of us here. ur words brought a smile on my face. a very inspiring note written by a wonderfull writer, whoes creations reflects hw clear hearted u are. i love this one di. thx so much for making my day. take care n do keep penning down ur thoughts ahead too n keep sharing amaong us. ur presence here means a lot to me atleast. god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs roshani

[Kanchan]

Sukanya Ji
aaj aapko pada to dil kush ho giya. ek hosla deti hui aapki panktiya bohat achi lagi. isi tarh liktey rahyega or hume padatey rahyega.
Shukriya

Kanchan

[sukanya]

Namaskar Diggaj

Shukriya ki tumhey mere Ashaon ki kirnon wali Rachna pasand aayi....pehle baar tumhara reply apni post par dekha..thanks for reading......agar sabhi Zindagi ko Ashaon ki kirnon se dekhain phir gum kahan ho isliye mainey likha hay

Jo Jeevan vyarth kiya usey tum janey do
Jo Jeevan ko Arth diya woh Lamha jee lo

Thanks for reading

Sada kush Raho

[sukanya]

Hello Rohin

Optimism is the way forward...........Yes that is really a way forward.....shayad yahi optimism sabki Ankhon mein dekhna chahti thi that's Why I wrote this Poetry......u liked it...bahut acha laga.....chalo mere koshish kaam aayi optimism ki kirney sabtak pahunchaney ke liye.....bahut kushi hui

Thanks for reading
Take care
Di

[sukanya]

Waah kya khuub likha hai Sukanya ji...

Jo Aandhi chaley gayi usey tum janey do
Jo Barish Mitti ki khushboo de gayi usey tum jee lo

yeh panktiyaan duur khoya ek manzar yaad dila gayin...barish ke baad mitti ki saundhi si khushboo ik pyaara sa ehsaas dila gayi...aasha ki kiran ka paigaam le kar aaya hai apka yeh kalaam...

Namaskar Paras Ji

Aapki Waah mere liye hamesha hi bahut khaas rahi hay......Aapko jo panktiyaan pasand aayi woh mughey bhi bahut achi lagti hain.....Aandhi ke baad jo barish aati hay woh dhara ko ek saundhi si kushboo de jati hay.......Aur Zindagi mein aaye kuch Aandhiyan jeeney ki raah dikhati hain......Thanks for encouraging.

Take care

[sukanya]

Didi,

Kaafi inspiring likha hai aapne.. really positively jeena seekhlen to sab apne aap accha ho jaata hai... really well expressed... meri daad kubool kijiyega...aise hi likhti rahiye... apna khayal rakhiyega...

ek song ki line yaad aati hai...

Jugnuon se bhar lo aanchal, beet jaaye kahin naa yeh pal
kal jo hoga dekh lenge kal....

dil ke kareeb paata hoon is ehsaas ko...

Hello Pulkit

Tumhey acha lagi mere Rachna Pulkit.....thanks ....haan agar positively jeena seekh lein to sab kuch apney aap hi acha ho jata hay...thanks for the daad...song ki lines khoobsurat hay...par mainey yeh song suna nahin....Thanks for encouraging brother.

Take Care
Di

[sukanya]

Hello Roshani

I made ur day and gave u a smile ...chalo yeh sunkar mere chehre par bhi muskaan aa gayi.....Roshani tumney to kuch jyada tareef kar di apni di ki.. My presence means alot to you....thanks roshani..Tumhey Acha laga sunkar acha laga....

Take care
Di

[sukanya]

Namaskar Kanchan Ji

Aap ko mere hosla dete panktiyaan achi lagi....Aapke reply ne ek hosla mughey bhi de diya...to write something Inspirational in future too......Koshish karungi aagey bhi Inspirational Poetry likhney ki...aap hosla daingey to Zaruur likhungi yuun hi

Shukriya