[B]wahhhh bohat khoob Zainy sahiba
har ek misra dil ko chhoo gaya aise hi behtareen kalaamo se mehfil ki ronaq badate rahiye dil se dhero daad qubool ki jiye
Waise mujhe shyari ka elm to nahi hai bohat nadaan hu main lekin yaha k sabhi post padne k bad ek adna si raay Dena chahta hu
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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL
Zainy JI.....!
Main Aapka Mashkoor HUn Jo Aap Ne
Meri Adnaa Tajaaweez Ko Pasand
Kia,
Aap Ne Maqta Ke Baray Me Jo Kaha,
Us Lehaaz Se Yahan Qafia "SAARI"
Nahi Aaye Ga, Aur " SAARAY" Hee
Theak Ho Ga, Magar................ Is
Tarah Ye Hum Qaafia Nahi Rahay Ga,
Aap Ko Ye Misra Zaruuuuuuuuur
Tabdeel Karna Ho Ga,.... Main BHi Is
Ka Mutabdal Sochta HUn , Aur Aap
Bhi Sochiye.......
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is par gor kar k mere zehan me kuch is tarha Aa raha tha jo yaha likh raha hu
gustakhi ki maafi chahta hu
1)
Chupaogi kaisay mohabbat ko "Zainy"
Kahe raaz-e-ulfat yeh aakheiN hamaari
2)
Chupaogi kaisay mohabbat ko "Zainy"
kahe raaz-e-ulfat jo aakheN hamaari
Main shakil sahab ki baat par tawajah dete hue mahaz lafz "SAARI" ko hatane ki koshish kee hai ummeed hai aap naraaz nahi hogi