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Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai -
5th February 2015, 05:01 PM
MohabbatoN ki kahaniyaN, wo baankpan wo jawaniyaN
SaheliyoN ki toliyaaN, wo koyaloN ki boliyaaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Bin baat ke yuN rooThna, aur sabab mujh se poochhna
Wo shokhiyaN wo talkhiyaN, wo khoobsurat ghalatiyaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Sab jaankar bhi na samajhna, baarikiyoN meiN ulajhna
Haya se laboN ka kaanpna, khiDki se aksar jhaankna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Wo gaisuoN ko sanwaarna, mujhe baar-ha pukaarna
Bulaane pe phir sochna, kabhi haath pakad ke rokna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Titli ke peechhe dauDna, mujhe dekh naqaab oDhna
Wo dabi zubaaN meiN bolna, ghabra ke kuchh tatolna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Wo bandisheiN-o-riwayateiN, DushwaariyaN, rukaawateiN,
Wo shikwe aur shikayateiN, sab heelay aur hikayateiN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Sagar Aashna
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Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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6th February 2015, 10:57 AM
waahhh Sagar saahab........... kya likh diyaa uffffff
madhoshiyaan raanaaiyaan, deewaangee aawaargee.... kyaa kyaa na nazar aa gayaa aapki is nazm me...... dil baag baag ho uthaa hai janaab... aur dil se hazaaron daad aur duaaen nikal rahii hain aapki is haseen peshkash par..... nacheez ki daad qubool kijiyegaa..... likhte rahiyegaa......
Shaad....
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6th February 2015, 11:09 AM
waaaaah .. kia kehny .. Sagar Aashna saahab..
bohat khoob..
daad hii daad ..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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6th February 2015, 04:02 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
waahhh Sagar saahab........... kya likh diyaa uffffff
madhoshiyaan raanaaiyaan, deewaangee aawaargee.... kyaa kyaa na nazar aa gayaa aapki is nazm me...... dil baag baag ho uthaa hai janaab... aur dil se hazaaron daad aur duaaen nikal rahii hain aapki is haseen peshkash par..... nacheez ki daad qubool kijiyegaa..... likhte rahiyegaa......
Shaad....
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Shaad bhai, adaab !
Nawazish keliye tah-e-dil se shukriya jenab.
Aapki suhbat ka asar hai jo bhi Thoda bahot likh rahe haiN. Aur aap tehseen se nawazte haiN toh yaqeenan hausla baDhta hai.
saath banaye rakhiyegaa.
Sagar Aashna
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6th February 2015, 04:08 PM
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waaaaah .. kia kehny .. Sagar Aashna saahab..
bohat khoob..
daad hii daad ..
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Hassan Saahab, Adaab-o-tasleemat !
Aapne apne qeemti waqt se kuchh lamhaat mere liye sarf kiye uskeliye maiN mashkoor-o-mamnoon rahuNgaa.
Aap jaise sho'ra se jab aise ilfaaz milte haiN to sach maaniye bohot masarrat hoti hai.
Aainda keliye bhi saaTh ka talabgaar rahuNgaa.
DuaoN ke saaTh,
aapka khair andesh
Sagar Aashna
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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6th February 2015, 04:36 PM
ahchi nazm hui hai saagar saahib, bas dua rahegi ki aage bhi aapke kalam se aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheN....
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6th February 2015, 07:49 PM
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ahchi nazm hui hai saagar saahib, bas dua rahegi ki aage bhi aapke kalam se aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheN....
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Shukriya Taish saahab.
Aapki duayeiN saath rahein to koshish jaari rahegii kuchh aur achha likhne ki.
Saath dete rahiyega, hausla baDhate rahiyega.
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9th February 2015, 08:31 PM
Waah...kya kahne sagar ji...bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaason se saji.nazm.....
kai baar padne ko dil kiya...bahut mubarak...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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12th February 2015, 09:15 AM
bahut khoob bahut khoob..
ehsaaso ka itna sajiv chitran..!!
apki is peshkash ko padhkar bs itna hi kehna chahunga ki..
SHAYRI.COM ko ek or UMDAAH Shayar mil gaya hai..
daad hi daad..
likte rahe..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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13th February 2015, 08:12 PM
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Waah...kya kahne sagar ji...bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaason se saji.nazm.....
kai baar padne ko dil kiya...bahut mubarak...
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Bahot bahot shukriya Madhu ji aapki iss daryadili keliye.
Hausla baDhate rahiyega.
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15th February 2015, 02:16 PM
Lajawaab sagar bhai....khush rahain...Raj
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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18th February 2015, 05:26 PM
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bahut khoob bahut khoob..
ehsaaso ka itna sajiv chitran..!!
apki is peshkash ko padhkar bs itna hi kehna chahunga ki..
SHAYRI.COM ko ek or UMDAAH Shayar mil gaya hai..
daad hi daad..
likte rahe..
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Bahot bahot shukriya tabaah saaHb itni hausla afzaayi keliye.
Yunhi saath dete raheiN.
Sagar Aashna
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18th February 2015, 05:30 PM
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Lajawaab sagar bhai....khush rahain...Raj
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Nawazish Rajveer ji.
Tah-e-dil se shukriya.
Sagar Aashna
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18th February 2015, 11:43 PM
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MohabbatoN ki kahaniyaN, wo baankpan wo jawaniyaN
SaheliyoN ki toliyaaN, wo koyaloN ki boliyaaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Bin baat ke yuN rooThna, aur sabab mujh se poochhna
Wo shokhiyaN wo talkhiyaN, wo khoobsurat ghalatiyaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Sab jaankar bhi na samajhna, baarikiyoN meiN ulajhna
Haya se laboN ka kaanpna, khiDki se aksar jhaankna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Wo gaisuoN ko sanwaarna, mujhe baar-ha pukaarna
Bulaane pe phir sochna, kabhi haath pakad ke rokna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Titli ke peechhe dauDna, mujhe dekh naqaab oDhna
Wo dabi zubaaN meiN bolna, ghabra ke kuchh tatolna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Wo bandisheiN-o-riwayateiN, DushwaariyaN, rukaawateiN,
Wo shikwe aur shikayateiN, sab heelay aur hikayateiN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
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Bahut khoob janaab behad lutf aaya bhai aapki yeh nazm ek haseen khwaab ki tarah band aankhon se halki muskurhatein deti chali gayi...yunhi mehfil lootiYeGaa hamesha
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20th February 2015, 09:21 PM
Jagdish bhai ,
Apke karvan ke saath chalte chalte humne aap ke sare ehsaason ko dheere dheere
mehsoos kiya , aur dil se bus yehi NIkla ...
Yeh dil ye pagal dil mera kyun bujh gaya Awaargee.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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27th February 2015, 05:01 PM
bohat khoob bht ache ahsasaat hain
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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27th February 2015, 11:24 PM
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Bahut khoob janaab behad lutf aaya bhai aapki yeh nazm ek haseen khwaab ki tarah band aankhon se halki muskurhatein deti chali gayi...yunhi mehfil lootiYeGaa hamesha
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Bahot bahot shukriya janaab.
Aapki nigaah-e-karam bani rahe to hum koshaaN rahengae issi raah par.
Sagar Aashna
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27th February 2015, 11:28 PM
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Jagdish bhai ,
Apke karvan ke saath chalte chalte humne aap ke sare ehsaason ko dheere dheere
mehsoos kiya , aur dil se bus yehi NIkla ...
Yeh dil ye pagal dil mera kyun bujh gaya Awaargee.
Sanjay Sehgal
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Sehgal Saahb, abhi aapke dil ka surya uday hua hai.. Shayar ka dil kabhi nahi bujh sakta.
Aur yeh to mere guzre kal ke khayalaat haiN, jo shayad aapke kal meiN thay
Aate rahiye, Haath pakad chalate rahiye.
Regards
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27th February 2015, 11:31 PM
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bohat khoob bht ache ahsasaat hain
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Bohot bohot Shukriyaa
Yunhi hausla afzaayii karte rahiyega.
Khair andesh
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