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3rd June 2005, 05:29 PM
Doston
Aap sab ki nazr yeh nacheez kaawish. Dil ki barbaadi ka maatem ; kaise ho Shorishon ka saaz madhem ; kaise ho Abr-e-rehmat ab umand ker aa bhi jaa Hem bhi hoan mamnoon-e-shabnem ; kaise ho Zindagi ek roag ben ke reh gaee Yeh roag ho jaaye khatem ; kaise ho Mein ne yeh chaha hansoon mein bhi mager Aankh meri ho gaee nem; kaise ho Aadmiyet ro rahi hai ey mushi Aur begaana rahein hem ; kaise ho musharrafhusain |
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3rd June 2005, 05:42 PM
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Mushi sir... achhe vichaar hai sabka ek jawab.. dil aur dimaag ko ek jagah karane ke baad jo khayaal sahi ubhare wohi aapke sawaalo ka jawab de paayenge.. kuchh galat bola ho to muaafi chahati hoon.. actually abhi abhi topic discuss kar rahi thi to mere paas bhi vichaaro ki daud hai.. aur har baat ko ek alag nazariye se dekh rahi hoon.. isliye itna bol gayi.. Garima |
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4th June 2005, 09:30 AM
Mushi Dost.....
kalaam ki ghraai aur dard bhra ehsaas......bahut aacha likha hai aapne..... har ubharte swaal ka jawab bhi hai....bus lekin kaise ho...... aaj kaafi dinon ke baad aapka likha kutch padne ko mila..... yunhi likhte rahiye..... aapka dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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bahot dard hai |
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4th June 2005, 01:10 PM
MERE MUSHI DOST
kun itna dard hai sine main jaise har ek shabd se tapak raha hai jaise, kun mare bhi ek sawal apke itne sawalo ke saath juda hua hai. take care.EVEY DARK CLOUD HAS A SILVER LINE. |
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4th June 2005, 02:04 PM
Dil ki barbaadi ka maatem ; kaise ho
Shorishon ka saaz madhem ; kaise ho Abr-e-rehmat ab umand ker aa bhi jaa Hem bhi hoan mamnoon-e-shabnem ; kaise ho WaaaaaaH.. bahut khoob likha hai bhai! Zindagi ek roag ben ke reh gaee Yeh roag ho jaaye khatem ; kaise ho Mein ne yeh chaha hansoon mein bhi mager Aankh meri ho gaee nem; kaise ho Aadmiyet ro rahi hai ey mushi Aur begaana rahein hem ; kaise ho Beautifullll!! Mushi Bhai! Behad Khoobsurati se aapne apne dil ka dard in lafzon me bayaan kiya hai... Behad asardaar rachna hai bhaii... Mujhe padh behad acchi lagi.... Meri daad kubool kar lijiyega bhai... Yunhi Mehfil sajaate rahiye...Apna pyaar aur aashirwaad humare saath hi rakhiyega.... Khayal rakhiye bhai!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th June 2005, 04:49 PM
mushi bhaiya ...
aapki rachna padhne ke baad aapse pehla sawaal ye ki "KAISE HO"  lol janta huN behtari aapki rahaoN maiN sajde kar rahi hogi .. khair aapne khayal itne gehre likhe haiN ki unhe soch kar insaN kisi dariya main bhi ja baithe to dobe nahi ....bas wah hi wah ... yuN hi apne khayal bikhrate rahiye ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th June 2005, 05:09 PM
Wah....
Aaj yahan aakar aapki post dekhi tau dil khush ho gaya.. Aur jab isko pada.. padta reh gaya!! Bahut khoob Ghazal keh daali aapne.. Har sheyr achha laga.. Dil ki barbaadi ka maatem ; kaise ho Shorishon ka saaz madhem ; kaise ho Wah ..Matla mein khoob wajan daala.. Rabat bhi khoob bithai aapne. Abr-e-rehmat ab umand ker aa bhi jaa Hem bhi hoan mamnoon-e-shabnem ; kaise ho Girahbandi ka koi jawaab nahin aapka. Zindagi ek roag ben ke reh gaee Yeh roag ho jaaye khatem ; kaise ho Simple but powerful Mein ne yeh chaha hansoon mein bhi mager Aankh meri ho gaee nem; kaise ho isse padkar ek baar chahre par muskurahat aa gayi thi.. Aadmiyet ro rahi hai ey mushi Aur begaana rahein hem ; kaise ho Ye makta hi tha jisne hame is ghazal ko baar baar padne pe majboor kiya.. Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob keh gaye aap yahan,..Jitni bhi wah karoon shayad kamm hogi.. Isne fir se Vipin ji ki kami ka ehsaas dilaaya.. Shukriya, Varinder |
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4th June 2005, 09:33 PM
garima
aap ne mere ashaar ko samjha saraha, aap ka shukriyaa. musharrafhusain |
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4th June 2005, 09:36 PM
aman mere dost
aap ne mere ehsaas ko samjha, mehsoos kiyaa, aap ka behad mashkoor hoon. dua go hoon aap ke liye, khush rahein aabaad rahein. musharrafhusain |
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4th June 2005, 09:40 PM
mita meri dost
mein to aap se akser kehta hoon bazabaan e meer. "HEM KO SHAYER NA KAHO MEER KE SAHEB HEM NE" DARD O GHEM KITNE KIYE JAMAA TO DIWAAN KIYA" aap ki mohabbaton ka qarazdaar hoon jo aap dost mere ehsaas ko mere ashaar ko mehsoos kerte hain aur usey sarahte hain. meri dua hai ke hamesha khush rahein aur aabaad rahein. musharrafhusain |
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4th June 2005, 09:44 PM
pulkit mere bhai
aap se mere bhaiyon wala rishta hai, aur aap ki daad ko aap ke khaloos ko mein mehsoos ker sakta hoon. meri dua hai ke aap hamesha khush raho aur zindagi ker her maidaan mein kaamiyaabi haasil karo. musharrafhusain |
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4th June 2005, 09:47 PM
kunal mere bhai
bhai ko bahat dharas hoti hai jab aap jaise mohabbat kerne wale bhai us ki hosla afzaayee kerte hain aur saath dete hain. aap ka khaloos aur aap ki taabedaari mere sir aankhon per hai. aap ka behad shukriya mere bhai. meri duayein apne bhai kunal ke liye. musharrafhusain. |
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4th June 2005, 09:51 PM
verinder mere dost
aap ko yahan dekh ker behad khushi hui hai. aap doston ka saath hi to hai jo hem yahan hain aur aap se apni yeh tooti phooti shaiyri share kerte hain. aap ki daad ka behad mashkoor hoon aur dost aap se hamesha yeh chahoon ga ke is forum per aate raha karein. meri duayein apne dost verinder ke liye. musharrafhusain |
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6th June 2005, 03:36 AM
Mere pyaare mushi bhayyia....
bahut bahut pyaar... Mein ne yeh chaha hansoon mein bhi mager Aankh meri ho gaee nem; kaise ho aapki kavish dard ki lehar see kaund gayi...dil par...itna asardaar likha hai aapne...aankhein nam kyun ho paras ke bhai ki...kabhi na hon...bus yahi dua, yahi prarthna hai bhagwaan se...  gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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7th June 2005, 10:54 AM
paras meri behan
bohat bohat shukriyaa. tum ho to waqaee bhai ki aankhein nem kyun hongi. jug jug jiyo meri behan. musharrafhusain |
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11th June 2005, 12:54 AM
waah.. waah.. waah..
aur kya kahooN... arse baad aisi umda ghazal padhna naseeb hua.. dard-o-soz se labrez.. jitni baar padha kam raha... Dil ki barbaadi ka maatem ; kaise ho Shorishon ka saaz madhem ; kaise ho iss se behtar matlaa aur kya ho sakta hai.. Abr-e-rehmat ab umand ker aa bhi jaa Hem bhi hoan mamnoon-e-shabnem ; kaise ho kise maluum halaat shayar ki soch ko kab kahaaN laa kar khada kar deN.. Zindagi ek roag ben ke reh gaee Yeh roag ho jaaye khatem ; kaise ho har takleef shaayad yahiiN aakar khatm hoti hai... Mein ne yeh chaha hansoon mein bhi mager Aankh meri ho gaee nem; kaise ho Aadmiyet ro rahi hai ey mushi Aur begaana rahein hem ; kaise ho mai nahi jaanta kyuN.. par in aakhri do sher par mere jazbaat bilkul Varindar bhai k jaise haiN... zara bhi fark nahi.. aakhri sher ne to Vipin saahab ki rachnaayeiN zehan meiN taaza kar diiN... baat insaaniyat ki hoti hai to Vipin saahab yaad aa hi jaate haiN... aur ek sher bhi yaad meiN taaza ho gaya... raah-e-ulfat meiN jidhar ghuzre nishaaN banta gayaa.. har fasaana ek rangiiN daastaaN banta gayaa... (Kaisar Shakeeli saahab) daad dooN to kahiN jazbaat aur lafzoN ki haisiyat kam ho jaaye iska darr hai.. bus itni ghuzaarish hai k yuN hi apne jazbaat aur tazurbe pesh kar humeiN sikhaate rahiye... shukriyaa.. apna khayaal rakhiye... likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye... |
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11th June 2005, 10:18 AM
mere mushi dost,
ek aisa dard jo apna sa lagta hai.. apna khayal rakhiyega. aapki dost meena |
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11th June 2005, 07:07 PM
bedil musafir saheb
aap ne apne khoobsurat tarz e takallum se meri is nacheez kaawish ko bari izzat bakhshi hai, mein behad mamnoon o mashkoor hoon aap ka. meri dua hai ke aap hamesha khush rahein, aabaad rahein. musharrafhusain |
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11th June 2005, 07:09 PM
meena meri dost
aap ne mere ehsaasaat ko samjha, aur saraha . yeh apna pan hai aap ka. meri dua hai ke hamesha khush rahein aur abaad rahein. musharrafhusain |
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12th June 2005, 02:36 PM
Mere Azeez Mushi Bhai. Asslam-o-alaikum.
U r one of the most respected and prominant writers here who understand and feel the psychy of pain deep inside. U have put the very essance of pain in ur words in this thread.... I think...... aarzu-e-barbad inteha to abhi baki hei laash to ban chuke, dabna to abhi baki hei shamma-e-farz jalata hun magar khud se dhokha to abhi baki hei zara si chot ka karun kya gam zakhm-e-nasoor mera sathi hei Intezaam-e-maut kar chuka hun sush Ilzaam-e-zindagi to baki hei Khuda Hafiz & Warm Regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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12th June 2005, 08:25 PM
Musharraf Bhai ..
Kaise haiN aap ! ummeed karta huN zindgi itminaan ke sath chal rahi hogi .. Zindagi ek roag ben ke reh gaee Yeh roag ho jaaye khatem ; kaise ho ye behad badnasibi ki baat hai ki khuda ki dee gayi sabse khoobsorat nemat hi kabhi kabhi hume bojh nazar aane lagti hai .. aur fir wahi naa jawabi ka sawal .. ??? khair tareef ki zaroorat nahi aapse har baar aisi hi ummeed rahti hai khud ko salamat rakhiye |
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13th June 2005, 11:00 AM
Bhai dard e sush
Aap ki izzat afzaayee ke mein behad qader kerta hoon. Aap ka behad shukriyaa ke aap ne meri is choti si kaawish ko samjha aur saraha. Aap jaise achchay dost aur bhai hi is forum per mohabbat bikherte hain. Ek baar phir aap ka shukriyaa. Meri dua hai ke aap khush rahein , aabaad rahein. musharrafhusain |
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13th June 2005, 11:02 AM
kshitz mere bhai
aap ka behad shukr guzaar hoon . aap ki mohabbatein aur pyaar hi hai jo hem yahah kuch keh paate hain. meri duayein hamesha apne bhai kshitz ke liye. musharrafhusain |
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