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3rd September 2006, 09:22 PM
Zindagi me kuch paane ke liye kuch khona padta hi hai.. yehi reet hai... par jab ye sach me hota hai to dil kitna rota hai... ek chain ka lamha paane ko na jaane kya kya khona padta hai.. aur agar mann yeh soche ki chalo jo kho raha hai use paate hain... to chain kho jaata hai....
 Isi kashmakash me kuch likha hai... umeed hia aap sab ko pasand aayega.... Yeh dil kabhi kisi ke bas me nahi hota.. sab kuch paane ki chaah humesha rehti hai iske andar.. aur jab kuch nahi milta to yeh bahad rota hai.... Kuch beeTe lamhe jab lauT ke aaTe hain.. Gam ke saaye saaTh me laaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... Apni duniya ko aaj bhi khwaabon se sajaaTe hain.. Aankh khulTe hi yeh sab bhi TooT jaaTe hain.. JaanTe hain na sach hoga abhi koi sapna humara.. Phir bhi aankhon me woh sunehre sapne sajaaTe hain... Khal rahi hai yeh doori... chalo ab hum lauT aaTe hain.. EK pal bhi na Tumhare bina hum khushi se jee paaTe hain.. Par kubool na hoga humara milan fir se is zaalim duniya ko.. Bas yahi soch kar fir "ChaahaT" ke kadam khud hi ruk jaaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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3rd September 2006, 09:29 PM
Kuch beeTe lamhe jab lauT ke aaTe hain..
Gam ke saaye saaTh me laaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... Apni duniya ko aaj bhi khwaabon se sajaaTe hain.. Aankh khulTe hi yeh sab bhi TooT jaaTe hain.. JaanTe hain na sach hoga abhi koi sapna humara.. Phir bhi aankhon me woh sunehre sapne sajaaTe hain... Khal rahi hai yeh doori... chalo ab hum lauT aaTe hain.. EK pal bhi na Tumhare bina hum khushi se jee paaTe hain.. Par kubool na hoga humara milan fir se is zaalim duniya ko.. Bas yahi soch kar fir "ChaahaT" ke kadam khud hi ruk jaaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... ~Priya hi priya kaisi ho tumhari ye peshkas k bare me kya kahu har bar ki tarha ye bhi bhaot hi pyaari aur bhot hia achhi peshkas hai mujhe bahot pasand aaya aur acha ;laga padhke aapka dost dhaval |
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3rd September 2006, 11:41 PM
Kuch beeTe lamhe jab lauT ke aaTe hain..
Gam ke saaye saaTh me laaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... Hmmmm..... Beete hue khoobusrat pal aksar aankhen bhigo hi dete hain.... Apni duniya ko aaj bhi khwaabon se sajaaTe hain.. Aankh khulTe hi yeh sab bhi TooT jaaTe hain.. JaanTe hain na sach hoga abhi koi sapna humara.. Phir bhi aankhon me woh sunehre sapne sajaaTe hain... Sapne hi naa honge to jeene k koi arth hi nahi rahega behna... Sapne sajana bhi zaroori hai.... Khal rahi hai yeh doori... chalo ab hum lauT aaTe hain.. EK pal bhi na Tumhare bina hum khushi se jee paaTe hain.. Par kubool na hoga humara milan fir se is zaalim duniya ko.. Bas yahi soch kar fir "ChaahaT" ke kadam khud hi ruk jaaTe hain.. bahut dard hai in aashaar me... Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... Dear Priya, Apne dard ko lafzon ka roop bahut acche se deti ho tum... Kaafi kareeb se mehsoos hota hai tumhaara dard.... Khush raha karo... apna khayal rakho....... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... -
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har ek lafz dard main dooba hua hai, har lafz khud hi apna dard bayan kar raha hai....... esa lagta hai ye kalam mere aas-paas hi ghoom raha hai........... bahut badiya..... kamal ka likha hai aapne keep it up meri badhai aap dil se sweekar karo dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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4th September 2006, 09:15 AM
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Aapko mera likha pasand aaya jaan ke bahut khushi hui... Aap yunhi saath dete rahenge to likhne ki koshish barkaraar rahegi... Aap humesha khush rahein.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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4th September 2006, 09:18 AM
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Dard apna ho ya kisi aur ka.. meshsoos ek sa hi hota hai... Aapne mere ehsaas ko samjha.. bahut khushi hui.. Aapki hounsla afzaai aur duaaon ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.. Aap bhi humesha khush rahein yehi dua hai meri.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Gar dard na hota to shaayad yeh nazm bhi yahan na hoti... khair.. aapko pasand aaya jaan ke behad khushi hui.. Aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Re: Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... -
8th September 2006, 11:08 AM
Kuch beeTe lamhe jab lauT ke aaTe hain..
Gam ke saaye saaTh me laaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... Apni duniya ko aaj bhi khwaabon se sajaaTe hain.. Aankh khulTe hi yeh sab bhi TooT jaaTe hain.. JaanTe hain na sach hoga abhi koi sapna humara.. Phir bhi aankhon me woh sunehre sapne sajaaTe hain... Khal rahi hai yeh doori... chalo ab hum lauT aaTe hain.. EK pal bhi na Tumhare bina hum khushi se jee paaTe hain.. Par kubool na hoga humara milan fir se is zaalim duniya ko.. Bas yahi soch kar fir "ChaahaT" ke kadam khud hi ruk jaaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain...[/b][/COLOR] ~Priya [/B][/QUOTE] priya sachi mai maine to esko dekha hai nahi, agar tum na batati to yeh meri nazar se rah jatta. priya ab mai kaya kahu upper sabhi ne kaha hai ki bahut dard hai es main. mai to bas yehi dua karti hu ki dard khatam ho jaye aur eski jagah hamari priya pyar ke, kushi ke taraney likhney lagey, par patta nahi yeh dua kab kabool hogi. ek geet ka mukhra tumharey liye likhna chahti hu: kab tak dillo ko andherey chaleygey, udhasi bharey din kabhi to dhaleygey, kitney bhi ho tej hawa ke yeh jonkey, jo tum se hai bichdey woh kal phir mileygey............! kush raha karo.....! tumhari didi  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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8th September 2006, 01:18 PM
Kuch beeTe lamhe jab lauT ke aaTe hain..
Gam ke saaye saaTh me laaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... Apni duniya ko aaj bhi khwaabon se sajaaTe hain.. Aankh khulTe hi yeh sab bhi TooT jaaTe hain.. JaanTe hain na sach hoga abhi koi sapna humara.. Phir bhi aankhon me woh sunehre sapne sajaaTe hain... Khal rahi hai yeh doori... chalo ab hum lauT aaTe hain.. EK pal bhi na Tumhare bina hum khushi se jee paaTe hain.. Par kubool na hoga humara milan fir se is zaalim duniya ko.. Bas yahi soch kar fir "ChaahaT" ke kadam khud hi ruk jaaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... priya ji appko raj ka tahe dil se parnaam.....appki nazam parhi parh kar laga ki jaise seene se dil nikala ja raha ho.....bhut he purkashish rachna hai......yu he likhti rehna.....meri dil se daad kabool karna....take care......raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Dekha aapne yahan aake kya kar diya.................... ................................................. mere chehre pe muskaan saja di......... Yun hi humesha saath rehna... aur aap bhi apna khayal rakhna... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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10th September 2006, 12:41 AM
kya hum kuch kehne ki gustakhi kar sakte hain....
har aankh yahan yu to bahut roti hai, har boond magar ashq nahi hoti hai, par dekh ke ro de jo zamane ka gum, us aankh se aansoo jo gire moti hai.............. tkcr neha |
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10th September 2006, 02:17 PM
DEAR PRIYA,
badi der se nazar padi aapke is haseen kalam par.no doubt apki har peshkash lajawaab hoti hai,par yeh to kamaaal kargaya.bahut pasand aaya mujhe. Khal rahi hai yeh doori... chalo ab hum lauT aaTe hain.. EK pal bhi na Tumhare bina hum khushi se jee paaTe hain.. Par kubool na hoga humara milan fir se is zaalim duniya ko.. Bas yahi soch kar fir "ChaahaT" ke kadam khud hi ruk jaaTe hain.. bahut sahi kaha aapne likhti rahiye yunhin. tc. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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12th September 2006, 03:47 AM
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Itni deri se jawab dene ke liye maafi chaahti hun.. bas yunhi kuch kaamon me masroof rahi.. Aapko meri rachna pasand aayi jaan ke bahut khushi hui.. Yunhi aate rahiye.. take care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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12th September 2006, 03:48 AM
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Bahut hi sundar sher likha hai aapne.. Take Care... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th September 2006, 07:45 AM
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Tumhe yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui........ Tumhe meri rachna pasand aayi.. isse achi aur kya baat ho sakti hain.. apna khayal rakhna.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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4th January 2009, 07:12 PM
Kuch beeTe lamhe jab lauT ke aaTe hain..
Gam ke saaye saaTh me laaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... DIL KO CHU JAANE WAALE EHSAAS HAIN PRIYA JEE....BAHUT DARD HAI IS GHAZAL KE HAR LAFZ ME.....DIL SE DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE...YUHI LIKHTI RAHIYE... ZAINY Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th January 2009, 09:07 AM
behad khoob gudiya....aacha laga tumhara likha hua....ek arse baad kuch yaadein taaza ho gayi
likhti raho -tumhara apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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7th January 2009, 04:27 PM
Thankyou Zainy ji..
Thankyou Bhaiya.. aapko yahan dekh ke bahut acha laga.......... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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7th January 2009, 04:37 PM
Kuch beeTe lamhe jab lauT ke aaTe hain..
Gam ke saaye saaTh me laaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain... Apni duniya ko aaj bhi khwaabon se sajaaTe hain.. Aankh khulTe hi yeh sab bhi TooT jaaTe hain.. JaanTe hain na sach hoga abhi koi sapna humara.. Phir bhi aankhon me woh sunehre sapne sajaaTe hain... Khal rahi hai yeh doori... chalo ab hum lauT aaTe hain.. EK pal bhi na Tumhare bina hum khushi se jee paaTe hain.. Par kubool na hoga humara milan fir se is zaalim duniya ko.. Bas yahi soch kar fir "ChaahaT" ke kadam khud hi ruk jaaTe hain.. Hum jiTna bhi chaahe aaine ke saamne mukuraana.. Na jaane aansoon kahan se aankhon me bhar aaTe hain apke in shabado me bhut dard bhara hai woh akele chal diye hum khare reh gaye, har bar ki tarah asnu aaj bhi beh gaye, hum ne yaad kia unhen har lamha, unhone hass k keh diya, yaad kia sab ko magar bus tum he reh gaye Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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